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Armalite
I'm eighteen, I'm in OPP, I live the thug life, I smoke weed every day, I don't take shit from nobody, and I write fanfiction for a show about magical ponies.
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I am intrigued. Looking forward to future chapters.
So Equestria is future Earth?
1122101 Sorry, this is a one shot! I will be posting some more stories featuring some other Creepy Pastas though! Not ones like Jeff The Killer, or BEN DROWNED, because those make no sense in a world without technology, however the thing that made Jeff a killer, will be introduced later!
1122190 Yep!
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, it is good otherwise. This story really goes into depth and rises quite a few questions, great job and keep the good work up.
-Didn't look at the complete part- I feel embarassed
1122217 Thanks! I was trying to capture the side of The Rake myth that a lot of people don't know about.
Look out Princess! You gonna get RAKED!
...
I've always wondered why that wasn't a meme yet.
Of all the creepypastas out there, 4 creep me out.
Slenderman
The Rake
Smile.jpg
and The Jester
You hit the one that scares me slightly less than The Jester
MOAR
1122762 Have you read Jeff The Killer? That's a goodie.
this is some quality writing right here! I love these dark stories!
1122795 Thank you Meester Man!
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Yes, that was interesting to read, but Smile.jpg really gets into your head, almost like a Silent Hill game, which is why I put it over Jeff the Killer.
1122909 The problem is, that I can't do Smile Dog or BEN DROWNED because there are no computers in MLP. As for Jeff, the virus, thingie that made him go nuts will play a small role later on in another story.
SO MUCH WIN!!!!1
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Gotcha, though you may be able to do something related to BEN because arcade cabinets are canon, IJS
1123519 They are?
Do you know what episode?
Equestria is future Earth, that's interesting. Can't wait for more stories.
MAKE ONE WITH JEFF!!!! NOW!!!!
..... please? 
1125521 Sorry, but as much as I would love to have Jeff here, it just doesn't fit. However, if you read Jeff again, in the begining, he says how he felt something change inside him when he moved. That town, is going to return, and it's going to be like Derry from It.
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What's the third creature? There's Slenderman, The Rake and... who?
1126884 BOB
1128551
Whelp we're boned.
1128551 Seriously, BOB, is that really the other creature?
I don't really want to know what happens to Celestia, but I just want to know! How is that even possible?! Come on, finish up this one like you did for Slendy, please
1148182 Yep! Some other pastas will be introduced as well. Maybe not the ones you love, but it will have to do with them.
1148915 No, its cool, I don't know much about the creepy pasta thing, except for Slendy and The Rake, what is BOB exactly?
1150830 It doesn't really clarify, it's a short pasta. It does however, mention that BOB, The Rake, and Slender Man, all look somewhat simillar, indicating that they may have been borm, or created together. Go to Creepy Pasta and search up BOB, Jeff the Killer, and BEN DROWNED. BEN DROWNED may be making an appearence at one point, and the thing that made Jeff a killer might show up.
1150841 Just read something on him, he sounds like he's the ugliest out of the three, and the dumbest, Slendy seems condesending and smug, and The Rake seems to be the smartest, or at least more self aware
wow... very creepy and ominous.
Just wondering, though, why does this have a mature rating? Surely, just mentioning killing doesn't warrant a gore warning? 
1150966 Well, it goes into some pretty graphic detail about some stuff, so I put it there just in case.
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The hearts and hooves day episode when the CMC are singing. BTW good work on Slender, I'll have to check this one out when I get the chance.
This is future Earth, so that means that the Human race went extinct? Yeah, no, that's impossible, Humanity is too powerful to die to such things.
They just went to space. I'm always awake at night... The Rake, oh it's always in the backyard.... standing in mah shed.
ILUVIT
1359638 Thanks!
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The Rake will always see you, but you will never see it
how could you do this!
the rake stll haunts my dreams
This chapter begs the question, who is the third member of the trio?
also, one minor nitpick, the plural of millenium is millenia.
Who is this third character?
2897342 B.O.B
1122944 Can't do Smile dog in a MLP fic? CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
2914779 Go for it man!
Huh, never saw the BOB one before. *reads origional* Ehhhhnn.... don't think it was as good as Slenderman or Rake.
Hell, from the in-story description, I thought it was 682.
Does this story actually have the Rake in it?