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HamGravy


Author of the Tarnished Silver series. I write clopfics with too many emotions in them. My work is very niche, but my readers are a wonderfully enthusiastic bunch, so I must be doing something right?

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I'm pretty sure liking this is going to send me into the very bowels of hell. But, I did.

So uh...this 'spoon' of hers....does it scoop much? Eh? EH? Nudge nudge, wink wnik? Ay ay? Get the cream from the custard? Eh? EH? Know what I mean? ;:D Ay? AY? ;:)

(Monty Python FTW!)

doesnt a silver spoon mean wealth

:pinkiecrazy: I loved it....:pinkiecrazy: I feel weird ...:pinkiecrazy:

This... This... Words cannot describe what I am feeling right now.
You... You sir/madam are twisted in every way possible. I could break the fourth wall right now and slap your shit, but I won't. Purely out of pity.

:applejackconfused: what the fug did i just read... i did not think i would actually finish it... i thought i would back out in the second paragraph when i discovered this stories full intention... but i didn't... good job... i guess, i was disgusted, yet somehow interested...

Ummm...... SWEETIERAGE!

Bravo, mate. You are my favorite fucked-in-the-head author. :ajsmug:

I loved it! This was great. Your characterization of the depths of Silver Spoon's dedication to being a Pig is spot on. I love how much she loves pain. Count me among your fans and I look forward to anything you write in the future. I think you've surpassed my go to author Soul Hook for this type of fic.

That was actualy a good plot :rainbowderp: . Like after a while it was like WTF, but then it just was instresting, like a mental patient.
Congratulating you might seem wrong but god dammit Imma do it anyway.
Congrats on writing a story that complexes the story! Cause I loved it....... Not in a clop way btw... :rainbowlaugh:

That came from a very dark place. I don't get anything sexual out of this, but it's just so blissfully evil that I really enjoyed it. Seriously, you have great talent with writing.

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:pinkiecrazy:
I make your words mine...

Well now that I know that this story will have sequals, or at least that you write more, I'm going to start following you. I love the psyche writers.

wtf thank you make hate rarity 20% more

Very well written. I applaud you.:pinkiehappy:

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Holy crap, fanart! Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the stories.

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Yay!! I really love this story. It shows a side of Silver Spoon no one has ever seen.

I have no words for your writing. There is just so much brilliance...I'm blinded. Well done.

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Never have I encountered such corrupt and foul-minded perversity... have you ever considered a career in the Church!? :pinkiehappy:

Again, your writing is something to be admired! ...Or envied. :duck:

That was horrible, evil, inhuman, and downright abominable.







DO APPLEBLOOM NEXT.

Wow. I should have guessed... after all... Pinkie Pie is the mother of all the other foals...

You should fix the double spaces :moustache:

Wow reminds me of the tarnished silver series :heart: oh it's HamGravy the same author :twilightblush:

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Your screen name sounds like an excellent suggestion. :raritywink:

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I believe you said my exact thoughts about this story. I like my sex a bit more consensual. Though, this story has a way of hooking you in, despite everything going on. You stole my exact thoughts on this..... Thanks for saving me the trouble of figuring out what this story does to you....

820493 That's precisely the point. Silver Spoon isn't good at anything besides being wealthy.

Daaaaaamn. This is so messed up, it's horrible. And I love you for that. Excellent peice of work.

OK, one minute in and I've made the assumption that Rarity already needs to die. Painfully. Like, Indian-style, with guts strung up through the trees and stuff.

What disturbs me is not the story itself. What disturbs me is that people, humans, actually do this, and there are many of them out there. When I watched the news and saw these kinds of things, like a father that locks his daughter in the basement for 30 years and abuses her, I was baffled but didn't give much thought. This story gave me a new perspective. The amount of detail shows me how sick this kind of thing is, more than I could ever imagine. I am simply unable to understand why a person would do these things, I can even respect, if there is consent, but doing it by force fills me with rage and fear. Fear because one day it could happen to me, and I wouldn't even be expecting it. The way you wrote this feels very realistic, I have never seen something of this caliber, congratulations. I'm adding this series to the favorites.
This is also a great reminder that the world isn't all sunshine and rainbows.

