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Not all Alicorns are female and not all Alicorns are royalty. Some are working class ponies that the masses can relate with.



This story is a sequel to Terror in Equestria: Rise of the Dark Queen

The Dark Queen Twilight has just cemented herself as the sole and supreme ruler of all of Equestria. She is extremely powerful yet she thirsts for even more power. She thirsts for the ability to be able to see anything she desires in the whole world. To achieve this, she must launch an attack on a heavily guarded city that is protected by numerous Alicorns. Will she achieve her goal or will she be driven out and risk losing her own empire?

Chapters (13)
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Whelp, this'll keep me amused for a few hours:pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh:Hahahaha Your Hate A Flash Sentry No :raritywink:
Two Interventions And The Void

Yai :yay:
Now Expect The 3 Season Of The Greatest Series :pinkiehappy:

I Hope Not Be Much Hehe, See What New Enemy That Dares Impose Oneself To A Goddess As Twili.:twilightsmile:

3064645 Mujaker, this will most likely be like Back to the Future and Lord of the Rings, the third part will be the final part. I'm not going to spoil anything with this one. You and FrostMane will just have to wait until I finish this one.


Good :pinkiehappy:

One question, will Opportunity Of Romance In The 3 Part, Every Queen Needs SomePony Has Your Side, I recommend Luna Or Nightmare Moon. :twilightsmile:

3065998 Mujaker, regarding romance. I am undecided. When I write these the words just flow as I go along. It will depend on whether it comes to my mind or not. I am also thinking that if the third part is long enough to where adding the last part into it, that the third part won't include what I ultimately have planned for Twily and there would have to be a Terror in Equestria 4. I can't guarantee it. It just depends on how things flow in the third one.



I Said Because I Love About The Fic Of Romance, Special The TwiLuna Or MoonLight, And There A Chance In This Series For The 2 Of Them. :pinkiehappy:

3069525 We shall see what I decide to do as to whether any romance will be involved or not. The way I have Twily right now she would probably not be a very romantic pony as she is obsessed with power. Maybe later on her heart will thaw to the point where she could show love. The way I have her right now she has a heart of stone and ice. Well those do make the best power hungry leaders! I suppose I could look at it this way, even Hitler had a woman in his life, yeah he didn't marry her until the day before they killed themselves as the Red Army was marching into Berlin. Just wait and see, I want it to be a surprise.

:twilightsmile: I had just thought this up, but I don't know if it their was a subplot in the third story, but I'll say it anyways.

What if their is a subplot where their is a underground rebellion that Twilight doesn't know about and is ran by someone inside Ponyville, but winds up getting caught by her only the realize that she can't use her powers to win him over the her side? :rainbowhuh:


I Get Excited The Wait,:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3071939 The Ferbguy. I am thinking that might be something for a fourth story, if I decide to write one. If Twily conquers the whole world, there might be a rebellion that happens then. She cast the loyalty spell on Luna and Cosmos. Those two could then work together to take the world back. They would need a duplication spell and a loyalty spell at least. Yet to do this I would probably transform Luna into Nightmare Moon. Were Celestia and Galaxia would play into this I am not sure. Good suggestion though.

3072162 just saying I thought this up while I was reading this.

I like the Idea of getting Luna and Cosmos starting the rebellion, but I feel as if it won't be done after finishing up the next story. :raritydespair:

The idea of their being a rebellion in Ponyville is a genius idea but why wait until the third story to do it :rainbowhuh:

3072209 The Ferbguy. If I decide to have that happen, it will happen in a fourth one if I decide to do a fourth one, after Twilight has conquered everything. Trying to put that in the third one would either compress it too much, make it much longer than the others and definitely wouldn't fit in with what I am doing in the third one. We will just have to wait and see if I decide to write a 4th one as that is where the rebellion would be.

i thought a few chapters back you wrote that Twilight lied to her friends and said that she was in Canterlot? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
how do they know now? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::rainbowwild:

3120773 Rarity buys into what Shining Armor told her, that she was sent into exile, not banished. It was him saying that they were no longer together that make me decided to have her want him.

