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MetalBrony823


A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/

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Time to play a game call "Go Bold and Swag"

Fluttershy's singing has definatley changed since we last heard her.:raritywink:
But cool story, I'm loving it :pinkiehappy:

5316164 Just imagine her singing this song. If you heard of Poets of the Fall, they are awesome! Fluttershy singing this song would also be even more awesome.:yay:

:flutterrage: YOU ARE GOING TO LOVE ME !

:raritycry:MINE!

:ajsmug:i WANT ANOTHER BACK RUB PARD

:pinkiecrazy: CUP CAKES !

:twilightoops: SPIKE !

...please be patient with the sex.

I was kind of here for the romance... :pinkiegasp:

I know why Angel is so grumpy all the time.

Very good Story Bro! i can't wait for the Romance!

So, after learning that Spike feels something that he describes as "love" for her, Fluttershy, knowing that he depends on her both for knowledge of the subject and for his physical needs, takes control over the physical relationship to an extent and in a way that would still be highly problematic between fully independent adults, and performs sexual acts on him that he does not even know enough to be curious about.

And you do not regard this development as meriting a "Dark" tag in itself, and you do not intend to let it have consequences that merit one either?

I no longer believe that this story is leading to a resolution that will satisfy me.

5324449
yes, you are aloud to point out some errors in the cloud.

I think the couple should set Angel up with a doe a female bunny.

Welp, you got me interested. Lets see if I stay that way.:ajsmug:

Why not give her a massage while you at it?

How many more chapters till the sex?

5847319 You know you could have been a lot nicer in telling the author that

5849823 I do apoligize for disliking your comment it was rude

" so where would you like to sleep?"

Spike thought of it "Can I sleep with you?" Spike said finally.

My nigga.

5923399 I agree... spelling made i5 difficult to understand and couldn't clop...:ajbemused:

That was a very sweet moment for Fluttershy to do. What will Spike do without her if he had a splinter and she wasn't there.

he would probably wonder how in Celestia's name did a little splinter manage to penetrate his tough scales.

5928506 It was a really really sharp splinter, and it hurt, because splinters have germs, you know?

So, what movie would you like to watch, Spike?" asked Spike.

for but a brief second there, I almost thought it was going to go zoophilic, but it didn't even go sexual as it turned into an emotional, heartwarming story

Still a good chapter, though

"Do you... want to make out?" Spike said
"Sure." Fluttershy replied.

:rainbowlaugh:

And yet it turn them on even more.

You guys realize I have to read this no exceptions! I always liked the Idea of Spike and Fluttershy dating.

This chapter....really rubbed me the wrong way. I'm sorry, but there was too much 'no' for me in this chapter and sadly I'll have to end it here. :ajsleepy:

Story marked as complete? Commence reading procedures!

"So... is there anything else that I could do around here?" asked the baby dragon in an excited voice.
Twilight thought of it for a moment, thinking of anymore chores for little ol Spike to do for her. "I think i'm fine for now, Spike." she said finally. "Why don't you take the day off?"

Spike volunteering for more work???
Twilight giving him the day off for no reason!?!?!?!

Where's the alternate universe tag?

The typos are hurting my brain...
But the fic is great, that's actually the 2nd time I'm reading it :twilightsmile:
The first time I read that fic, it wasn't even complete, I think I even commented on one chapter :pinkiesmile:

Nice, but you really should fix those grammer and spelling errors.

I loved this story! Instant fave and thumbs up!

This story is going great so far. Though, if you want to show that what is being said is only a thought and not out loud, use only a (') and not a ("). (") is for what is said outloud, and you used those for some of Spike's thoughts.

Comment posted by Random_Reader11 deleted Nov 5th, 2017

It won't let me find to song! What's it called?

8591371 Temple of Thought by Poets of the Fall.

She carefully slipped his hardened cock into his pussy

8591371 Temple of Thought, just go on the whole album and skip to the second song. It will show you the option in the description of the video.

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