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LegionofPony
I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.
LegionofPony
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Off to a very good start.
nice work
So we’re just gunna throw cannon out the window for some sloppy Twilestia… I dig it
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Starts interesting. I trust your high-quality writing enough that I believe this will be one lovely fanfic. Eagerly awaiting further chapters :)
Well you definitely got me interested
Two years! The commissioner must have been losing his mind by the end haha.
nice work
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Well, Celestia did re-write history to suit her own narrative in canon. Not really a stretch to assume that she didn't do it more than advertised.
Впервые вижу см а не дюймы
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For one I’m not entirely sure when she did that, but also Star Swirl and the pillars are way older then her and seen throughout the comics and season 7 finale. That’s not exactly something you can “rewrite” as it were.
Unless you mean everything she’s saying in this fic is a changed history
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Ah, yes, that. I honestly added that on a whim, but you're right in that I'm kinda changing the backstory quite a lot. I guess I was thinking of how ancient and influential the princesses are, and kinda forgot that there were those even before them...including the Pillars. As such, yeah, I'm gonna just go ahead and remove this bit outright.
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Hey man it’s all good, it’s your fic after all
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Just add the Alternate Universe tag and you'll be fine.
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I mean, episode 1. Luna being erased fron history to start.
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She wasn't erased, her story just changed over the generations. She had a holiday named after alter ego because that’s how ponies/their culture remembered her over time.
Now you could say why didn’t Celestia try keep the facts straight, which there’s probably a multitude of answers you could give but that’s still a little different then Celestia going out of her way to actively rewrite/erased history
nice work
This story is just a blast!
this was a wildly intresting chapter,Can you make a Luna and Big Mac fic
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какого хрена ты на русском пишешь
nice work
I think you meant diameter, the width of a circle, not circumference, which is a circle's perimeter. A 10cm circumference would be a little more than 3cm wide, which is way too thin for something 36cm long.
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Yeah, always been bad with proportions, especially in measurement systems that aren't my native ones. Thanks, fixed. Actually, went back to circumference. If it were 10cm in diameter and 36 long, she'd literally have a slightly-longer 2-liter soda bottle of a dick. Bit excessive, given ponies are smaller than actual horses, even Celestia. As is, it's still about the circumference of a 1 liter bottle of soda, and double that at the tip when fully flared, so I'm quite sure that's some sufficient girth there for Twi to enjoy.Honestly hoping for an epilog, good work.
This was beyond intance and wild I hope there will be a epilog between this to.
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Ахахахахха, не знал что я не один русский тут.
Но вообще, почему бы и да? Тут не запрещено писать на Русском.
Porn with plot, lots and lots of plot, that what I read it for the plot. Nothing less, nothing more, great story keep it up
nice work
This was beyond beautifully heart touching ,I still hope there is a sequel or a pov swap of Luna finding a love to hopefully 1Big mac and then making a herd with Mac by adding Fluttershy,Marble pie and Sugar Belle,or 2 Trouble Shoes.
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Thanks, hope you're liking it so far!
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Well, I went through several dry spells over that time, (and a good amount of new video game content) in that time, so I'm grateful for their patience, and can only hope it came out at a quality worth the wait.
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Thanks! Glad to see you're enjoying the story! If you wanna read the rest, feel free to watch/follow me if you haven't already, as I'll be posting a new chapter every day until it's done, as well as any future content I release.
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If you really want me to write that fic, I accept paid commissions. If you're interested, read my commission guidelines to make sure it's something I'm willing to write and, if it is, PM me with the details. If we both agree on a plot, I'll put you on my queue, and start on it when I'm done with the other ones before you.
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Porn with plot is best porn.
nice work
Celabration time, com'on!!
This just keeps getting better and better, the mane six, spike and the rest of Twi’s family are gunna loose they’re minds when they find out the news
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The mane 6 already know of her pregnancy, if you read the most recent chapter.
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I mean, when they find out who the “father” is and that they’re both Alicorns
oh hell yeah
nice work
nice work on chapter
In both interactions you described Twilight being positioned with a spine towards Celestia's belly. The problem is such position can't physically work because Twilight wouldn't be able to lick Celestia's marehood and be licked back at the same time without some excessive backward head bending. On top of that Twilight have a horn which would impale Celestia's stallionhood in the first case and her belly in the second. Well, in second case she could have rotated her head a bit, but you haven't mention anything like that. In both interactions it makes more sense for them to assume classic 69 position.
Weddings gunna be wild, can’t Wait
nice work
Beautiful
Going to be quite the honeymoon for Twilight
My little broodmare, my little broodmare...
AHHH AHHH AHHH AHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Like being thrown by Segata Sanshiro
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Nope, only in the latter one. In the first one, they were in basically a sideways 69, with each facing the other's crotch. Guess I wasn't very specific, sorry.
As for the second one, yes, Twi was on her belly with Celestia mounting over her. You're right in that this would be VERY difficult to accomplish with deepthroating a cock that big at that angle, and that her horn could be moved to rest diagonally along her flank.
This is semi-true for the second one, as I commented above, but not the first one, as Twi's horn was pointing towards Celestia's haunches, with Twi's muzzle in Cellie's crotch. I specified their position in the first session more clearly, and changed the first one so Twi starts out behind Celestia, then is moved into a sideways 69, and the second session so Twi's laying on her back instead, a much more realistic position when deepthroating something so long (no weird angles, just a straight shot down her throat if she straightens her neck), and her horn pointing towards the floor/bed when her head's back. Thanks for pointing this out!
wedding night consummation in front of wittnesses,also known as a "bedding ceremony"?
what
oh..my
royal tradition is weird,but awesome
how uncouth
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Haven't re-read that chapter, but in the first case you specifically mentioned that Celestia's schlong were on Twi's head and were touching her spine. So, I had really hard time to imagine how this could possibly work out.