Spike is never taken seriously, besides being a comical relief for the town. So instead of being there for his friends that don't need him, he decides trying being for himself: the one who needs him the most.
He leaves Ponyville in an attempt to find what he's meant to do with his life, and even though his friends say he's overreacting – one of them accompanies him on his path.
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Ok, lets see what's this is about.
Innnnnnteresting. Well your got my attention of this, i look forward to more.
Good start my friend. I wonder how this will end?
This is interesting, I am loving how your Shy is the only one that really understands Spike. The build up at the train had me waiting for Spike to knock them all out of his way
lol. Oh well a guy can dream. I just hope Spike picks up on her feels quickly (this Spike doesn't seem to be the naive type
) Anywat can't wait for next update to see what happens next.
Ugh, I don't even remember writing this!
I need more...
This song pop in my head and I think it fits the story well.
Anyway I like were this is going and can't wait to read more.
good idea, good concepts, a few errors here and there, and plenty for one's imagination to work with... I can't wait to read more
3986636 Too much chocolate milk? c:
3989703 You know it.
Good start for a good concept... thanks for another story to follow 'till kingdom come or 'till the end or whatever. Thanks and grats.
Cool Story Bro, i can't wait for the next chapter, i hope it's soon.
PS: sorry for the bad english, it's not my native language.
Amazingly realistic story man,
Real emotion drama, inner turmoil, and inner character development, I LOVE IT ALL!!!!!!!
I wanna see where all of this is going.......
Plus the 4th wall breaking is informative, intriguing, and very realistic to the precieving person!!!!!!
10/10, Need next chapter please!!!!!!!
Oh, yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Continue, please.
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Don't worry man, it comes with practice. My native is Spanish.
and :twilight left spike wow
I honestly doubt Twilight would be so cold hearted as to do that to Spike, besides, he could just write a letter to his mom and be sent anywhere....almost. But I'm eager to see where this goes.
This was interesting. I can't wait to see what they do in Manehattan. The sights they will see, the romance they will form and even a deeper understanding to why Fluttershy was sticking up for him so much. I wonder if she will act differently now that she is away from her other friends and she will be alone with Spike. Will they share the same hotel room? How will other ponies treat Spike while he's in Manhattan? I wonder if Spike will make something of himself while he is gone.
What if they end up staying longer than a week? I wonder how the rest of the mane 6 will react? Especially when they return and they ask Spike and Fluttershy a thousand questions to what did they down down there, which leads to some intense blushing and question dodging.
Please continue one day.