675257 Thanks man! I hope I got Hudson's character right, he has to be a little more competant than before, otherwise he'd probably just sit and swear until he died.
This fic got my adrenaline going, and made me want to play that arcade Aliens game. Well done, I eagerly await the next installment! Here, have a kiss from Rainbow Dash! - Now, typical comment aside, there were a few spots where a word was wrong or a word was left out and forgotten, but other than making a sentence a teeny bit confusing from time to time it was fine.
Awesome, just plain awesome. The oncoming conversations will be most interesting to read and i can't wait until i can. Keep up the good work man.
Damn... just... damn
I. Love. This. Story.
628876 Thanks man! That really means a lot coming from you!
"Spike stood to Twilight's right, standing on his tip-claws to see the human. Like Rainbow, Spike didn't know weather to be horrified or impressed."
I think you meant whether?
Thank god the queen isn't in Equestria...yet
629765 Damn you weather and whether!
this story started out awsome when i began reading it.......................and it only got better with each chapter
FAVORITE'D!
675257 Thanks man! I hope I got Hudson's character right, he has to be a little more competant than before, otherwise he'd probably just sit and swear until he died.
This fic got my adrenaline going, and made me want to play that arcade Aliens game. Well done, I eagerly await the next installment!
Here, have a kiss from Rainbow Dash!
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Now, typical comment aside, there were a few spots where a word was wrong or a word was left out and forgotten, but other than making a sentence a teeny bit confusing from time to time it was fine.
I'll be reading this in a bit...
Best fanfic EVAR OMFGWTFBBQ