This story is 'loosely' based on the book, If You Give a Mouse a Cookie. You have been warned.
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TheOneAJ
I'm am an autistic brony, looking to write fantasy and everyday life novels for my kind. I became a brony when I related well with applejack and twlight, and I love the show.
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Lol
I liked it. XD
Yes.
Hey, I made a story based off that book too! well, very loosely based
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/166392/if-you-give-a-dash-a-cookie
That ending.
haha that Dash/narrator banter
Derpy fic! *Squee!* There needs to be way more of these, and I'm glad that you wrote this. Really made my day!
4522914 I'll look over it in a bit, sorry for that, though I'd take my shot at it.
4523025 No, there's nothing wrong sharing an idea. It was just a funny coincidence is all.
Still, you put a unique spin on it that made it very entertaining. 
the only way to get him out of your head is to give me what I want and finish the tory.?”
OOPs one error best story ever
So cute! Derpy fics always make me happy
That was worth reading. Very well done my friend. You are awesome.
If there is anyone who does not understand the "Who's on first?" reference then I will end some pony.
If an 'insanity' tag existed, this definitely would have merited it.
Awesome job......but you owe me a new drink. I spit it out about halfway through.
That was a fun read. I enjoyed it
eh. The fourth wall breaking kind of killed it for me.
Just not my cup of tea, sorry.
better off based off of the story "If you gave a moose a muffin"
Nice work, and nice comedic twist. Leave it to RD to get sucked into something. Good old Derpy, the mare to make everyone happy.
Not sure if that's legal, but whatever.
Not sure if this is some foreign spelling or something, but my gueses that's a typo for pegasus.
Nothing witty here, just missing an r for your.
I think there's a missing ellipsisisisis, and unnecessary comma after insist, and a p where there should be an o.
No flak for this, swap the t and the e.
Missing a place, but not a setting.
One s, no e's, 5 hour energy*
Extra comma, tough.
There it is again.
Second is is extra.
Story, no period.
Should be a question.
Not sure what this is supposed to be, but I think purest should be purpose, and complain should be something.
Nothing wrong here, except Derpy's going out with that time-traveler remember?
Still funny though.
I totally called that a fic like this would made one day!!! I knew it! HAHA XD!!
Oh celestia I owe my friend 10 dollars now...
4524604 One more
Do you mean arguing with a voice here? Thats what made sense in my head. Anyway, nice story!
4528007 thank you very much, don't suppose I could get you on my other stories?
4528037 Sure, but you may want to approach Lag Incarnate about it first. I haven't done any serious editing for a while, and it seems like they're semi-pro :P
You know, when I first saw the writing style you were using in this I thought it was the last story I needed to read at the moment. (I've been up for 18 hours). But the sheer amount of comity in this gave a second wind! You have made my day dear writer, thank you.
Derpy + muffin = insta fave
BTW MUFFIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ha! That's what happens when you brake the forth wall without being one of "The Ones". You get an unwanted mare friend.
This was one funny story!
I enjoyed the fourth wall breaking the most, and how Rainbow lost it at the end.
I actually read If You Give books a lot when I was little, and I still have them today!
You get a like, fav, and mustache for this funny little fic:
This was beautiful.
Also, it needs a sequel. Pronto.
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Agreed.
5777667
Ditto, mostly.
4523441
Yeah, get me a can if soda please.
4523013
Your is just so cute!
Oh thank god you used her real name, why does everyone call her Derpy Hooves? that doesn’t even sound better!