Spike's first day of school, and like any other day, friends are with him. Scootaloo is in the same grade, and the same class. Being new, or even different from others in class will always clause problems.
First day of school? Or maybe the last.
criticism wanted!!!!
Liked it
3533925 any critasisum? constructive or destructive?
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Well I'm not good with pointing out flaws since I can't find my own but I do have two always capitalized I and write numbers in word form.
3533961 i knew i should have done that with the i.
thanks
Could use some proofreading. Here are some examples:
Always capitalize the personal pronoun "I".
I like comparing it to a prison, but it should be "everyone". You would split it up when talking about multiple objects, for example: "Rainbow Dash broke every one of those windows". But when referring to a group of people, it would be a single word: "Everyone agreed that there was too much drama in the fandom." Or you could just use "everypony".
You're starting a new sentence (within the dialogue) and would need to capitalize that first letter. Also, a comma after "well" would indicate the natural pause in speech when saying something like that.
I'm sure you meant to type "your" but just missed a key. Happens to all of us.
There are some editing/proofreading groups you could join, and they could help you polish this.
3534000 thank you fro the help.
i shall try my best later on.
and i don't like having an editor/proofreader. just dosent sit well with me.
again thank you! cat is pleased
Awe spike
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3581045 = :muffin: prequal to S&SSA
3581058S&ssa??
still
3581091 spike and scootaloo's small adventure i got tired of typing the Whole name. no problem though
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3581109 no responce
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3581214 perfect
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