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I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.

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This was fantastic. Well in my opinion anyway there will always be people that will dislike something just because, but to say i liked this would be a MASSIVE understatement. Congratulations sir you have yourself a follower, a gold star, a thumbs up and also take a smattering of these for good measure :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 10/10

5001681 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

You could continue this easily, and many more ponies would come to read it.

5002083 I'm strongly considering it, as I can see it has a good possibility for a storyline. Also, glad you like it. :pinkiehappy:

I like it! I really apreciate if you write more! XD

5002149 we'll see, but first I wanna finish my older story before getting too deep into a new one. I think I'll keep this a oneshot for the moment, but will but will likely expand it further later on... or maybe I'll write them at the same time, I just don't know...but anyhow i'm changing it's status to incomplete

Oh please! Write more!

5002529 Everyone wants more! Ok, ok fine, I can guarantee I'll write more, but I won't say when. I already had thoughts of continuing this even before I posted it, but the overwhelming support for it this has sealed the deal.

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Comment posted by LegionofPony deleted Sep 17th, 2014

Keep going, not enough Mac X Dash on this site!

I wouldn't mind to see more of this :rainbowwild::eeyup:

5003621 More coming eventually!

5004719 I'm glad you liked it, and i'll be writing at least a bit more of this later.

I remember this old headcanon. The thing about wings, I mean.

5005321 Well, it seems to be a very popular belief among the fandom as well.

There's no way such a masterpiece can ever be a one-shot. The way you defined their relationship at the end was beautiful, almost a "happily ever after!"

5005345 Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked my more subtle approach.

5005325 I think it went out of fashion a while back, but I'm glad there are still others who think it's an interesting theory.
Though, I honestly wonder how one could stimulate a horn: It's basically a tusk with magical properties.

Make more ... this ship is so awesome and that fic was amazing! Hnnn I want more.

... Write more or Pinkie will come for you :pinkiecrazy: and you'd make shy cry :fluttershyouch:

5005463 I already said I was gonna write some more! :pinkiesmile: Also, thank you for your compliment! :pinkiehappy:

The much requested, and much anticipated (I think) chapter two is now posted. Please do enjoy.

If there's gonna be a third part, you're gonna wanna bring up the fact Mac didn't return home in this chapter.
I'm not saying you have to make a third, just that this should be addressed in a hypothetical third chapter.

5010590 Good observation. I shall specify that in the end of this chapter, although it was heavily implied by him falling asleep there.

Hell I thought the first part was good, glad to see more up so quickly. It is like Da Magicks :coolphoto:

Dash is going to have to find a way to pay him back for this.

I slightly modified the ending of the first chapter, placing more emphasis on the feather Mac put behind her ear. Feel free to read it if you're so inclined.

Nice and naughty.

I take it, that Big Mac will soon be thanked more thoroughly...:rainbowwild:

5005453 as far a i understand it yes it is a bone made of alicorn (go figure) and only become sensitive when in use, thus could be hit to interrupt spell casting, and hurt alot, or turn somepony on

Okay, that was far cuter than I imagined it in my head X3

Note: Added a minor change to Chapter One, adding a tree to the grass field. Why will be made clear later.

(Full disclosure, yes I'm working on Chapter 3.) :pinkiehappy:

Another note since i'm at it: The above change made me decide to change my uploading method, as I excluded an important detail for future chapters by uploading previous ones too soon. Instead of uploading the story, then nitpicking and adding stuff to it later, I'm instead going to retain it until it's a higher quality, like a normal writer would. This means you won't get to read a lesser-quality draft of the story sooner, but also means I can put more consideration and detail into the chapter without you having to read it 100 times to detect the minor nuances I've added. If I do, however, add them to the site, they'll be locked and only accessible by me and my co-editor until they're ready for release.

TL:DR: I'm going to keep future chapters off the site until I believe they're ready to be released, instead of uploading then improving it on-site.

100 likes ~ Get pumped! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the 100 likes y'all! :pinkiehappy::heart:

I'm happy to announce Chapter 3's rough draft is written, and now it just needs to be nit-picked over my new editor, Chompski and myself, and made worthy of your (eager?) eyeballs. Then it shall be revealed to the masses to thunderous ovation....or maybe just one person clapping? Utter silence? Ok, that works too.... I'll just shut up now.. :ajsleepy:

After much editing and perfecting, I present to you Chapter 3!

New chapter. Such shiny. Wow. :derpytongue2:

Thsi was awesome, I always see this one minute scene, since I also have the "sensitive wings" head-cannon XD

(From 5.00 - 6.00 ^^)

5026144 Heh. Mine's something like that, but a lot less Japanese. :rainbowwild:

Really good chapter, started so sweet ^^

5026183 Does that mean it ended badly? :rainbowderp:

I kid. Thank you.

And now you most definitely get my up-thumb! :raritywink:

Dirty Stalker Twilight
Hiding in the bushes
Gonna watch you fuckin'
Like dirty little bunnies.

5027277 Well, it did say they'd be getting an HONEST view on their relationship... take that as you will.

Thanks for 1,000+ views guys! Y'all rock! :eeyup:

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