• Member Since 19th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Yesterday

Armalite


I'm eighteen, I'm in OPP, I live the thug life, I smoke weed every day, I don't take shit from nobody, and I write fanfiction for a show about magical ponies.

Comments ( 112 )

AND now for my real comment somewhat complex but still great to see you have imagination :ajsmug: I can't what to see your next move.

This is AWESOME. And the Gorillaz kick ass! :pinkiehappy:

AND THEN SPIKE BRUNS EVERTHING TO THE GROUND MAHAHAHHA

but no really its a good read.

Finally, a proper Aliens crossover.:eeyup:

*sees aliens*
Oooo... :rainbowderp:
*reads discription*
Sweeet... :moustache:
*likes*
alright, lets read this! :trixieshiftleft:
*begins*

VX

Please dont kill fluttershy PLEASE :fluttercry:

*or the main six*

Alright, done and done.

The only advise advise I can give you is to double space your paragraphs, it makes things a little bit easier to go through.

Twilight killed something?:twilightoops:

Heck Yeah:flutterrage:

VX

favoriting, thumbing up LOL

aw damn it, i was gonna do something like this! there goes Ponies vs Aliens, down the toilet.:ajsleepy::raritycry::fluttercry::applecry::facehoof::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

Im not saying it was aliens, but it was aliens

just the shear amount of violence and death I foresee will make this great

Yes! A decent Alien/MLP crossover! Have these chestburster flavored xeno-cupcakes!

OHHH SHIT!!! Things gonna go down but I like this so far. You have a watcher (\:eeyup:/)

518359 Sorry man, but I've been thinking of this idea for a while now. And who knows, maybe you can do another crossover?

517878 Don't worry, I've got some plans for them:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

519075 i'm better now. i realised my variation will be abit differnet from yours though. though it'll take time for me to fell better about you beating me to an Aliens in Equestia crossover.

lol i saw the title and was like BUCK YES! :pinkiehappy:

Larsen! Can you read me!? Larsen! LAAAARSEEEEN!
Also, this is awesomesauce!
I can´t wait to see what else gets teleported.

519461 Oh, there'll be loads-a-stuff being teleported, including a few choice people!:ajsmug:

Yea, the Aliens crossover i've had planned for a while is a bit of a reverse of this to be honest.
Mine is a 'pony goes THERE', instead of this one, which is a 'they come HERE'. :pinkiecrazy:

...mine consists of pinkie aiding and assisting in the story line of the second movie; Aliens. :pinkiehappy:

Aaaaaahhhhh shit gettin real

VX

Luv it, keep continuining

Awesome, keep up the good work man.

This story rocks! I can't wait to see how it plays out!

Damn, that dream. Also, nice build-up you doing there rather than going like: "WELL HURP DURP ALIENS IN EQUESTRIA!".

Oooo!
I can't WAIT to sink my Omnivorous teeth into the next chapter! Oh, and by the way, there were several wrong words here and there. There wasn't really anything misspelled, so I'm assuming you're either REALLY good at spelling, or you have spellcheck, which would explain the wrong words.
-
Hudson pumped three rounds into the group, before turning and sprinting down the hallway. “Run!” Hudson screamed to himself as he heard the bastards take chase.

That shoudl be 'gave' chase, not 'take'. Just trying to help. ^_^
-
That was only one of I tihnk three, the other being you wrote 'to' instead of 'too'. That's a fairly common mistake, so no worries. None of them actual hurt the story or caused confusion, so it's not really a biggie.

529764 Yeah, I write in open office, and the take and not gave was just a product of my speed.:twilightsheepish: Thanks for pointing that out, and I like to thing that I have good spelling, but spell check really halps!:rainbowlaugh:

529255 Well, I do that to add plot, and so you'll have a greater impact as I brutally kill them.:ajsmug: You never know who's next!:twilightsmile:

531031 You are one of the sickest people that has ever lived. But your story makes up for it.:pinkiecrazy:

I can foresee Discord being a good guy in this story, because dead ponies are boring. Also Discord v. Aliens sounds like good times.

I hope Princess Celestia and Luna will live.

damn now i have the feeling to go play AVP :derpytongue2: cool story by the way bro:moustache:

Damn, looks like the only way this can be stopped before it gets worse would be to kill Twilight so the spell stops but I doubt that will happen. Also, I am against killing Twilight.

VX

FINALLY i was waiting when SOMEONE was gonna come to equestria

*whats scary is i thought the same guy wouldve come*

547764 It was a choice between Hudson and Reed, and I think Hudson still has some things to take care of on LV-426. :raritywink:

This story just keeps getting better :pinkiehappy:

Get Hudson in Equestria next - after his business in LV-426 is done, and make it fast. :pinkiehappy:

Hopefully he didn't collapse on the xeno-fuck. Yay for intense scene before arriving in Equestria.

554555 I hope I got Hudson's character right. For plot reasons, I had to make him a little more willing to do shit, and not just sit around and mope. I can see him doing this though. 2 weeks until retirement, and he HATES these aliens. He's gonna do the best he can, but that doesn't mean he's gonna like doing it.

554973:pinkiegasp: You HAVE to go watch it. That and the first one, Alien. They are two of the greatest films of all time! Great acting, great plot, and great action!

555068 Alien 3 was good,but not as good as the first two, and pretty much every fan of the series likes to pretend that Ressurection never existed.

Y1

I love that Hudson survives in this and how he's now pretty bad ass. I love the aliens movies (1 and 2, after that they kinda sucked) and so far I've enjoyed the Equestrian side of the story (which can generally be characterized by the sentence "dafuq is happening?").
I can't wait till Reed wakes up and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the marines getting in on the action.

haha I hope this is the minimum shit level throuuot the rest of the story if not then prepare

Awesome, just plain awesome. The oncoming conversations will be most interesting to read and i can't wait until i can. Keep up the good work man.

Login or register to comment