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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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i see that stormXF3 "infected" you with his curse, eh?

What in the ever loving fuck did I just read...

10921665

StormXF3? What the hell are you talking about? I figured I'd just do something different, something more like what I used to do.


10921668

Something that just came to me this morning.

10921669
the cover you used is from one of his videos

10921675

Huh, never heard of him. If you read the story all the way through, you probably have an idea on what will happen in the sequel. What story I was going to do as a clopfic, I've decided to just wipe things out and make it a gorefic instead.

10921682
okay, i currently work on a clopfic of my own, or better said, fight/gore and sex at the end

10921683

So it will have a bit of everything I'm assuming. I'm not sure if I'll do anything with a combination. I did throw sex into a gorefic once but it was an extremely short scene, short enough it probably could have got away without the sex tag.

10921686
well, the story would be mature die to the sex, can't say yet how the fighting will be

I’m pretty sure most people would have already delivered a roundhouse kick to her head.

10921705

Who, Colgate?
10921688

I would say make the fighting epic! Include plenty of fantasy elements to it.

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sure, though i admit, i have trouble to figure a certain ting out for the sex

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Regarding sex and clop, I think I might be getting burn out on it. I've written so much of it as of late I think I'm running out of unique ideas and well, when you start listening to more heavy metal than anything else, it gets tough.

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maybe a break will help you. Me, its more a choice of characters for it

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Well and I tend to write Colgate in two roles for the most part. I either write her as a warrior or a bloodthirsty sadist. Yes I've written her in light hearted roles too. Thing is, she is my favorite BG pony, I don't know why I write her in such dark roles, I just do.

Well, that was a pizza cutter: All edge and no point.

Don’t floss your teeth? I’ll floss your fucking bones

10921801

Oh she'll floss more than just the bones! Her next victim will be punished even worse!

10921851

Well some people simply aren't into gorefics like this although the thing is, I've written much darker and bloodier than this. Oh and nice avatar by the way.

10921871

It is kind of like with me, if I see a story with the tags Starlight Glimmer, Sunburst, sex and romance, I avoid them....I despise that ship.

10921905

I'm glad to see I'm not the only one. The ones I ship with Starlight are either Trixie, Twilight and Fluttershy.

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Trust me, no one could do anything to this Colgate. She thinks quick and if she thinks anyone is even up to the tiniest thing, she'll put them in their place.

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Didn’t know a pony’s reflex was that quick.

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She is quick with her magic and she can sense if someone is too close to her. This is the Colgate from my ponyverse, quick reflexes, strong magic and not easy to catch off guard.

10922666
Ok, I think I get it.

Comment posted by CSC deleted Aug 2nd, 2021
SLZ

As much as I love and want to see this pony in reality, I think we should stick to paying our dentists.

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Yeah, stick to paying them and taking care of your teeth!

Colgate, surely you know killing customers is bad for business?

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You're talking about the patient she plans on seeing the next day, right? Also, you know who it is she will be seeing, right?

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One who clearly has atrocious dental hygiene.

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One who lives in a bakery.

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...Oh no. You don't mean... Mrs Cake?

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Not Mrs. Cake. She said it would be fun, fun, fun! That should be a dead giveaway.

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Phew! Ah. So she plans on bumping off Pinkie Pie. No parties will reduce sugar consumption.

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Her reason for doing so. I one time did a whole series on her knocking off ponies with bad teeth and those who caused others to not take care of her teeth....bloody gorefics from when I was in a foul mood pretty much all the time.

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Yeah. Between that and what she did in my Terror in Equestria series, she likely has the highest body count of anypony on this whole site....in one story she used black magic to literally blow Eqqus to bits, killing millions.

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Even higher than Rainbow Factory Dash?

11016479

Yep, FAR higher. Colgate in Colgate's Practice has a very high body count too and the methods she uses to torture ponies to death are very unconventional. Cannibalism is normal in that series.

11016531

Yeah, people bring up Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory but when you have someone who gets extra creative when it comes to death and torture, those look tame.

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Then again, a doctor would know how to kill somebody.

11016548

Killing those who piss her off is kind of Colgate's thing.

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In those stories, at least. I can't recall her getting much development in the show.

11017014

Well she only had one episode where she had a role so of course not.

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Yeah and that is one of my absolute favorite episodes.

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