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This story is a sequel to Our Hearts That Summer Morning
Twilight and Rainbow Dash are on their first date. What unexpected things will they learn about each other, and how will it affect this new level of their relationship? How will one simple event change their lives forever?
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Oh snap! Rainbow! don't die! She needs you!
HUHWHAAAAT?!?!
4366902 That's exactly what I thought when proof-reading! I then re-read the story to see if I missed anyhting
4367147 nopony missed anything. It all makes sense, or it will
4367213 Okay!
Hehehe, these comments amuse me. Everyone is so confused.
4367462 I think i'll do the next chapter soon, at the same time as I'm doing "Then we'll run" I'm just dying to see the reactions to the conclusion of this
Damn it! I knew I was gonna regret reading a story that had a "Sad" AND "Tragedy" tag. I don't even like it when just one of those are present.
Now I'm sad. 
Whatever, I await to see where this goes from here.
***SPOILER***
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I want to hate the story and love it at the same time! You gotta find a way to bring RD back!
BRING BACK RD!!!
I haven't felt this shitty since I watched The Green Mile...
4369427 I'll be getting the next (and last) chapter out this coming week
4369448 Sounds good... -_- I'll be watching for a Tragedy mark...
What did Rainbow Dash ever do to you?
Brilliant chapter as always
what the fuck?! you can't just go from happiness and smiles and fluff to 'rainbows basically dead, and there's nothing you can do!'
Yooooou Heartless Bastard!
Please continue
I'm gonna stay positive here and say that Twi's going to try and succeed to bring back Rainbow with her magic.
I can understand how Twi thinks, to a degree, and that's what I'd put 20 bits on.
I swear to Faust, if Rainbow is really gone forever...
ches gonna die by Ava's hoof.
B
You "Pinky"
Promise to bring RD back? well you better sleep with one eye open if you don't. 
Cause we'd have a Nigga Moment!
I think a part of my soul just died.
More please.
I don't know why I faved this. All it's going to do is make me cry. And yet, I can't stop reading it!
4510725 I'm right with you. I'd bet it's the feeling that something good is going to happen and Rainbow's going to live.
Love reaches beyond mere friendship. So you should have her return when Twilight, (who would be last), visits and tell her of the "Magic of Love"
Corny, but it's an idea.
Oh, and you have made the best series on FIMfiction. In my opinion, that is.
4512537 after that kind of condition? She's lucky life support is keeping her alive at this point, forget her chances of waking up. I know it's hard, but I firmly stand by the Mane 6 (5)'s desision to end her misery.
GD max how could you make something so innocent and sweet turn to complete turmoil!!!!!!
I think I'm crying more after reading this chapter than the next chapter
4452758 you never know maybe when twi goes in there to say goodbye the raw magic of love that they share will bring her back. But it's just a guess(tears still streaming down my face as I type this)
You know what sucks is being the editor of this im the first one that gets to experience all the sorrow and misery of these infernal but to good to stop chapters
If this ends badly I'm going to hate you forever.
Eek.
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I can't think of any way that Dash could be rescued without either a magic-type think by Twilight, some sort of something by Dash or a medical breakthrough. Even though it's unlikely, I still think that Dash could be brought back!!
**Anyone else who reads this will probably
4699721 anyone with medical training, maybe. I know many are still hopeful of this "breakthrough". Despite the cat that it doesn't work like that (at least not in real life. This is fanfiction, though.)
4700052 I know, as Dash is most likely in a state where her brain is failing and therefore cannot control the rest of her body or that she has suffered major nervous damage (break in the spinal cord). (Stupidly high optimism ahead
) Then again, we used to think people died from an imbalance of the humors, so we may be able to fix problems like this in the future)
But yeah, this is fanfiction, so Maxxxxxx can choose whether to bring her back (I'm looking at you Maxxxxxx)
For the love of everything unholy bring her back!!!
No Bring her back Rainbow cant die
I was actually holding it together pretty well... Then I read Pinkie's part. Thank Luna my bf is asleep because otherwise he'd roll over and see my crying my eyes out.
''Didn't see that one coming''-Applejack
Is it sad that I hadn't shed a single tear thus far?
I have no soul... 
Max I know where you live and if you don't bring Dashie back I will find you and do it for you!!!
All I can say thus far is that this is a completely nightmarish scenario, one that I fear would happen to me or someone dear to me. a coma- like condition with no real way to tell whether the person could hear or feel anything. Truly a depressing thought.
Well shit. Another unfinished/abandoned fic that was going so well...
Honestly, and I don't mean to sound cold, but for the story's sake, I don't care whether Dash lives or dies. I want this story to see completion. I can understand how hard it would be to let her die,(which seems to be where this is going) with everyone wanting you to let her live, but if you have this story planned a certain way: do it. don't worry about everyone's opinion on it, no matter what direction you take this, someone is bound to get pissed. This has been a great story thus far and i'd hate to see it left incomplete.
I'll be watching this in the off chance that it does get continued.
5498329 I've been very sick lately and I've been unable to write, I have a lot of doctors appointments and not much time, None of my stories are dead, when I feel up to it, all of them will be finished
5498675
Ok then, i'll look forward to it.
Edit: sorry if either of these comment came off as aggressive or something like that, like I said, this story was great and I would've hated to see it just...stop. Hope you get better.
My reaction to that last bit:
Holy fucking shit! Only a few stories have adequate me cry and this one got some tears out of my eyelids. Congrats on that, it's pretty difficult to just get them to water. If it was complete, I'd probably be balling my eyes out while reading it.
6190414 I'm happy I could do that!
this story isn't dead and i'll be updating as soon as I can, health problems are really getting in the way sadly 
6198183 ah yes, dreadful health problems. I feel you man, I feel you.
I really need to start putting stories that haven't been updated in a while on my read later list cause every time they are just so beautiful and leave a hole in my heart that can only be filled by an update. Oh well, on to the next story...
(Totally gonna be watching for more updates still)
7636354 I'm still dealing with health problems and am spread thin between projects including my fics but I do intend to finish what I've started here
7637742 that's ok you should only do what is possible for you. Apologies if I came across irritated as that was not my intent. Love this story and looking forward to the update whenever it may come!
P.S. Get well soon!
Jesus Navas on a stick what the hell was that?! Bloody hell. I'm scared, thanks a lot ;-;
Nice story but WHAT THE HECK YOU CANT JUST DO THAT!
Well I guess you can since you just did... BUT STILL!
-King of Eggs