Hi um i was wondering were is the first book of the seares im kind of counfused just fro the first chapter of this book im not saying its bad or any thang im just counfused is all

3341231 The first one is called Terror in Equestria: Rise of the Dark Queen. Check my page. Over by where my stories are click on browse all stories and you will find it.

3064100 best thing to happen so far :rainbowlaugh:

The mommy bit was just D'AAAAAAAWWWWWWW:heart::heart::heart:

3069525 I wrote a story called Love and Power: A New Dawn which centers around a Celestia/Twilight love story which also leads to Luna becoming queen because of an ancient law her mother wrote.

3064100 Just wait, Flash will eventually return but what awaits him will be most unpleasant for him.

3341231 The first story is called Terror in Equestria: Rise of the Dark Queen

It has two endings, one where evil Twilight is defeated and one where she conquers Equestria, which is the ending that the rest of the series continues from.

3064100 I'll admit, I hate Flash Sentry too.

5844890 With that being the case, you would love Terror in Equestria 7: Battle for Control of the World where Twilight brutally executes Flash Sentry.


But first, MAKE HIM SUFFER GREAT PAIN!!!! Afterwards...DEATH!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:
yes...yes...agony...blood...beautiful crimson blood...*says while caressing polished black skull*

Twilight replied, "You got direct hits on all three targets and your energy is almost as powerful as mine is!  I don't know where you got that much energy from, but this is beyond amazing."

I don't think that was a good idea saying that your highness. If in any case where Colgate were to be set free from the loyalty spell somehow, she could betray you and attempt to dethrone you.

Rarity added, "Why you?  You are nothing special."
Rarity looked shocked and shouted, "HOW ARE YOU ALMOST AS POWERFUL AS HER?  YOU'RE NOT ROYALTY!"
Next it was Rarity's turn.  Rarity said, "I don't know why we have to engage in such ridiculous activities.  How is this going to help us?"
Rarity replied, "Oh, you're talking about her plan to go and steal that relic and library from Faustica, aren't you?"

Shut up Raribitch or it is the void for you!

My Queen, I hope you take away Rarity's wings before she does something she might will regret.

Twilight Velvet said, "I know. She hates the formal traditions of old but I think this whole military thing she has going is far more rigid. Why a traditional royal guard isn't good enough for her is beyond me."

Because they suck at their jobs.

Shame we'll never get a scene like this again in the TiE series.

Bye flash, don't die to quickly

The one that evil twilight wins


Banishment to the void won't kill Flash. Being in the void is like being in limbo, no time passes for you so IF you somehow manage to escape, it will be like you never left, you don't age any.

You know and understand this how?

Did twilight forget Celestia, Luna, and there parents fled to the place she's about to rob

Impossible challenge, have raribitch shut up for a day.


She knows that's where they live but she isn't concerned because she is more than powerful enough to handle them.

Twilight replied, "You know big brother, you are right. I have also thought of something. Once I release LaurFa and cast the loyalty spell on her. She will go with us. The Alicorns there would never use their energy against her. She could have them all gather in an area away from her library while we pack the library materials into boxes and then transfer those to our ship. During that time, I will go and retrieve the jade (Alicorn) and the emerald plate. But I do think we need more than just the unicorn soldiers being able to fly. We also need other normal unicorns transformed."

you put unicorn

i know right? they totally suck at their jobs and because they barely have any power compared to the Dark Alicorns and changelings. i dont think they can even defeat a changeling spy! thats how much they suck at their jobs. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:


When it comes to the traditional royal guard, they are rather pointless. That is why throughout this series, especially once Twilight takes full control and then those who challenge her further down the road choose dark Alicorns and changelings, because they actually know how to fight!....they do more than guard Celestia's cake!

LOL I KNOW RIGHT?! LMHO (laughing my helmet off) :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

why are her eyes green in here if they don't turn sombra green until 3?

“So Twilight, what did you do today?”

““Oh you know, casting those who dare try to oppose me into the void, the usual... why?”

*facehoof* “You don’t like taking things seriously, do you?”

If she makes common ponies Alicorns, can she make common changelings changeling queens?

Why is the 'BADASS TWILIGHT' meter going to explode one day?

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