Because that's all I do
Rarity was meeting with fashion designers from Saddle Arabia, Canterlot, and Prance at the boutique. As she was discussing buisness with them a young purple dragon felt like being generous today, and brought her an enormous cart of rare jewels and gemstones. What will become of Spike when Rarity disowns him? (inspired by the story "The Heartbreaker and the Cultivator")
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3086172only time will tell my friend
3086172 How could she crush Spike's feelings.
How dare she!
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3086239 Time will tell.
3086162 That's a bananable offense.
3086522do you even like bananas?
3086598 Uh...yes. Yes, I am a bot that likes bananas.
Can't wait til everypony else finds out how Whority treated Spike just so she could be more successful and rich.
Rarity, you greedy bitch...You should feel bad about yourself.
Kill her.........thats all
For those of you who read my other story when chapter 1 was shit, if you look at it now it is well, less shitty now. I've finally edited it.
I have seen this beginning in several stories, and I still love it.
But no matter how much I like the story, the grammar and structure here need a lot of work. I recommend you enlist a proofreader to assist you in cleaning this up a bit.
3087045yep, I'm not exactly an english teacher
She herself won't. Her guests are another thing entirely.
Ah timing... this would be one of those bad ones. I'm surprised he wasn't told about this important meeting in the first place.
thats cold Rarity
3086608well that's good, cuz yo about to go bananas.........ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAA
Work it! Work it, man. Come on, work it. This is a good drama for me.
Good job rarity (sarcasm).
It's about time for Spike to start reading about dragons' loving habits.
I mean, he is now to find out whether Rarity is his destined love or just silly childhood (baby?) crush, isn't he?
3102663I've always enjoyed failed Sparity, thant either results in
a)him finding a better relationship with someone else
b)him taking revenge, or a terrible event caused by Rarity's stupidity.
she embodies what I hate most about women. Now let me getthis straight, I DO NOT hate women. I just hate how much some of them carebabout fashion. Your already beautiful lady, you don't have to swim in make up and dresses for me to think your beautiful.
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Gosh, this comment could be much longer!
I've ended up writing quite a big response to you, so I'd rather PM it to you, if you'll allow me to. The letter will contain some big suggestions for the storyline then, however, which some authors could find rather impolite.
So... Can't wait to talk to you.
When is the next chapter and will Spike and Rarity be together by the end of this?
3181990 I'm not sure if I'm going to ship anyone yet, though it's been onmy mind
3182117 And the first part of the question?
3182195not sure, but it should be up by sometime this weekend. Sorry about the wait but school can really eat my time as well as my co writer's.
3183753 Are you going to post it soon?
3215629srry about the delay, Ive been pre occupied with the trials of every day life. Ive either been to busy or too tired to write anything worth actually publishing.
3215940 is it almost done?
3215940 Are you done??
3343310>>3348861 So... I guess it's time I actually come back to this and explain myself. Well, I really just haven't t been working on it and I actually have a co-writer that I've been trying to work with but he's been too busytrying to write his first story. Add that with writer's block and you've got yourself a delayed story . But I have made you guys wait forever so it is time that start writing again. To finish this off, I feel I need closure to this.http://m.youtube.com/?reload=7&rdm=w64eid6#/watch?v=9u0EL_u4nvw ( I'm sorry if you can't copy amd paste the link, I'm doing this on my kindle and Fim does NOT like it)
Are ya close to being done With the next chapter?
Umm..... is there going to be new chapter
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Nope.
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What not?
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because it's been like 7 years?
That was probably the worst hint you could give someone. Also, I need to know what happens.