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SharkInfestedWaters


Long time lurker turned writer.

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I am intrigued by the futa-Twilight but very slightly off-put by the rape... continue, dood.

i wanna know what happens when she picks her mentor
HAHAHAHA in the throne room
HAHAHA

Cross my fingers for a self fuck session and let that be the end of it.

I entertained the thought of writing something vaguely similiar to this a couple of years ago, but, well... things happened :twilightblush:

Anyway, I find the concept of this intriguing. Twilight slowly being corrupted by a cursed sex toy capable of manipulating dimensions / working with portals? Count me in :twilightsmile:

I have to ask though, will it be explained why Twilight is futa in this universe, or are we supposed to just 'deal with it'?

. she failed to notice that the moonlight filtering in from her window cast no shadows in her room.

What?

A voodoo story sounds very interesting :duck:

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5384266 It seems random now, but it'll make much more sense soon

Twilight needs to go fuck herself. No, I mean actually.

I think it would've been a bit better if we could've seen scenes from Twilight's point of view mixed in with the part where Dash gets fucked by the ghost cock. Still pretty good though. I look forward to the next chapters.

I would actually find it very entertaining to see a skit with Celestia or/and Luna being used by the toy. It would make for some great comedic circumstances, though it would probably have to occur at the end b/c then they would begin investigating this 'sexual ghost' themselves.

Best of luck, stay healthy, and update soon!

-Sky66

this is an interesting story so far I would request....derpy hooves for the simple fact....honestly she just is not in to many....erotic fics and this looks interesting.

And so, Twilight went forth and imagined Luna.

Well, I can certainly get behind this. I can't very well say I've seen this idea played out that often before, although I know I've seen it somewhere, and I couldn't for the life of me remember when or where.

Consider this tracked, though, cause I am interested in more.

Also, I better see some Twi on doll on CMC action, or I'll be severely disappoint, sir.

continue this please

man I hope you update this soon....this is an awesome story idea...

please continue this, i love the concept, there aren't enough good sex toy stories

My interest, you have it. A scene for each of the Mane 6, Twilight herself included, as well as Celestia and Luna, would be awesome.

When will the new chapter come out? :/

Is this still being worked on?

Very arousing story.

Is it still rape, if the person performing the rape doesn't know they are doing so? I love the idea of the unwilling receiver, and the oblivious giver.

The only thing I would have added to this first chapter, would have been anal, and virgin anal at that. Twilight, not knowing she was actually shoving it in the real Rainbow Dash, would not have used any lubrication. (Yes I am a fairly sadistic lady)

I cannot wait to see more to this story, and how twisted Twilight will get now that she is fully aware of what the toy is. From this point on, it will become actual rape (unless a pony requests her to have sex with them through the toy). Seeing as how she is keeping this a secret, I do not see this happening yet.

If I may, I would like to make a few suggestions.

1. Spike rape. Wait until he is trying to sweet talk Rarity and then surprise anal.

2. Blame Game. Sex isn't the only thing the toy can be used for. You stated that Rainbow could feel Twilight simply holding her. You could have Twilight perform spankings or gropes on the toy, and any pony around would get the blame. (possibly used if Twilight wants to get revenge on someone or simply ruin a relationship)

3. Incest. A few options. I am not so much into Twilight's father. But she could have deep seated desires towards her mother and play them out. Or if she is into Shining, she could rape him anally as he is making love to Cadance. (Alternatively, she could have long harbored feelings towards her former foal sitter, and do her in the same situation. Still technically incest due to marriage)

4. Obvious is the whole Twilight being enamored of Celestia, need I go on with this one?

5. The rapes resulting in pregnancies. Possibly these births being what finally outs Twilight as the rapist (due to obvious features on the newborn foals that match up to Twilight)

6. Maybe explore the option of being able to use the doll as more than touch or sex. Such as the idea of being able to snuff somepony by doing things to the toy.

There are many many more ideas that can be done with this, and I am glad that such a capable writer has come up with this idea. I look forward very much to the coming chapters.

Interesting. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

51 weeks later... still no update:trixieshiftleft:
Ya this is a dead fic:ajbemused:

Moar chapters are coming, I promise!

You broke a promise. :pinkiesad2:

Tags: Futa Twilight, Futa/Female, Slight Cumflation, Voodoo-Type Magic, Some "Technically-Not-Consenting-Sex", Predictable Cliffhangers, and Some Poorly Chosen Cultural References

I see the CMC as characters... Is going to be Foalcon?

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I can't very well say I've seen this idea played out that often before, although I know I've seen it somewhere, and I couldn't for the life of me remember when or where.

Pony_Azathoth?

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One or more of the images under the "sexual proxy voodoo" tag on Derpibooru, maybe?

you must continue! this story. you made a promise! you prooooomiiiiiiiised!!!

Is this wonderful story dead... Or is there still some hope for more chapters! :raritydespair:

Several years later and still waiting for the rest.

Still waiting for that update, hope you continue!

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