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TheLoveless


i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy

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After being inside for 2 weeks, Spike decides to take a walk. To his surprise, every mare and filly is in love with Spike. As all decent ponies know how to solve a problem, they fight over him. Who will get Spike's love?

story idea: Bennet001

thank you Bennet001, i loved your idea.

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Comments ( 54 )

Didn't read, don't intend to… I just came to report the heinous misspelling of the word for (fro) on the synopsis entry.

This displeases the great overlord Rarity :raritydespair:

not to bad i enjoyed it a lot you thinking of a sequel?:heart::heart:

3525705 probly, not sure why but derpy spike seems cute:raritywink:

3525645 i'm sorry but i only obay the grate overlord of the skys, :derpytongue2: derpy.

i'll fix it though, thanks for pointing it out:twilightsmile:

3525773 you know he liked most of it:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss::ajsleepy::raritystarry::derpyderp2::yay:

3525790 I bet he was thinking some of this :trollestia: lol:rainbowlaugh:

3525991:derpytongue2: spike deserves every mare and secy stalion!!!!:eeyup::ajsmug:

you made my day:scootangel::twilightsheepish:

3526018 Will there be a sequel? I do hope there is, a sequel where Spike :moustache: gets some of this :trollestia: that would be hilarious:rainbowlaugh:

3526060 most likely yes. but if i make a sequel, would you read it if it was extreamly very cute and enjoyably secy?:ajsmug:

like extream discriptions, and progressive stryline?:pinkiesmile:

ex. discord getting into a fight with pinkie inside his mouth*in detail:rainbowwild::pinkiehappy:*

well, it was a.... interestin read; a bit random but, all in all not too shabby :pinkiesmile: keep up t great work n' hakuna matata :yay:

3526641 hakuna matata.:eeyup: i will worry, i missed you:scootangel:

3526646
yah, well sorry :fluttershysad::pinkiesad2: i'm not known to talk with friends/people unless there is a reason to or they start talkin to me otherwise i'm pretty much silent lik flutters :twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

....What did I just read?:twilightoops:

Seriously, it's funny and all, and random as as Loki on Olympus, but I couldn't make heads or tails of what it's ending is supposed to be. Is there aome other one-shot that went before this or something?

3527681 you just read a horrible herem.
and no not realy, no pre-story. sequal, most likely.

aside from that, Bennet001 said no one could complete it, so i did it, and this happened.:eeyup: sorry if hard to understand, but spike deserves ever mare.:trollestia:

It's situations like this that I find harems hilarious. Pretty much the reason I got into Ranma 1/2.

Uh... It was kind of funny, but at the same time I was confused the whole story. :applejackconfused: If I was confused I can't in good conscience down or up vote it, now can I? Maybe I'll read it when I'm not tired.

A potentially great concept, but Spike deserves a higher quality of writing.

3530357 Ranma 1/2? i must read now!:yay:

3530832 you have every right to down vote,:derpytongue2: it is confusing:eeyup:

3531050 well i'm not gonna argue. spike dose need to particapat in more gore fics nowadays.:eeyup: as the victum:pinkiehappy:

3531563I hate stories where spike is the victim, he's always the victim in the show!:raritycry:

3534806 sorry to displease you.:ajsleepy: i was oly being a mean person and joked about it.

probly will write a sic like that, but with rarity and spike:yay:

3531563

I don't ever really down vote unless I feel it is necessary. I don't think this was one of those times.

3534932 i like the people like you.:twilightsmile: glad to here it wan't down vote worthy:twilightsmile:

3534815 I don't really get to fired up about it, however it just seems to happen to much. I do enjoy underdog stories.

3548813 atleast some people still enjoy those:eeyup:

3571183 my first question: do you even know spanish?

my secodn question:unsuresweetie: do you like cats?:rainbowkiss:

3571635 I take it as a class, but I'm not awesome. I could get the general consensus if someone were to yell at me, I could understand what they're yelling about. And both cats and dogs. (but cats are fucking awesome)

3572041 good.:eeyup: me gustan:twilightsmile: and cats are friggin epic! till they start to smell:facehoof:

3572063 I thought it was me gusto, (I was originally making referance to the meme) because -an is the conjucation you use to describe you guys blank. (ellos, ellas & uds.)

