Spike has Feelings for Apple Jack but doesn't know how to say them... The funny thing is.. She loves him too.
( credit goes to Commander Fowler for helping me out with story go check him out.)
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Aaaaand the title has a grammar error. Your should be you're.
4892706 that's going to cause some trouble
You need an editor, right now.
Writing wrong words in the text is bad. In the description, even worse. But the title...? Dude, that is way past any acceptable degree of quality.
Fix that up and maybe I'll take a detailed look at your work, new meat. And welcome to Fimfiction!
4892899 says the dude who's name is lokimen
4893096 ya I've had issues like that in the past I was running low on titles so it will be fresh in a few days.
Yes but this isn't my first story I've posted lots of times I just took them down for other reason.
But thanks none of the less
Like where this story is going but you need to fix the grammar issues but I like it please continue.
4893860 ok ill continue don't worry I'll fix it
Try this:
4894518 thanks and I have to thank everyone else I've never had this much support on a story
i liked it and lokimonster did you forget to put this story to complete now since it is the end
4899515 oh yea sorry and thanks I've never had a story with this much good feed back.
4899520 that ok and your welcome and can you make a sequel for this story
4899520 can you
4899533 yes I was thinking about a sequel where they have kids or maybe rarity doesn't like the relationship or some pony else doesn't like it.
Yea man I'm totally making a sequel.
4899558 yay and can you send me a private message back
I love me some good Applejack and Spike ship.
Here, good friend, I have found several spelling errors
This should be egg.
This should be flew.
There are also several instances where Applejack's name is seperated like Apple Jack.
Besides that, this was a wonderful story. Onto the next chapter, dun dun duh duhhhhh
You should totally do a sequel. Maybe have their wedding and have Rarity object , or have Twilight uncomfortable with the relationship, or have one of AJ's old flames come back into the picture. Possibilities!!
4925178 I've already have an idea for the sequel btw how is beyond the five going or whatever that story is called.
Also if you haven't seen it you aren't the only one that ships some one or some pony and nobody else does. I've checked on google like 3 other people ship snailsbloom and I'm one of them.
4925200 The next chapter of my story is in the works currently. And I have yet to find another Spinky (Dinky doo= Spike) shipper.
4925214 you'll find them some day... To search google or devaintart that help me.