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I heard DOOM so I came.

Then I went here to see what's up.

Instant fave cause this is going to be awesome!!!:pinkiehappy:

Awesome chapter, you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next one. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I'll give this story a whirl since I'm pretty fascinated in DOOM. Also:

I saw this like to see what's next

I have but one thing to say: KEEP IT COMING!

When is your Gilgamesh fic going to update?

7771798 I should have more time over the next month, so hopefully not too long.

Rip and Tear, my friends:eeyup:

RIP, AND, TEAR!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Super glad to see that this isn't a one off. Cant wait for more ripping and tearing.

Soo looking foward to this.:rainbowwild:

Comment posted by King Leoric deleted Dec 7th, 2016

Rainbow Dash, her boisterous nature taking over, flew up right in front of “Doomy’s” face. “Let’s go, tough guy! You wanna piece of me!? I’ll buck your head clean off!” she shouted, her hooves raised and throwing out quick punches meant to intimidate him. “C’mon, whaddya got!? You ain’t nothin’! You ain’t-!”

Rainbow was cut off by Doomy quickly reaching his hand out and clamping it around her neck. The pegasus struggled to breathe as she tried to pull herself away, ineffectively hitting his arm to try and make him let go.

:facehoof: goddammit rainbow dash one does not insult, nor fuck with the DooM Guy.

The Doom Slayer thought for a moment, then turned to look at the glass container in front of him. He raised his fist and smashed it through the glass. The two store owners bolted out through the back, not seeing the Doom Slayer remove his helmet.

DooM Guy Smash

Yo continue this dude Jesus you got the fight scene so damn perfect PLEASE, continue I don't think I could live if this story remains incomplete

Wow, that was good, especially considering you haven't even played the game. I've put like 300 hours into it and I can say you got the combat pretty much down pat. Though idk having the gameplay mechanics like ammo pickups and such in there feels a bit odd to me, I'd probably personally have him just absorbing energy from the demons as he kills them, which is roughly what the demons describe him doing in the Slayers Testament. But at the same time maybe him never running out of ammo and such would be kinda weird too. In the end I'm just nitpicking, great story so far!

Great story so far, very Doomish. The only thing I'd say needs tweaking is all the head shoting. Game wise yeah it's a great strategy, but Doom wise it's not nesicary other then like executions, badass and "Fuck you!" Moments.:twilightsmile:

Oh god that end there!:rainbowlaugh:

Glad to see this update, can't wait to see more of this.

I have to wonder why they are here. I blame Twilight.

“Tia, if you’d seen his resume like I have, you wouldn’t be asking that question,” Discord assured he, a slight shiver going up his body.

What's with the he, in that sentence? You might want to fix it.

7917081 Meant to write "her." Thanks for pointing that out.

Good to see that this is not dead. Looking foward for more.

in case someone needs....

7917994 1:04 - 1:55 is basically what Discord saw when he peered into the Doom Slayer's head.

They are cruel and merciless.
But you... you shall be worse.
Rip and Tear.
Rip and Tear... until it's done!

I just imagined the DoomGuy just plopping on to the chair with his arms crossed the whole ride.

7959608 That's actually going to be pretty accurate.

7959613 I can only wonder how the passengers will react to him.

Lol! How did I know he was on a train?:rainbowlaugh:

moreeee pleeeaaaaseee

You know, should Doom guy ever come across shinigamisparda's Gilgamesh (unlikely though that may be), I hope he plays this song.

Three more Hell Knights came at him from behind, but he ignored them and jumped onto another roof, meeting two more Imps, the first his melleed in the head, causing it to stagger, which he then grabbed from behind, twisted its neck, and ripped its bottom jaw off, gaining more health and armor.

I know, it still looks weird but it's the (generally agreed upon) correct spelling when describing CQC actions in past tense, since 'melee' when used as a verb isn't actually proper English (for now, according to all dictionaries besides Urban Dictionary), given the word is a noun.

Regardless; the extra L shouldn't be there.

8076871 I'll fix it. Do you like the story otherwise?

8077002 I didn't realize that this was your glorious child. Makes sense now that I think about it.

The train is the best thing ever.

My favorite fan-made Doom song is 'Fight Like Hell' by JT. Machinima...

8083096 If you mean the song in the most recent chapter, that one's actually from the game.

Fight Like Hell is pretty good, but my favorite will be showing up in the next chapter. Hopefully I won't make you guys wait too long for that.

This makes me so happy.:pinkiehappy:

True One: I already heard bout the Highway to Hell, but a Railroad that brings hell? That's new.

Wait, I thought the name of the protagonist of Doom was named Doomguy.

One stood, he chose the path of perpetual torment. In his ravenous hatred he found no peace, and with boiling blood he scowled the umbral plains seeking vengeance to the dark lords who had rocked him.
and to those that tasted the bite of his sword, they named him…doom slayer


And to stay in the mood until the next chapter arrives, here´s some Snapmap mlp action:

It's a bit strange from a narrative perspective that you included gameplay mecanics into the narrative of the story.

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen

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