3530357

You too?! I have all the Ranma episodes on DVD up to season 4, have to look about to get the other 3 season, as well as the OVA, and I think there was a Ranma 1/2 movie there as well (I think the title was "Big Trouble in Little Nerima" or something like that.

Now I have to re-watch them. It's a good way to get a rainy night going and you just don't feel like going out on the weekend.

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is ranma good>?:duck: my friend's been reading it. volume one to the end of ranma, all in 1 week:eeyup:

is it good:moustache:

One of the weirdest shows I had ever watched....literally everything AND anything would happen to the main characters. But it's fucking hilarious!!! And also there is a bit of a romance issue with it, because one of the pillars of Ranma is that he's the guy that has a bunch of (mostly) unwanted fiances'. And don't get me started on his/her commitment issues!!!

:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

Yeah, that's right--his/her issues. Because half the time, he's Ranma-kun, and the other time she's Ranma-chan. (Hence the 1/2 portion of the show name). It sucks for him at times because he can turn into a girl literally due to water, and because of it, (s)he's got a few male suitors as well. I wonder if he/she had eventually went mad from all the chaos that follows him/her.

Basically it's one of the few programs out there that literally has something for every walk of life.

A lot of people say that the manga for it is better than the anime. Personally I liked the anime better, but the only bad thing about it was that the show was cancelled after seven seasons. If you have read the manga, probably from about Volume 23 forward would be what "Ranma" would have had if it completed it from beginning to end. I would tell you the absolute thing that I enjoyed about Ranma, but I'm afraid that I would spoil some things for you if you had not see it.

Plus....:twilightblush:, since MLP, I haven't re-watched Ranma for about a year and a half, so I guess now's a good time to re-accompany myself with Ranma Saotome :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3663780 i just skipped most of that, just to let you know.:eeyup:

i'll read it once i finish shaman king.:moustache: and thanks for spoiling the one part i love about every show. the sex changeing person.

like bukora in Yu-Gi-Oh. looks like a delicet creacher,:yay: but is an evil man.:flutterrage:

and thanks for spoiling the one part i love about every show]

:facehoof::facehoof:

Oops......well, let me tell you like this: A guy that's literally a different person at the drop of water is the LEAST of his/her worries.........muahahahaha :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Even knowing that, it's still fucking hilarious:rainbowlaugh:

3663886 :rainbowkiss: i derped out, so i didn't understand:rainbowlaugh:

3663692
IMHO, very good. Fair warning though, it contains some exposed boobage, but it's not like it's a technique or anything. Won't show up too often.

3669247 okay. i guess, and ive watched a show where main characters are name panty and stocking. good show :rainbowlaugh:

Riz

3669277
So Spike & Twilight are like mom & son ?

4207146 the way i see it yes. also thanks for the favorite:twilightsmile:

.....That was quite scary in a fairly hilarious way and it certainly made me want more.

Most excellent.

4453225 i don't understand most of that.:scootangel: but yes more excelence!!!! from all people:yay:

4457402

Basically, a lot of the scenes i found scary. Like Twilight's random freak-out, the Pinkie-Discord relationship, and everything that Derpy did. :unsuresweetie:

But, at the same time, i found most of the scenes hilrious, Like Twilight's random freak-out, Spike's reaction to his new Swag-status, and everything that Derpy did. :twistnerd:

This story made me feel things! It makes me want it to continue! It was certainly most excellent. :rainbowwild:

4457913 exactly what did derpy do?:duck: i forgot what i wrote:facehoof:

4457988

She threw a soggy muffin at Spike, told him to hold it, but to not eat it. Then she later asked if he enjoyed it. :twilightoops:

4458424 pure stupidity.:moustache: and i know think i should have marked this as mature:trollestia:

Is there a sequel

4523569 thier was going to be, but i decided not to work on anything yet:eeyup: life's been hard latly, so i'm taking a load off.:scootangel:

and i'm glad this coment wasn't just the word "more.:rainbowkiss:"

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