Applejacks hat is missing. Spike knows where it is. But a hats not all that there is to find.
please offer criticism:
And please no walls of text.
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TheLoveless
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3599288
just that alone.
And then she catches Spike with his head in her hat and inhaling deeply
And again.
3599373
now i feel like making a special chapter.
will you asist me, and allow us to use that
The cuteness of this story. Hnnghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!"
3599398
my thougth exactly
3599375
go nuts
or rather have spike go nuts
3599426
i will probly disapoint you
and maske this story go intense
3599438
as long as you have fun writing it, I will not be disappointed
3599451
cool. i enjoy bagels more now.
That's really fast shipping there my friend. Too fast for my taste.
Also I'm sure someone was bound to do this sooner or later but:
Has anyone seen my hat?
Look! I'm Applejack! Howdy Howdy! Howdy!
Ahhahaha! Give me that!
3599573 you know what? i enjoyed that
thanks for the pinion
spike is best applejack pony
3599573
you know what's funny, I was just looking at an image that had that joke in it with derpy instead of spike.
Well I usually have troubles reading your stories, but this one was good and I didn't get confused. I'd just mention in your first chapter sometimes you didn't hit a space bar for like 3-4 words, but whatever I can read it anyway. I'm not anal about punctuation if I can read it.
3600754 my job here is complete. I am inproving, but i had an edtor,
. glad you could read it.
also, are you following me? i see you on every other story i have
Dang Spike! Did it hurt?
3600763
Not really, but you have such interesting story ideas I think that I just might.
3600890 okay.
i'm bored.
3600807 about some one asked about spike
spotted some spelling errors and missing spaces between words. might want to fix those
3606411
wow. stefono
i probly will look for them later
Reasons for my down vote:
-Poor Pacing (Rushed story, lack of proper story structure)
-Poor grammar and sentence structure (Spelling, proper capitalization, spacing, etc.)
Suggestions:
-A proof reader
-maybe lurk a bit more to get a good feel of stories and their structure.
3606974 i respect you, you always be honest.(did that on pepose.
) and its always(mostly) help full
i'll try, but this was a troll fic.
didn't realy care fro it
"I didn't give you permission to do that! Kids these day, if you want something you need to ask first." Pushing away from the tree, and trotting to Spike, she smiled, "Now how about you start working for it."
"Spike gulps"
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-is put in a fighting ring with Applejack" Alright lova boy! -smirks- Put it their!
-looks around- AJ, is this REALLY necessar~-Spike gets but so hard that it sends him into space. He lands face first on the moon-...Ugh.....What the?...
-eyes widened as he seen Luna on the moon, drinking tea and giving a pissed look to Spike-......You're on my moon.....
3644962
what did i just read?
did i type that? was thier a chapter 2?
Aw, no Molesterjack?
3681445 i've been planning a sequai/continuation but i'm a bit pre ocupied wit other stuff.
sorry
3599573 Nice.
VS.
4187481 ...
i'm not sure how to respnd
4187500 Spike didn't turn off his swag again. img0.joyreactor.com/pics/post/full/my-little-pony-spike-SWAG-sandbox-958948.jpeg
4187509 ... old spice turned spike into a man....
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4187581 There should be one. Paste Spike's face over the Old Spice guy's face.
4187593 lol