I keep fending off the urge to cut and run. Not yet, though. Not yet.

Rarity's iteration here is oddly crass and openly direct. I wouldn't have expected that to be the sort of way she'd be written, it kind of trades in a viciously cutting edge for blunt forceful effect, and it's not a good trade at that.

Silver Spoon is a very strange little creature. Not just a complete lack of self-respect, no, she moves right past absolute abscence and moves out into the other side. How that kind of character develops is a curiosity.

Sweetie Belle is the crux of the story. Oh sure, Silver might be the focus of the narrative, but this is Sweetie's story.

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I think you have a point about Rarity. I kind of lost her voice a bit in this one. The first few stories were written weeks apart so they're pretty inconsistent, especially compared to the multi-chapter stories, which were written on a regular schedule.

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These stories....No, the entire Tarnished Silver series, is so dark and cold and unyeildingly cruel, that absolutely nothing I have ever read or listened to, including all creepypasta and Grim tales to be told in the Dark, come no where near the level of grimdark and cruelty that this story exudes.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2:

That being said.....These are some of the best stories I've ever read.:twilightoops::rainbowderp::derpyderp1::applejackunsure::applecry::facehoof:

This series goes beyond any fucked upedness that I could ever begin to comprehend. Ima stop reading now, lest this story engrave itself into my memory more so than it already has.

I accidentally read this story and freaked out so bad that I got got pissed at myself and started throwing knives.:pinkiecrazy:

God you can certainly make me laugh. Onward!

Shit that's hot

I'm not so fond of the idea of Rarity not caring about her fashion. Rarity just is too invested in it for that to be the case, it would seem more likely to me that her passion for fashion is very real and that the two passions exist side by side. I actually think it would make Rarity come across as much more evil, that she is a perfectly normal mare with normal emotions and passions that just happens to include viciously raping foals.
Her caring about nothing but torturing others makes her appear too simple and makes her more an insane monster than an evil mare.

Nevertheless, I still was really moved by it and Rarity was still intimidating, just not as much as she was before. I liked the idea of her still loving Sweetie Bell and having all her obvious passions with that hidden evil self always lurking. I can still enjoy her as a monster though.

Third chapter now. I really hate to bother you with notifications but every time I read a new one, it's like it's the top layer of the cake. It's all so good. I want to read everything you write. Literally everything. I'd pay you money. The way you write everyone in this series so far genuinely scratches some sort of itch in my heart, and i'm so so glad you exist, and create art like this. It's almost like it's perfectly tailored to me. It's beautiful.

When asking if something is great literature I question whether it accurately depicts the issues rather than if it makes me feel good. Here I’d say no… but i cant tell if its a matter of depicting the psychology of abuse or how much this jars with the source material.

It reminds me of a fic where Twilight had dropped out of school to open a pizzaria. You’ve made some very interesting OCs, but they are so far removed from the series that you’re not embellishing or developing so much as creating totally new characters.

Suppose Scootaloo had parents like Silver Spoon, was still a flightless blank flank and somehow caused Rainbow Dash’s death. Her friends tried to comfort her saying it wasn’t her fault but that only enraged her because she knew they were lying.

She meets Spitfire at the funeral who was like your Rarity and Scootaloo runs away to be the slave of someone who’d punish her like she deserved and Scootaloo could feel like pleasing Dash’s idol somehow honoured Dash. Throw in Spitfire’s little sister and you have the same relationship dynamics and I would probably love that series.

As is, Rarity simply isn’t Rarity, Sweetie Bell isn’t Sweetie Bell and Ponyville just feels too small for someone to have this many victims and go unnoticed.

May I ask how much research you’ve done on this topic?

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