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A simple plot, but I know one day, good things are coming our way.

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Applejack calls Pinkie Pie her 'best friend'. Big mistake.


A random, sort-of funny, and sort-of scary short story inspired by Markiplier's video of the same name.


Artwork by: PikachuX1000.

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heh. Heh hehhah hahha haha ha!!!!!

4394606 Ha. Never saw that before.

Whenever they would invite ask her what she doing, it was always the same answer, "Sorry, y'all, Ah'm workin' today."

I imagine you may have left "invite" there by accident or meant there to be more.

She sracted the back of her head with her hoof as she made her decision.

You kind of misspelled "scratched" there. :twilightsheepish:

Okay, enough with the technical things.

… Applejack needed a book that would relieve her of her stress and satisfy her desires. The book she chose was Fifty Shades of Hay- a how-to book for becoming a successful farmer.

So that isn't what I imagined it was about. :rainbowlaugh: Perhaps this means the similarly title book in "A Guard and a Princess" is not what I thought it was about either.

When you first put forth the idea, I was a bit concerned because I thought adapting that video into a ponyfic would make it kind of "Cupcakes"-y, but the hilarious twist at the end really makes it worth it. You actually do a good job making everything seem creepy up to that twist. The licking was good addition in that regard. So, keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

4394674 Shoot. Thanks for finding those.
And thanks :twilightsmile: The two things I'll never make are gorefics or clopfics, though. Sorry if that disappoints anyone, but I only stay PG. I like writing stories with twisted humour that anybody can read.

This is one of the most telly boring stories I have ever read.

Until the ending. The ending was good. But dang, man. I know you said you wrote this at three in the morning, but it could have had at least a little excitement to it.

4394694 Meh. I tried. But that's a little harsh.

4395036 Meh, doesn't bother me. If you don't tell what's going on, people would complain that they're confused. It's too hard to try and please everybody.

creepy as shit without breaking charecter. good job.

4395126 Haha, thanks. Glad yo thought so :pinkiesmile:

This story was added to some pretty interesting groups, haha.

4395036 4394700 I didn't mean for it to be harsh. Maybe I worded that without thinking.

I really didn't mean for it to come across as mean.

Sorry...

4395523
No need to be sorry, mate.

4395540 For the record, I don't think this is a bad story, just kinda of flat read, so to speak. If that makes any sense.

This story was great! It needs a lot more love though. Cupcakes ruined Pinkie's reputation and now every Dark story that is written will immediately have people on edge regardless of the summery. This story is a kind of Take That to this way of thinking. I know it was inspired by the Markiplier video but it made me think of this one episode of Invader Zim where Gaz terrorizes this kid because he stole HER game slave machine.

Invader Zim was awesome and this story reminded me of that albeit with a happier ending :pinkiecrazy: Funny how this works out!

You deserve a like a favorite for this. Invader Zim gives you bonus points!

4395523 No worries. Compared to some comments people get on here, that's seriously nothing.

4395565 Thank you very much :twilightsmile:
I just wrote it for fun, so I didn't really expect much from it. I actually wrote the entire thing while watching one soccer match on TV.

Oh the ending killed me! :rainbowlaugh: Truly a great parody of Markiplier's Best Friends! :yay:

4395690 I simply HAD to make something because of it! That was one of the best videos ever!

Hmm I laughed.
It wasss fun, stalker mode.

4401550 I could see Pinkie, not as a murderer, but as a friendly stalker :twilightsheepish:

4401560
I give a 4 outta 5.

*Drops four cupcakes*

4394694
If you want to make convincing constructive criticism, you're gonna need to write a bit more than that to explain what you mean.

I liked it. Characters stayed in character, good paragraph structuring, and to top it all off it was downright entertaining.

5/5 on the :pinkiecrazy: scale

5/5 on the :pinkiesmile: scale

Keep up the good work!

P.S. That ending :rainbowlaugh: You had me worried for a second there.

So was pinkie pie testing applejack?

4507164 Testing? What do you mean by that?

4507273 Like testing there friendship. Something like that

4507283 Oh. No, not really. That was just me making a more crazier Pinkie Pie than usual. She was just being crazy :pinkiecrazy:

What the fuck is this? is this some fanfic to show pinkie is a fucking idiot who everyone should fucking not say anything because she is too stupid to not take it so seriously. oh god this is irritating as hell sorry.
Nvm this was a joke used from markiplier we all know she isnt that stupid XD I hope you like pinkie right ha. oh god this is what i get for drinking too much on the fourth of July.

Even scarier then cupcakes.

Holy crap! I nearly had a heart attack!!! :pinkiegasp:

This was honestly quite...terrifying....and kinda funny.

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