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For centuries, Twilight felt like she didn't belong to Equestrium after the lost of the ones she loved once, but everything changed when a human arrived in Equestria.

Now, after five years of research, he finally finds a way back to earth, still not realizing about the feelings Twilight had been developing towards him.

But it's not like she will do something in order to make him stay here alongside her...

Right?

Warning: Anon story.

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zeldawolffang

zeldawolffang #1 · Jul 22nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

i hope hes ok

Blindeye

Blindeye #2 · Jul 22nd, 2015 · 3 · ·

6233175 Idk, is he?

Blindeye

Blindeye #3 · Jul 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

6233782 I agree with you, it was kind of rushed. My first idea was to make a story based on Twilight's past and what happened to the rest of her friends as the time went by, but personalities such as Fluttershy's and Rarity's are hard for me to pull off, so I decided to make it easier for me, but still it was rushed, and for the spelling mistakes, I'm going to check it over once again.

For Anon tho, i think it is time to finish off with him.

Thanks for the comment btw, I've really appreciated the criticism.