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TheOneAJ


I'm am an autistic brony, looking to write fantasy and everyday life novels for my kind. I became a brony when I related well with applejack and twlight, and I love the show.

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Set in and after the story of Disney’s Frozen, this story follows Elsa as she takes in and cares for the filly known as Snowdrop after she mysteriously wandered into her world. In the process, the two form a powerful bond that will be put to the test time and time again. But if Elsa has learned anything from her sister's bravery on the frozen fjord, love can overcome anything.

Cover art done by Engrishman, edited by my good friends Bad_Seed_72, PizzemaForte, HenkiPie, onlyanorthernsong, Forthwith MariusIoannesP Nomad_Sigma and Spike120812 for making this story readable. Go check out their own stories when you're done with this one.

I do not own Disney's Frozen of Hasbro's My Little Pony, but I do thank them for making both so I could write this story.
Also, big thanks to Silly Filly Studio's for all their great animation projects.

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Comments ( 409 )

YEAH! I won the bet Hero, now pass the diamonds over.

Hero: *passes diamonds over* I suck at bets...:ajsleepy:


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The cuteness! I think...
Coroner: It looks like his heart gave out from an overwhelming amount of adorableness.

This story is good. Very good. Don't pay attention to the dislikes; FimFiction hates crossovers (and anything Frozen). Anyway, happy writing!

I like this, please continue :twilightsmile:

Looks good to me! Continue! :yay:

Can I keep my fingers crossed for a foalcon side story?

Keep up the good work, my friend! :pinkiehappy: You may want to change "lake" to "fjord" in the description though.

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Because it's a fjord in the movie. (I.E. when Elsa runs across it and it freezes, Anna says, "The fjord....")

4613262 actually it was Hans, if i remember correctly :P



just ignore me.:twilightsheepish:

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Haha, you're right! :rainbowlaugh: (Damn Hans...)

Apparently I need to watch it more. :raritywink:

I will be honest: this actually looks like a promising idea. I'm not the biggest fan of Frozen, but I do like this idea.

I will give it the benefit of the doubt and read it.

The log summoning felt a wee bit of a stretch, but other than that little nitpick I am definitely gonna be waiting for more. :pinkiehappy:

OH HELL NO! YOU DID NOT GO HERE! I AM SO READING THIS! :pinkiegasp:
the cover art is so damn cute :raritycry:

read it. fav'd it. loved it. MOAR! :flutterrage:

i have the movie i wonder how snowdrop got here, also in snowdrop animated no one know how or why snowdrop not apper in ending? they she dead or she dissapera

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Is this even English?

Its a start and mostly the issues are technical which I amm sure can be corrected quickly

The issue I have is this:

Not sure what else to do, Elsa held out a hand and commanded for firewood to appear. It shouldn’t have been possible, yet enough logs appeared in front of her to keep Snowdrop warm for weeks.

TOOO goddanm convenient!

4613669 I know, I can never seen to get the tech part right no mater how many pre-readers I have.
Please be sure to comment on one tech problem if you're going to complain about this, people.
Also, you get mad at the logs, which Elsa can summon, yet not levitate, yet no one points this out when she builds Olaf in the movie?

She finished off her song

She killed her song? That's not very nice! (Get rid of 'off'. )

Also, needs a pre-reader/editor in general. Not going to follow until stuff is cleaned up, sorry.

Not bad. I mean it's not perfect as it is a little un-clean but it's not bad. It just needs to use a little bit of TLC in it.

4614163 why thank you, sorry to ask this, but would you take the time to point out one or two TLC bits. It would help anyone you mention this problem to in the future :pinkiehappy:

4613897 To build Olaf took two twigs and a few pebbles which can be found in any snowdrift if one digs deeply enough. Also, since she has control over absurdly strong ice winds (her flurries) she can actually move them. Moreover, notice she couldn't summon Olaf's Carrot nose.

So to summon a whole pack of LOGS without even a gust of wind, but just have them appear (what type of wind would it take to move a log anyway)? yeahhhh I thought her powers were over ice not organic matter? Its explained for Olaf's creation since the pebbles and twigs are small enough... but the logs... the mechanics of her powers do not match. I could go on and on, but that's not the issue here. As every writer can make certain 'conveniences to move the plot forward'.

However, I am disappointed in how you covered up a missed opportunity. You could have used Snowdrop being cold to put Elsa in a desperate situation where she has to find wood for Snowdrop and hence is faced with the super-harsh consequences of her own exile and how impractical it is. You could have even forgone the logs totally and had a heartwarming cuddling scene where Elsa realizes she's not just an ice queen, but also flesh and blood human. Basically I'm only mildly annoyed at the convenience. My real problem is the missed opportunity you had.

