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DontTreadOnMe777777


War. War never changes. Unless we're talking the space of a hundred years or so, rockets and guns probably outclass spears and arrows in some way. Hmm... I'll get back to you on this. Eventually.

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A Scottish teen chooses to leave his boring life behind and attempt to conquer a new land and its strange inhabitants. And he just might have some fun in the process.

Written and edited by me, looking for a cover image. Hit me up if you want to make one for me.

Chapters (31)
Comments ( 187 )

I bet that as they form this evil league, they will need to make a donut run to get things running smoothly, I see Chaos Incorporated as an old time office building with cubicles everywhere and there minions are working in them for low pay, and that everything must be in triplicates. And Discord looks like this.

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4636231 Wow, that's actaully a great idea. However, Chaos Inc. is more of a in-the-field business, if you know what I mean. But, donut runs will definetely be made. :rainbowwild:

Love it so far! I can not wait for the next chapter :D

Interesting one job done so now gaining some subjects is probably his next job.

4800334 Damn son, I'm writing the next chapter right now, then I see your comment and I think...

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4817342 I assume that you're talking about Celestia, in which case, I'm happy 'cause that means I wrote her perfectly :pinkiehappy:

This is such an underrated story! This deserves more views than it currently has. Keep up the good work :D

I am curious as to what the other two armies will be. Good job with this story so far!

A good idea (in my opinion) would be for him to use just over his max mount of armies so that when they fade in and out of equestria it would be like an advantage or something. You know, because it's hard to hit people who aren't there.:rainbowwild:

4912116 I think my readers are psychic, because, if Ricky's any of the military genius he's hyped up to be, then he'll take that into consideration.

4911992 Well, Sun Tzu is an extremely famous man, therefore it'll be near impossible to get his armies until he's more accomplished.

Comment posted by Cheesejellycommander4 deleted Aug 27th, 2014

That German Looks like it was copied out of Google :P.
im German and im not completly sure,what You wanted to write. :P

The commander of the german regiment has the same first name as the main personage of my story Rise of a Revolution. This rules!
Good job so far I wonder what the next one shall be.

Comment posted by DontTreadOnMe777777 deleted Aug 27th, 2014

4913909 Sorry, but as you can see, I don't speak German. :rainbowwild: I tried.

I love this story so far! Keep up the good work!

What? No more chapters yet!? No!

Well it's awesome so far. Stay awesome!

Also love the main character. Reminds me of me. And love the addition of the Total War series in the first chapter. :)

5120288 Ricky's a crafty bastard, that's for sure. And I love the Total War series, so I thought it'd fit perfectly.

The Total War series and Ricky fit very well! (Total War = Most Awesome Games Ever) Thanks for something I enjoy. I'll be looking forward to more from you, and especially this story.

This is by far the most racist Celestia I've seen on fimfiction.

Well played my friend. I'll be watching

i love the line "does he have to be real" that line made my day

good story man. extremely original and very fun to read, please keep it up

Good to see another chapter! I enjoyed it and I a most certainly curious to see the next one.

If you have writers block this helped me out, as well as made me laugh. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter! Happy writing!

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I have to say I am on the doughnuts side right now...doughnuts are life.

Loved this chapter. Sombra made me laugh, which I haven't for a while. :D

It's pretty solid. I'm kindof wondering what's going on with Chrysalis. I would probably have done the same thing as Sombra, though I do love a good Roman Legion...

Only complaint is the F word. I don't mind any other swear word being used to much, but the F word pushes it with me.

But other than that, AWESOME! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

Sorry I haven't been on for a while, got busy with college stuff.

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