A Scottish teen chooses to leave his boring life behind and attempt to conquer a new land and its strange inhabitants. And he just might have some fun in the process.
Written and edited by me, looking for a cover image. Hit me up if you want to make one for me.
I bet that as they form this evil league, they will need to make a donut run to get things running smoothly, I see Chaos Incorporated as an old time office building with cubicles everywhere and there minions are working in them for low pay, and that everything must be in triplicates. And Discord looks like this.
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4636231 Wow, that's actaully a great idea. However, Chaos Inc. is more of a in-the-field business, if you know what I mean. But, donut runs will definetely be made.
nice, i await more
4738808 Thanks, I try.
Love it so far! I can not wait for the next chapter :D
4777534 Thank you!
Interesting one job done so now gaining some subjects is probably his next job.
4800334 Damn son, I'm writing the next chapter right now, then I see your comment and I think...
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It's like a game, the more you avance, the more dificult it is.
Here's a picture of Douglas :
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4816559 Exactly.
What a cunt!
4817342 I assume that you're talking about Celestia, in which case, I'm happy 'cause that means I wrote her perfectly
This is such an underrated story! This deserves more views than it currently has. Keep up the good work :D
4826748 Danke.
I am curious as to what the other two armies will be. Good job with this story so far!
4830047 Who said it was just two? MWAHAHAHA
and he HASN"T recruit Sun Tzu?
A good idea (in my opinion) would be for him to use just over his max mount of armies so that when they fade in and out of equestria it would be like an advantage or something. You know, because it's hard to hit people who aren't there.
4912116 I think my readers are psychic, because, if Ricky's any of the military genius he's hyped up to be, then he'll take that into consideration.
4911992 Well, Sun Tzu is an extremely famous man, therefore it'll be near impossible to get his armies until he's more accomplished.
That German Looks like it was copied out of Google :P.
im German and im not completly sure,what You wanted to write. :P
The commander of the german regiment has the same first name as the main personage of my story Rise of a Revolution. This rules!
Good job so far I wonder what the next one shall be.
4913909 Sorry, but as you can see, I don't speak German. I tried.
4913982 Please elaborate.
4914213 Cool, Karl was actually a real Gereralmajor.
I love this story so far! Keep up the good work!
5120145 Thanks bro!
What? No more chapters yet!? No!
Well it's awesome so far. Stay awesome!
Also love the main character. Reminds me of me. And love the addition of the Total War series in the first chapter. :)
5120288 Ricky's a crafty bastard, that's for sure. And I love the Total War series, so I thought it'd fit perfectly.
The Total War series and Ricky fit very well! (Total War = Most Awesome Games Ever) Thanks for something I enjoy. I'll be looking forward to more from you, and especially this story.
5120364 Thanks man. Means a lot.
5120382
Glad it does!
This is by far the most racist Celestia I've seen on fimfiction.
Well played my friend. I'll be watching
5123602 Lol. Thanks brah
i love the line "does he have to be real" that line made my day
5123751 Lol. Forgot about that line
good story man. extremely original and very fun to read, please keep it up
5124515 Thanks for reading!
5124658
of course. thank you for writing it
Good to see another chapter! I enjoyed it and I a most certainly curious to see the next one.
5127155 Thanks man.
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If you have writers block this helped me out, as well as made me laugh. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter! Happy writing!
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5197355 Next chapter should actually be out tomorrow!
Yay! An update! :D
5231512 Finally, someone decided to comment.
I have to say I am on the doughnuts side right now...doughnuts are life.
Loved this chapter. Sombra made me laugh, which I haven't for a while. :D
It's pretty solid. I'm kindof wondering what's going on with Chrysalis. I would probably have done the same thing as Sombra, though I do love a good Roman Legion...
Only complaint is the F word. I don't mind any other swear word being used to much, but the F word pushes it with me.
But other than that, AWESOME! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!
Sorry I haven't been on for a while, got busy with college stuff.