Luna's Night Off

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Luna has only one night off a year. This year, she is spending it with Pinkie Pie.

Luna, Pinkie Pie, and a lot of randomness. What next?

random fic made from sadness. grammer may be less desireable. please read at own discretion

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Moon_Skritch

Moon_Skritch #1 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Thumbs up for effort. :) Could have been longer, also might want to remember to capitalize. A tip for later: After you are done writing, either you or get a friend, look over it closely and see if you find any mistakes. Its better if you get someone else.

All in all, cute story. :)

twilight517828

twilight517828 #2 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

Lol i can see luna burning it and saying its not that black.
Awsome i like most storys becuse if you have nothing good to say unless its inportant dont say it at all. I like it this in my favs for when i want a tiny story

TheLoveless

TheLoveless #3 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

3331810 Thank you for your modesty (if thats what modesty is).

3331701 sorry about the caps, not my strong point. And i will next time.

twilight517828

twilight517828 #4 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

twilight517828

twilight517828 #5 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDmOUK5RXP8

TheLoveless

TheLoveless #6 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

3333964 that was strange.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDmOUK5RXP8 playing in the background

twilight517828

twilight517828 #7 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·

lol

TheLoveless

TheLoveless #8 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·

3335381 not to be suck a stick in the mud, )even better(

not to be a burnt cake with frosting

but if you would kindly, please alw the comment section on the story page be for the story? if not, sorry, if you could, thank you. Just mail me if you want to talk