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StormLuna
Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
StormLuna
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..................... oh my fucking god, this is raw filth. i thought the original story was bad, but this........ filth is the only word i have to describe such a poorly thoguht out, bullshit story such as this.
5128884 Thanks for the comment lord, I needed something to make me laugh.
5128970 reason to laugh is you actually thinking this story was a good idea at any level.
I think it is a great story. Don't let jerks like lordofmyth bring you down StormLuna. Keep up the great work.
5129102 I +1 this
5128981 Lordofmyth, don't you have something better to do than leave hateful criticism on here? It is people like you who give all critics a bad name.
The original was great..this on was a little ahh to be honest I noticed an error that bugged me in a earlier chapter
Twilight walked over to the front edge of the chair they had Twilight chained into.
Umm...how?
5139826 Thanks for noticing the error so I can fix it. I appreciate it.
I actually liked this story. I think there needs to be more fics where the bad guys come out on top. I don't like fics where everything just goes back to normal afterwords. Makes me feel like i read it for nothing. Anyways, keep up the good work!
5322158 Well I do plan on writing a third one and I also like stories where the bad guys come out on top, which is why a I have stories that end like that. What fun is there in the good guy always winning and everything returning to normal?
Make it 10 years to make it more believable
. After all 15 years is a bit too much don't you think
?
5451474 Colgate's Practice 3 will take place three years after Colgate's Practice 2 so that most of the characters that were there (that weren't killed) will still be there (so it will be 18 years after the first) I chose that for a very specific reason involving the Cake twins. I want them to be of age for this.
I'm impressed
.
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And
...Done great story
. And good luck with the sequel
.
5451503 Alright
. Why not
?
5322158
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5323304
You guy's ever read Cherilee's Garden
5451758 I have and it was Cheerilee's Garden that inspired me to write these stories. I had heard so much stuff about it and couldn't help but read it and I absolutely loved it. It is a stroke of pure genius, probably the best story I have ever read.
5451773 You should read this story then it has two things you love
,gore and betrayal. It gave even me chills
.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5882/pages-of-harmony
5451795 CreepyPastaReader, I know you have enjoyed my Colgate's Practice stories and I do want to let you know that I am working on a third one which I do hope you will enjoy as well. It will be much more graphic than the first two but also in this one Colgate and Amethyst are married so there will at some point be trouble in paradise.
5456992 Excellent
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5458483 CreepypastaReader, Just thought I would let you know that the third and final Colgate's Practice story is up.
5607021 Well then
,guess it's time to read it
.
Or kill them all
Ok then this story is both awesome but crazy
7593782 If you don't like Twilight I'm sure you'll love what's to come.
i find it unrealistic and very rushed that Rainbow Dash wants to torture her
5128970
wow i seriously envy, i wish i thought of an amazing story like Colgate's Practice, and i would curl up in a ball and sob if i heard hate like Lord's comment
7594005 What inspired me to write the Colgate's Practice series was Cheerilee's Garden/Scarlet Harvest. Regarding Lord's comment, I've grown used to those kind of comments and at this point, I just try to keep things civil and not let it bother me.
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true...
....
So did twlight use steroids or not?
7906983 Yes, she did. Colgate merely doctored the results to lure Twilight over to her practice.
7907251 ahh okay thank you i was very confused about that part
That devil hearted alicorn
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Who, Colgate?
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Wow, that was the quickest response I've ever gotten
And yes she is but I was referring to Luna.
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Luna for ascending those two I take it?
10280833
No, for brushing off Cadance and Celestia's deaths and personally murdering Twilight for power.
10280836
Well Colgate and Amethyst did have the power of persuasion and the very idea of Queen Luna seemed irresistible to her.
10280844
Still it doesn't change that she's a monster.
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Oh just wait, somepony will become worse than Luna and I'm sure you know who she is.
10280857
Oh that reminds me of something, can we make a P.M?
10280864
Yes we can.
Colgate should put a spell on Amethyst and Sea Swirl to ensure they are really loyal to her.
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They are loyal to her, she doesn't need a spell!
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Okay. Just asking as we know what happened to Pinkie Pie.
10572190
You'll have to wait and see what happens. There is plenty of series left!