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I think what he means is that since Elsa could create living beings (when she is only supposed to have powers over snow and ice... well, at least, that's what the movie implies up to that point), maybe logs isn't too much of a stretch.

4614203 Thank you for that, and while I do sort hate to use to slide of, it's magic, I do confiscate for that a bit (and make a joke out of it) by saying that she can only summon wood, not levitate it :rainbowhuh:, but I do like your theory :twilightblush:

4614322 Thanks for defending me, Babs, but I knew there would be a risk by choosing plot over logic, and I did plan to balance it out by making her only able to summon the logs instead of able to move them.

4613902 Sh&t she knows...:twilightoops:

Hero: S#*t *Teleports away*


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4614405 *eye twitches * why did you let him get away. I need to apologize because I may or May not have used Impero on him and made him sing I'm a little teapot in a dress, and my other personality Strife may or may not have used the other two unforgivibles on him for kicks. I not sure though there are So meny versions of him finding the right one is like trying to find a needle in a haystack.

I lost my only friend and it all because Notch got me Drunk, and then reprised me so that my more.... um let's go with chaotic, personality the one that make Herobrine hunter's piss themselves.

No oNe MEssEs WiTh My HErO BuT me.

Strife go back to your corner this mostly caused by your actions, did you really have to cast the killing curse 15 times on him, AND use Crucio on him for 30 straight minutes?

SoRry, I ThOUgHt It WOuLd Be NiCE foRePlAY FOr KiLlINg HunTErs ToGEtHeR.

*faceplam* will you let me know if you see a scared Herobrine that has lightingbolt shaped scars all over his body please

My heart just got shanked by feels.

Promising start, man, I can tell your writing's been getting better. And don't worry, logs aren't really that much of a stretch. Who knows what could be in a snow drift?

4614892 Because after that he locked himself away in the aether Meanwhile creating me, Ecocat. Also I always wondered why he would hum that tune...:duck:

Hero: I hate talking about it :twilightangry2:

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~Dectodog~

4614341 I don't care, just wants some moarz:yay:

I have a problem. Elsa's hair is WHITE, unless you turned it blonde for your headcanon.

4612970 Are you kidding? FimFiction loves crossovers, just not bad ones. I'm guessing it's the prejudice of what kind of person who would write this crossover would probably make crap, what with the overhype it's gotten.

I don't think that, of course. I also didn't find Frozen to be that great besides some of its subversions, but this premise seems unique, and I'd like to see where it goes.

4615382 That may be true, but, my point still stands as her hair is still the wrong color.

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In the coverart? :rainbowhuh: I just did a quick search and didn't find that he used "blonde" in the story.

If it's the coverart you're talking about, take it up with the artist. :derpytongue2:

4615402 ...I thought it was obvious I was talking about the art. Oops.


4615208 *starts crying* I see... I'm so sorry Hero your idiot brother gave me sunshine wine which you know is five times stronger then moonshine, and you know as well as I do that Strife will be Strife and if it wasn't for me stopping her she would have killed everyplayer by now, but I see you replaced me as your best friend. _Ecocat_ some advice never ever trust Notch for any reason at all, I did for one moment and looked what happened to me.

*Turns around and runs away crying *

4615433 :ajsleepy:No it isn't like that, you see he needed a companion so he literately Just... Created me:pinkiesad2:

Pwease don't be mad/sad and, he forgave you quite a while ago :pinkiesmile:

4615450 *stops running in surprise and apperates back and reappears right where she was standing before*

You mean it? You really mean it! *runs up a grabs Herobrine in a very quick hug and let's go* Let's agree to never talk about that ever again and to prank Notch next time we see him. *looks to _Ecocat_* well since my best friend created you... does that make you my friend too? *starts thinking really hard*

4615450 Comment sections are not the place for this.

4615382 Actually, Elsa's hair does turn white when she uses her powers. It's a very subtle change, and you need to look closely to see it. It is also permanently white after Let It Go, despite posters not showing the correct color.

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It's very faint platinum blonde, but I wouldn't call it white. It doesn't look the same shade as Anna's frozen hair to me. I think we can both agree that it's not the blonde in the coverart, though. :derpytongue2:

Now here's a question: is Anna's end-of-film hair red or brunette? That'll spawn a bunch of comments! :rainbowlaugh:

4615433 Lets talk about it Here considering Sonicmario3 doesn't like it. O.K.?:pinkiesmile:

Eleven dislikes!?!:twilightangry2: why....:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

>Ecocat<

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