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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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I will review it when I have the time:rainbowdetermined2:.

5609006 Alright, I'm sure you'll like it. I do want you to know that the gore in this one is a bit more detailed and the torture methods are more sadistic.

She also discovered that her hind legs were locked in place with hoof cups
I think you mean hoof cuffs.:ajsmug:

And so is the end of the elements of harmony
RIP :fluttercry::ajsleepy::raritydespair::twilightoops::rainbowderp::pinkiesad2: And might as well :trollestia::applecry:

Well amethyst is losing it what a:twistnerd:
Also Rip.:twistnerd:

That felt a little bit too happy of an ending to me, but it was still a decent fic for a threequile.

6839503 I ended it that way because I wanted it to be a new start for Colgate and Amethyst, one where their marriage is restored to normal and where they were still in Luna's good graces. I was thinking of writing a fourth one where Colgate would continue the torture, destroy her marriage and dethrone Luna but I figured that I had milked this storyline as much as I could.

6841581 oh for the love of Luna please don't I mean who else could you possibly kill

6841872 There are plenty of other ponies she could kill but she has killed all the major characters and the reasons for her killing ponies have pretty much been exhausted. Like I had said earlier, I ended the third one the way I did so it would provide a clear reason as to why there would be no fourth one.

6841872 Forget my first reply to this, I have come up for a reason for Colgate to wipe out more ponies but this time it won't be because of bad teeth or making sugary treats, it is for something much, much bigger.

7304558 oh shit:twilightoops: they're screwed send me a link when it is ready

7304887 Will do. I just started it a couple hours ago but trust me, it will be worth the wait! :pinkiecrazy:

If fluttershy goes to the cops what can they do besides tell luna and that could take awhile

Comment posted by Flutterbat123 deleted Jan 30th, 2017

It could have ended happy but another squel has been made will it ever end happy for anyone in ponyville

I imagine a ponies bloodd sugar level would be higher than a humans cause they are usally bigger and when the griffon and mule where talking im sorry im not about to try and spell thier names anyway when they talked i read it in a french accent

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Happiness is something that Colgate will NEVER allow. She gets her joy from the suffering of others.

Colgate would make the perfect Sith due to her bloodthirsty and backstabbing nature.

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