Rainbow Dash gets a wing cramp while flying over Sweet Apple Acres, and has to make a crash landing. Good thing Big Macintosh is there to help! But things get a bit more heated then expected: pegasus wings are very sensitive to the touch...
If there's gonna be a third part, you're gonna wanna bring up the fact Mac didn't return home in this chapter. I'm not saying you have to make a third, just that this should be addressed in a hypothetical third chapter.
I slightly modified the ending of the first chapter, placing more emphasis on the feather Mac put behind her ear. Feel free to read it if you're so inclined.
Note: Added a minor change to Chapter One, adding a tree to the grass field. Why will be made clear later.
(Full disclosure, yes I'm working on Chapter 3.)
Another note since i'm at it: The above change made me decide to change my uploading method, as I excluded an important detail for future chapters by uploading previous ones too soon. Instead of uploading the story, then nitpicking and adding stuff to it later, I'm instead going to retain it until it's a higher quality, like a normal writer would. This means you won't get to read a lesser-quality draft of the story sooner, but also means I can put more consideration and detail into the chapter without you having to read it 100 times to detect the minor nuances I've added. If I do, however, add them to the site, they'll be locked and only accessible by me and my co-editor until they're ready for release.
TL:DR: I'm going to keep future chapters off the site until I believe they're ready to be released, instead of uploading then improving it on-site.
I'm happy to announce Chapter 3's rough draft is written, and now it just needs to be nit-picked over my new editor, Chompski and myself, and made worthy of your (eager?) eyeballs. Then it shall be revealed to the masses to thunderous ovation....or maybe just one person clapping? Utter silence? Ok, that works too.... I'll just shut up now..
The much requested, and much anticipated (I think) chapter two is now posted. Please do enjoy.
If there's gonna be a third part, you're gonna wanna bring up the fact Mac didn't return home in this chapter.
I'm not saying you have to make a third, just that this should be addressed in a hypothetical third chapter.
5010590 Good observation. I shall specify that in the end of this chapter, although it was heavily implied by him falling asleep there.
Hell I thought the first part was good, glad to see more up so quickly. It is like Da Magicks
Dash is going to have to find a way to pay him back for this.
5011250 Hm...
I slightly modified the ending of the first chapter, placing more emphasis on the feather Mac put behind her ear. Feel free to read it if you're so inclined.
Nice and naughty.
I take it, that Big Mac will soon be thanked more thoroughly...
5012548 it is quite possible...
5013001 Makes sense to me.
5016979 Glad you liked it!
Note: Added a minor change to Chapter One, adding a tree to the grass field. Why will be made clear later.
(Full disclosure, yes I'm working on Chapter 3.)
Another note since i'm at it: The above change made me decide to change my uploading method, as I excluded an important detail for future chapters by uploading previous ones too soon. Instead of uploading the story, then nitpicking and adding stuff to it later, I'm instead going to retain it until it's a higher quality, like a normal writer would. This means you won't get to read a lesser-quality draft of the story sooner, but also means I can put more consideration and detail into the chapter without you having to read it 100 times to detect the minor nuances I've added. If I do, however, add them to the site, they'll be locked and only accessible by me and my co-editor until they're ready for release.
TL:DR: I'm going to keep future chapters off the site until I believe they're ready to be released, instead of uploading then improving it on-site.
Thanks for the 100 likes y'all!
I'm happy to announce Chapter 3's rough draft is written, and now it just needs to be nit-picked over my new editor, Chompski and myself, and made worthy of your (eager?) eyeballs. Then it shall be revealed to the masses to thunderous ovation....or maybe just one person clapping? Utter silence? Ok, that works too.... I'll just shut up now..
Thsi was awesome, I always see this one minute scene, since I also have the "sensitive wings" head-cannon XD
(From 5.00 - 6.00 ^^)
the video does not exist ;-;
5458042 It was an anime guy rubbing an "angel"'s wings, and presumably she cums because of it.
Jeeze, RD is a selfish lover. Two trysts now and she's not once thought to return the favor. Poor Big Mac
Just wanted to point out that "eeyup" and "eenope" are actually 2 syllable words, not 1.