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Malcho1234


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Formerly a LoHAV story, now a LoHAH one.


For the last thousand years the Princess of the Sun ruled over Equestria and her Protector defended the nation. Now, the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration approaches. And it will mark the beginning of a new age...


The previous version was a part of the LoHAH Mass Collab story - Unsung Heroes. Warning: it will have spoilers for this story.

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Comments ( 55 )

Interesting premise, will read later.

Lots of incorrect or misspelled words (eg. you used "swing" instead of "swig"). Story has potential, but it's too early to accurately judge quality.

4001121 Thank you for pointing out that mistake. I'll correct it when I can. I would appreciate it if you can point anything else I misspelled or used incorrectly.

Cabal was my first mmorpg i've ever played.

Soo, yes, i'll consider following this story.

Well, it was one of the nicest inter-dimensional's teleportations that I saw so far!:twilightsmile:
Awesome chapter!:moustache:

4114746 Thank you.
I decided that, since he gets transported by an item that's commonly used in-game, it should be safe and comfortable.

Still loving this story.

Hello um..uh what is your name again. ah well doesn't matter. This is Ninetails if you should ever need my help I have left a painting with instructions on how to summon me somewhere in this world. I don't remember where but I am sure you can figure it out.

If you really need help with it PM me. Unlike Ninetails I actually kept track of this shit.

4165638 Thank you. Fourth chapter will be out as soon as it is finished.

4175190 Thank you. I hope you'll like the direction it goes in as well.

4176376 I like the new ideas this one has.

hmmmm.... Go On.. you got my attention

4213224 Do you still plan on using that thing we talked about? feel free to PM me the answer

Woken up, swagged out, and ready to kick some ass.:ajsmug:

4250093 That comment made my night. I promise you a lot of asskicking in the next chapter.

And here we go. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

update soon plz... I wanna see cryssi get her ass kicked

That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

4407612 You got the first wish, and you'll get the second in the next chapter.

4419930 4419978 Thank you, thank you.

4419983 thanks for the update, hope the interview goes well. hope to see the fight soon

4420069 Yup.

4420463 You're welcome, and thank you.

4420901 Blader is going to be the most brutal of my characters. You probably noticed the part with the Griffin...

4422059 Oh, you'll see what will happen... And how dark it can get when I get to the good stuff... Hehehe.

I'd suggest checking on the various types of enemies in Cabal Online, I'll be taking a lot of elements from the game...

you know I still remember my Force Blader from all those years ago. I remember my Blader more then my force, but thats only due to my insanely good gear on him.

But yes, the memories this has stirred within me.

Keep up the fantastic work man.
But will we see the newer skills, from the more recent updates.
All classes got I believe another one or two skill grades above transcender, or it was just extra skills. Cant remember now.

4464553 Unfortunately I'm not familiar with those. I haven't had the chance to play the game for over an year, since I don't have a computer, just a shitty laptop that will BSOD and die if I even think about installing a game on it...
I am going to use at least one thing from Cabal 2 though, if that's any consolation.

4464980 Fair enough, good luck going forward my friend. I hope to keep reading this interesting idea for a fic.

Though a very much hope you know the little secret about The BM2 Blade Cannon and its unique charge up on melee skills, to fire blades with magic skills.

Funny enough Cabal has BM3s now. Fun times are still rolling for such an old game.

when you think you can update the next chapter??? :applejackunsure:

THIS HISTORY IS SO AWESOME :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

I will expect greatness!

Didn't this use to start at the Canterlot Wedding? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

I'm a bit dissapointed that you rewrote the fic, but i suppose you know what you are doing.

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I hope to meet your expectations.

5839535 5841651
Thank you.

5840077
Indeed it did. But I thought of some things that would make more sense if the story starts off at the beginning of the show.

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As much as any writer like me knows.

Thank you all for your comments, likes and favorites.

5841688 Ah, good. Glad to know I'm not crazy... Oh wait.

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I'll refrain from commenting on your state of mind. :derpytongue2:

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