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A simple plot, but I know one day, good things are coming our way.

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This story is a sequel to A Guard and a Princess


Evil creatures raising from the underworld, a national sports event, an entire other dimension—what will cause the newly-married Twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry to be apart next? Well, now that they are reunited after Princess Twilight received her new castle and role, hopefully nothing.


This story is the sequel to A Guard and a Princess. It is written in third-person, and occasionally includes the footnote style of The Celestia Code, a story that I would highly recommend if you like Twilight Sparkle. It also takes place after season 4 and Rainbow Rocks, with a little bit of a timeline mix up that you all will surely ignore because you are awesome people. It does contain minor Rainbow Rocks spoilers.


Artwork by: Emkay.
Edited/Pre-read by: SpitFlame and Gemstone the Unicorn.


First Story: A Guard and a Princess.
Second Story: A Prince and a Princess.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 191 )

Dang, that was fast! :pinkiehappy: I can't wait to see the rest of the story. :twilightsmile:

5087337 More to come soon :D

And queue the downvotes lol.

Reunited and it feels so good! I haven't read this yet, but I am certain I will enjoy the heck out of it! :raritywink:

5087351 That first part you said was going to be the name of the chapter, but I didn't want to be cliche lol!

And I can't fight this feeling anymooooore!

I missed FlashLight. I MISSED THEM SO MUCH! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: Now there back! And I love it! YEAAAAAASSS! Hehe Brad Sentry, Dumbass. Hehe:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::yay::yay:

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Thanks for the comments, guys. I'll try my best to keep it up. It all depends on my health and work/school schedules. But I have good things planned for this one :twilightsmile:

Downvotes are just butthurt people who don't like FlashLight.
Oh, I don't like it either, but still, downvoting just for that one reason?
That's pretty stupid.

5087571 Ehhhh.. it's always been that way on here, though. I try to ignore it. Thanks for being an exception :ajsmug:

Spacecowboy
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Wow. Such Flash. Such Hate.

Seems time hasn't dulled that blade. Good luck.

Man, I've been looking forward to this. I get the feeling that Ponyville might get a new captain of the royal guard. I'll be sure to keep an eye on this story.

5087621 Thanks. I don't think time ever will heal it. It's even worse now with Rainbow Rocks' Flash. Oh well, I had a Flash Sentry story get to over 1000 likes (the only one, to my knowledge). It has been a fun ride, and I'm doing it for myself and those who enjoy it, regardless of rating :scootangel:

Spacecowboy
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I recall that, it's why I felt the urge to comment on the sequel. Commented bout the hate there as well when it was featured, I believe. And 1k isn't too shabby, so grats on that milestone for a story.

Have a counter-upvote to negate one of those downvotes. Eventually I'll bring myself to read this story's prequel, it's been sitting buried somewhere around here. I still haven't formed an opinion on him one way or the other.

5087635 Yeah, I think you did. Funny, many commented hate, and others commented against the hate, and I think that's what made so many people check it out and made it get featured in the end.

If you don't particularly like Flash Sentry in the EG version, you may actually not hate my version of him. I liked that he had a lack of a personality in the canon, because that way I can give him more of one.

If you do read this and the prequel, great, thank you! If you don't, that's okay, I don't really mind. Just one warning: the first story had no pre-reader/editor (except for the last chapter). There will be many mistakes. I'm trying to go through the whole thing now to clean it up a little bit. But I have to say, the idea and the jokes are some of the best things I have ever come up with.

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Cool. Looking forward to that part. Incidentally, are you going to say if Flash was one of Tirek's victims?

5087685 I actually originally wrote that in this chapter, but it seemed too "telly", so I took it out for now. It may be mentioned in Chapter 2, but just briefly. This chapter was originally going to be about 4000 words, but I wanted to narrow it down to the better parts.

5087693
Uh, are you talking about Flash becoming Ponyville's captain of the guard, or Flash having his magic stolen by Tirek?

5087705 Actually (and ironically), both. But my reply was specifically about the Tirek part it was specifically in this chapter before I removed it for future use. But incidentally, I was going to also talk about Flash's new duties in this chapter, but it can be a chapter all on its own.

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At least Flash won't have to deal with Optimus and Sentinel anymore.

5087732
Oh, boy, :rainbowderp:

Incidentally, one detail you'll have to fill in is who replaced Flash as Canterlot's captain now that he's in Ponyville.

5087753 Lol. You're on a roll, you know that? That's being covered in the next chapter as well.

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Looking forward to it. When will the next chapter be out?

5087787 Not sure. Going to work on it tomorrow. With me, it could be a day, a week, a month. It depends on my health and my busy schedule. I'm hoping for next Thursday latest.

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A. A ha. A ha ha ha. A ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.

dear author of this story

why should i even read this

i dont support flash sentry twilight shipping

sincerely, ThEvErYdErPyBrOnY

btw im going to add this to my to read later list

5088713 If you don't support FlashLight, then I have to say that the only reason why you should read this is because I gave the pony Flash Sentry a personality that he never was given in the show or movies. Flash Sentry is almost an OC in this story, and not the perfect, hot, witty guy he is in Equestria Girls or Rainbow Rocks.

So even if you hate Flash Sentry, you can still enjoy the jokes, adventure, and cute scenes, because it's my version of Flash Sentry.

If you still won't enjoy it, there's no reason why you need to read it.

You know, if you ever want too involve Twi and Flashy having foals, I think you should you the popular off springs Starburst and Nightlight Jr. from kilala97.

5088785 Yeah, I see those OCs all the time on DeviantArt. Sorry, but it's not going to happen. I mean with me using somebody else's OCs. In my opinion, OC drama causes 75% of the unneeded drama in this fandom, and I'd just rather steer clear of that. I'm already walking on coals using Flash Sentry in a story (as you can tell by the downvotes).

5088728 so... different personality... like an oc... i guess i'll give this a try

5088794 Cool, thanks. You don't necessarily have to read the first story, but a lot of people did like it. It's long and not edited, so there will be mistakes, but I have to say, it was hella fun to write.

5088792 Do you mean that your not using the OC kids for there off springs or do you mean that Twi and Flashy aren't having kids at all in your story?

5088808 The first part. I'm not going to use somebody else's OC as Flash and Twilight's foal. I won't say anything about the second part :pinkiehappy: No spoilers.

5088813 Can you explain again why it would be bad to use the Starburst and Nightlight Jr. OCs again?

5088886 Just because people treat their OCs like their own children. I've been in this fandom for a long time, and I have major freakouts over people using other people's OCs, even with permission. I just would rather do my own thing and not cause any more drama.

If I don't use somebody else's OC, I don't create another problem for myself. That's all :pinkiesmile:

5088925 You answered it better than I did, actually.

5088921 You do know that alot of users have been using kilala97 OCs right? Heck I can count ten stories or more that been using his OCs and like these two stories. MLP Next Generation: Know Fear! Like a Virgin. So far I know, kilala97 hasn't complain about these users using his OCs.

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