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anonpencil


Don't read my stuff if you have a weak stomach or are easily bothered by traumatic genitalia damage. That's seriously all I've got in here!

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Oh shit. This is about to get serial.

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Oh my god. Even on this story??
Just...wow.

Also, I'll make some better cover art for this later...draw a thing.

I'm calling it, the killer is Hollywood Super-star Shia LaBeouf.

6464914 If it was the legendary Shia LeBeouf then everyone would have heard someone shout 'Shia LeBeouf!' upon being hit.

"Ok, Spike, you stay inside and keep this library tidy."
Spike always gets the most dangerous jobs.

Good chapter, Pencil. It's shaping up to be a really good murder mystery. I hope you continue it, because I'll be keeping an eye on it.

6466369 Heh, glad you're liking it right now. It's about 12 parts long I think, all of which are done and just need touching up to put here. We'll see how well it's held up over the years.

Man, this is one of the darkest fics I have read on this site to date.


IN OTHER NEWS; the possible AnonSparkle ship is under construction in the shipping yard, as of this chapter. More on this paring as the story continues. Back to you anonpencil.

I really thought Anon did it when I read it in your pastebin.

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Yeah, but nah. That would be too easy for me.

Finish reading first chapter. Thinking to myself "Man, that was a great start."
THEN i realized the author was Pencil, because i don't check before clicking stuff in my feed (for some reason).

mfw
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Seriously though, that was some good shit. Different, but good.

6471336 What, you think I only write things that are distressingly disgusting?
Nah, I can write dark distressing too. I have breadth!

I think the killer is Jeff the killer it's kinda obvious

6471473 Wait, your stories were supposed to be distressing/disgusting? I thought Sea of Trouble was a romance story. Implications unpleasant.

“I’m not going to let anything happen to you. No one else is going to get hurt while I’m on watch.”

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Yup.

Haven't started reading yet, but the cover art immediately takes my mind to a horror setting.

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Then I did a somewhat good job, for a quick thing. Thank you.

. . . . Really?

No magic stun spells? No magical levitation? Not even a friggin' weapon to defend themselves?

Nothing?

I mean, I get this is suppose to be a serious story, but. . . a lack of common sense kinda ruins it for me.

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This was also when Twilight was still figuring out magic in the show. Nowadays? pfff, she'd just fly off or turn him into an orange or something.

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Oh yeah, you did say this was the beginning or close to the second season or something. . . I forget it wasn't until the third season she could teleport like no ones business.

Still. . . I would figure a human like Anon would've taken something to protect themselves, especially after they were attacked so recently.

I remember someone broke into my home and tried to steal my shit. Luckily, cops came and took them away, but I couldn't sleep without a knife under my pillow for a month straight. That was years ago, and even today I still look over my shoulder every now and then.

So to me, it was kinda hard to believe he'd go back to the very same place he was attacked without any insurance of protection for them both.

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Yeh, agreed. But Anon is dumb sometimes.
I blame bloodloss/concussion. Also the fact that ponies don't have lots of weapons around.

...ponies should have more swords. This would make me happy.

Yep the killer is definitely Jeff the killer I knew it cx

Emily is a nice name for a crowbar.

Well from the Crowbar I know exactly who it was... Gordon Freeman

What the actual shit was I smoking, left that in because I'm too damn amused at myself for it.

I'm just going on a hunch here, but i bet you ask yourself that a lot ain't ya?
( ͡͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ °)

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Nahhhh, more often it's "How drunk WAS I?"

Ah yes the return of the Why Boner, with a fiery vengeance. Also nice chapter.

I'm loving this so far:pinkiehappy:

I love the chapter :pinkiehappy:....
But Twilight why the hell did you think now is the perfect time to get laid:rainbowlaugh:

>“C-cumming,” you manage to warn her in a hoarse whisper.
>in a hoarse whisper.
>hoarse whisper.

Man this story is tense. So many moments where my heart is in my mouth, I can't imagine what--

Oh.

They're doing the horizontal monster mash.

...

You guys okay?

...

Not worried about Hollywood Superstar Shia LaBeouf?

No?

No no, it's fine. Carry on.

...

Pshhh...

...

...

Should have called this story "When They Cum".

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Psh, of course! What, never heard of Thank-God-We're-Alive-Sex?

...I can actually vouch this is a very real thing, aside from bad quotes from mediocre tv shows.

And yes, I was so SO hoping someone had made that pun. Thank you, finally.

I just read the first chapter. Realy different from your usual works, but still intriguing.

Hell yea, this story is great! Its exciting and romantic, and dark and everithing!
And has sex?
yep!^^
I wonder how it will continue from there, and if they will ever catch the big bad human.
But friendship always wins, right? riiiight? guys....? :twilightoops:

Realy? He just lets Twilight go and warn everypony? Realy?
But then again, this man is not exactly sane...
Well, im anxious for the next chapter :pinkiesmile:

Mein gott, Pencil. When you write vanilla, you just had to pick a diabetus inducing one, aren't you?
And why do i feel dirty for reading this cute, romantic and consensual sex scene?

The feeling of her juices leaking out onto your pants only makes you harder.

>only makes you harder
>only makes you harder
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And of course
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I'm not sorry.

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Where the actual fuck did you find that second one.
And yes. I actually happen to like sweet romantic vanilla sex sometimes. Shut up, I'm not going soft, I'm not sentimental, now dare you insinuate such things.

“Because I know where all the pony’s live,”

Ponies*
You've made that mistake quite a few times now. Silly Pencil.

I'm wondering what's going to happen in the last 4 chapters, and I do hope it's a happy ending.

Looking forward to the next update

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I FUCKING KNOW. I have no clue WHY my computer corrects that to Pony's whenever I write ponies, but Just...it...it doesn't makes SENSE and if I don't correct it...ugh.
Thank you. If you spot any others, please let me know.

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Where the actual fuck did you find that second one.

Google Image Search is a terrifying place indeed.

I mean, you don’t have to act like you are or hurt people.

you don't have to act like you are

Fucking hell that's deep.

Anon's spitting some wicked sick philosophy here, Pencil, Jesus, I wasn't ready.

Still going good, I read this story whenever I'm tired as hell so in my stupor I really didn't see the twist coming.
Keep it up, ponygirl.

Ey, yo, Twilight. Why you so horny, grrril?

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