I write Pony fanfics every now and then, but I mainly write my own stories, and fan fictions for them...cause I can.
Set in the Bride of Discord universe, after the wedding and before Discord's Dating Game
Applejack finds Spike in Donut Joe's, and a question that she's hidden has finally been unlocked: "What if Rarity liked ya back?" Now Spike realizes he might have to choose between his long time crush, Rarity, or Applejack who has been there for him the entire time.
Contains Applespike
For the Disneyverse contest, on writing a one shot romance story by Autistic Writer
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Nice job I was going write something similar but that's ok.
6482997
that would be so cool!!! Of course it's okay!
6482999 lol probably not now I still am balancing few fics as it is.
Okay, here's my review on this fanfic,
I thought it was okay. It was a great Applejack and Spike moment. However, there were one or two issues i had with this story.
Firstly being that Applejack reveals her feelings for Spike, but it turns out that it was revealed in Discord's Dating Game. Just a continunity issue. That doesn't mean i didn't like the story. I felt that it was just okay.
But, i hope to see another story of yours soon :)
Your story has been added to the Applespike group library.
I am eager to read this and will comment when finished.
6482997 Write it anyway.
If it's a good story, I'll be sure to read.
Hmm, I enjoyed this story. It was pretty good, and since it was good I shall bestow upon you the greatest gift in the world, a like.
You know you did good with this, seeing that you got a like from Corey.
Treasure it deeply my friend, for it is the greatest reward you shall ever receive.
6490513 I agree.
Still a good story though.
The spaces between paragraphs could be better as well as the proper use of 'thee's and 'thou's, but enjoyable none the less.
It still got an up-vote from me.
Very nice to read.
Plus: Applespike!
It was an okay story though there is an error here..
You forget to add the word "you"
6842277
Thank you, I'll go and fix that!
1.
Sat not say. Although I can't blame you because the t and the y are right beside each other on the board.
2.
If Spike was female; yes it would make sense.
But this is a guy to girl conversation. And I'm pretty nobody/nopony can look into thier own eyes.
7107642
thank you for pointing those out to me! I will go and fix them!
7111035
No problem! Also I really loved the story. I just LOVE the Bride of Discord Universe!
7115149
I'm not really sure I could make more...this is a one chapter story, and I have no ideas for others!
7117197
Aww
What I meant to say was to make more Bride of Discord universe stories.
Well either way it really was an awesome read!
7117479
I agree that there should be more Bride of Discord stories out there, but there probably are but we haven't seen them!
thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
7117549
I just hope you're right about more Bride of Discord universe stories out there.