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What the fuck
Smacks of plagiarism of a lamiaaaa work.
Pretty sure that's called 'unbirthing'. Not exactly new. Well, maybe the method, but I doubt it. It is the internet, after all.
not bad at all
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thanks!
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I figured there must have been a name for it. I hadn't read anything like it so I wasn't sure.
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Does it? I haven't read any of his/her work so anything similar is a coincidence. Thanks for pointing it out though!
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Yep. I think from now on I'll write things that aren't so messed up. Y'know, a story with actual plot and development rather than this crap.
I won't downvote it, but I can safely say that it wasn't my cup of tea. Also I'm guessing you forgot to add the Anthro tag.
not bad at all needs a little polish around the edges and anthro tag is needed.
I think it could be a great story if you wish to continue it or at least good fetish fuel
Man this was great. Had two of my favorite fetishes too. (I know probably TMI)
I came
Well then........I just read that damn fine job on the story. Now I'm wondering what happened to Twilight
Dammit boner, why must you do this?
Is there a Chance that this would continue?
This is squicky?
Do you even know what squicky means?
I can't Upvote it because by the end my eyes were burning with disgust, but I can't Downvote because it was actually very well written. So instead, have a sick Pinkie.
Eeyu-nope
I've heard of similar fetishes...but man with Magic you just broke the mold on every level! Not sure if you will continue or actually show us what's going on with Twilight, but either way this was a trip. Well done.
Don't know how to react. Though I'm certain she'd have a different reaction if it was Commander Hurricane.
Why?
I want a sequal
I feel confused and sick with myself.
this was hot, sick, sexy, disturbing and I loved and hated it.
I don't know how to feel.
this disgusts me to no end but I found myself enjoying it.
what is wrong with me, the author and anyone else who feels the same as me. (no offence intended)
This story could use a editor. The wording seems kinda weird. Also, there's a difference between creating a fetish and expanding on one, you sick fuck.
I tweaked the description so it wasn't as misleading/incorrect with the fetish tags. Thanks for the input everyone! If anyone feels more tweaks are needed (in the story too) don't hesitate to contribute your thoughts.
This was pretty good. Keep up the good work, thumbs up, all tha jazz.
I look forward to seeing more fics like this, as it involves two of my three favorite things:
Cumflation, check
Violence, check
Garlic Bread, no check.
Celestia's a big girl.
Wow, what did I just read? And will we get a sequel to find out what happens next and what Twilight has to do with it, heck what about the other girls? They gave up there Cutie Marks as well.
"Cocksock" - I laughed harder than I should have.
Good story and quite... different. I like how you try new things and oversteps the "comfort" zone of most readers, while still keeping it hot. You certainly gave me mixed feelings as I read this.
Well done, sir/madam. Well done indeed.
MORE!!!
And not a single hope was given that day.
What.
Why did I fap.
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What. The. Fuck.
Fuck this shit I knew I shouldn't have looked at clopfics today
my reaction after reeding this media.giphy.com/media/HShzwmEefOil2/giphy.gif
Moar!
So. much. boner!!!!
Princest? Oh yes, please. Let the unsolicited reading begin!
That is the single greatest line associated with Rarity I have ever read. You are going to have to really fuck this up if you want a down-vote.
I shall loudly announce my actions before I preform them! Not sure why, I am simply going to do it!
Glass houses, asshole.
....Yeah...
Burnnnnnnnn!
Well, I'm just going to add this to my "Celestia is a bitch for no discernible reason" list.
I'm fucking terrified too, darling. I really fucking am. However, I would like to note that despite my distaste for the subject, your descriptions are quite good.
Okay, decided to skip quoting every bit and piece I could comment on to save space, so it's time for the sum up:
Stupid boner.
This is some seriously fucked up shit. It's also pretty well-written and the descriptions were, for lack of a better term, hot.
I have apprehensions about Celestia being such a malicious bitch in this, but I suppose we use the tools necessary to get to the good parts. Overall while messed up, this is still a good bit of smut. And that line up there made it all worth it. Enjoy the follow and upvote.
Why yes I'm sure you've never heard of me and are wondering why this person thinks so highly of his/her selfs. I wonder that too sometimes.
okie dokie then......
And I thought I thought of crazy messed up stuff, but man you sure took the whole cake factory with this one, nicely written by the way, didn't catch any grammar mistakes, but I am very tired at the moment.
Son, you got a lot too learn, and your not even close to the mighty Headless Rainbow!
If you were too compare this too Celestia's Relaxing Vacation, then you are a fool! You haven't comen close to that greatness kid, it was a good try, but think before you try rivaling with the big boys!
5199134 Because you love it.
5525870 I'll take ten.
Is there a sequel? This was just too fun to read!
~Squiggle-Squiggle~
This was more than I signed up for from the warnings... I thought it was just going to be the standard futaprincess fucks subject, who eventually loves it and gets pumped full of cum. Boy was I wrong.
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Oh my gosh! This is so disgusting and awesome! It is really well described and I loved it. Yes, I am crazy. Especially, if you have this song in your head during reading.
Good job : you destroy my mind : I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
Oh my fucking God..... Awesome!
There really isn't enough good vore on this site. A shame there isn't a followup.