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What a tweeest.
Huh...I forsee Luna being able to work out some frustrations here.
Dun
Dun
DUUUUUN
Low Key? Would this be Low Key Lyesmith? Because if so, ponies best watch the heck out for Mr. Wednesday. They're bad news to god-tier characters.
something happening
The fastest way to kill fictional-beings-turned-real is a really big eraser. Or a bucket of whiteout.
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In more ways than one.
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Ah, this might be the bookworm.
Ah, yes. I remember this from the comics.
6118664 so do I!
Deliberate or not, this chapter was very well-timed.
Was nice seeing that little moment between Sunset and Omnifarious.
Bronies everywhere thank you for that.
Now if only they figure out Sunset's journal. I bet if it still happens like Rainbow Rocks there will be multiple Heck how long till Tirek's showing? that can't be too far now.
and Fae what are you worried about. Just suck Nightmare Moon dry. You have Tia there who should have any issue destroying this Nightmare Moon since her sister is still in Canterlot so go ahead and destroy this dark version of her. Yes Nightmare Moon IS luna's darker have not some stupid parasite. So even have Tia and Twilight distract NMM and suck time.
P.S. what is it with Fae and Tia's rear end?
Ok I'm calling it now its Pod People copys of ponys not the real thing....and probably half the power
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You just gave me some REALLY weird mental image...
"with everything I usually, getting a few"
Is there a word missing here?
"supercalafragalisticexpialadoshus, did appear I"
Was that meant to be "didn't appear"?
"beat the beat the"
I'm pretty sure that that repetition ought not to be there.
Dammit Sunset, we cant even consider Princest now.Then again, would Om findng an ovipositer change their mind in any way Or really working on their shape changing?
If they are characters from the stories appearing, shouldnt Pinkie have super effective abilities against them?
You dont want a whiteboard erasure, you want something far more efficent than that.
Oh my Gosh. ITS DIP.
Less fighty, more mind blowy revelations.
Why do I get the image in my head of Twilight going directly to Sunset and at some point actually trying it out (for science!) because both of them see it as no more wrong than an ear-scratching.
Sunset: Nope, still nothing. Are you sure that's what he said?
Twilight: Pretty much.
Rainbow Dash: Maybe you're doing it wrong?
<Sunset shrugs in boredom>
Sunset: Well there is a spare if you want to try it.
And then Fairy walks in and runs screaming for the brain-bleach.
if Infinity Gems exist in Equestria, where is Infinity Gauntlet? And if Infinity Gauntlet exist in Equestria, then only Sunset can use it?
P.S. reading marvel comics...
Only now see new chapter... YAY!
Well this could get very interesting/dangerous for Fae, with the number of potential bad guys spawning in there could be alot of changeling casulties either protecting the queen or engaging the new arrivals.
When this series first started the hive had about 10,000 minions (3/4 in hibernation) but the day before the corination he mentioned having 8,000 voices in his head (20% loss in 6 months if accurate).
Twice now in this story a changeling has mentioned displeasure at the lack of nymphs and he's also said that even the queens are overruled by the 2 hive mind commands of "eat" and "live".
With Fae's narrative having been "I'm not looking forward to laying eggs"/"I'm not ready to lay eggs"/"What will laying eggs do to my gender identity" now changing in this chapter to "never going to lay eggs" I'm wondering if this change is an anger/denile responce to hive mind pressure. Nap time soon for the new queen?
I have not read chapters 49 and 59 because I can't. I have to stop reading this story because I have come to realize just what it is truly about. This whole story isn't about the adventures of Fae, its about abusive relationships and the slow breaking of a stallion. At the start of this story Fae was forced into a gender he wasn't supposed to be nor wanted to be and no one cared. He told them he wasn't a mare that he didn't want to be called "She" and no one listened. He asked them not to call him Fairy and everyone ignored him. He was pressured into being a dress model for Rarity and he endured because he loved them. He was pressured into sex as a female when he clearly didn't want to and he endured because he loved Twilight.
In the background of every arc has been him getting slowly worse and worse and losing more and more of himself and everyone just mocking and teasing him about 'whats wrong with being a mare?' Even in his dreamrealm where Celestia can see him for how he truly sees himself A MAN she still calls him fairy and still calls him a woman, and he asks please stop, please don't... and she ignores him, because she wants to enjoy calling him a fairy more than she cares about his pain.
He shouldn't have to get on his knees and beg them to stop pushing him to be something he isn't to respect how he sees himself, to help him be a stallion like the spell should have done at the very start, and yet no one cares enough to look or even try. Just when we hit the point of breaking at the coronation I thought there was a shining hope, a turn around point where he had his breakdown and everyone realized how horrible they were being to him... but it didn't happen. Rainbow didn't even see him as a stallion and didn't understand why she should care. Twilight may have been contrite but did nothing. He was sobbing and crying and begging him them not to force him to give up anymore of his identity and they just say 'endure a little more'.
Celestia, who should have never left him as a mare for so long when she cast the original spell and enacted the laws demanding that he be disgused as that, saw his pain and instead of cancelling the Coronation she asked 'endure just a little bit more' because it would be too inconvenient to cancel at that point. His pain was worth so little that disappointing the faceless masses was worth even more suffering. Then when she knew of his pain about gender confusion she tongue fucked him like he was a mare and then asked "is it really so bad". HE JUST HAD A MENTAL BREAKDOWN ABOUT IT OF COURSE IT IS SO BAD. But then she says she loves him and he bends just a little more.
But then Celestia throws away her crown and shocks everyone over being sick of their shit... where was that when Fae was suffering? It is ok to say 'buck everyone else' when she is in pain but when Fae is having a mental breakdown she should just endure a little more, bend a little more, give up a little more of herself. Then the date with the parents are on the horizon and she ask to him to wear the dress, "just a little more" again and again and again.
Every one of Fae's fears of losing himself and becoming a mare has come true and I have lost faith that this story isn't actually about brainwashing and forced feminization. That it won't end with Fae's fears of being rutted by a stallion, probably his gender bent herdmates, and loving it because he has broken, lost everything that made him him and just wants to make his 'lovers' happy...
Every time I read this story and see how he is hurting it hurts me. I was trying to catch up trying to hope that just one more chapter and they will fix this, they will stop abusing him, but it has been 500k words and he is only getting worse. I have just lost faith in this story and that the author actually wan't Fae to be happy, that he understands or cares about how dark and bleak Fae's life is and how it isn't acclimation to being a mare, its brainwashing due to intentional, or unintentional emotional abuse and manipulation by Everyone in the story.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6131830 Don't worry, as the story progresses Fae's mental state continues to deteriorate due to the negligence and borderline abuse of everypony around him and when it finally comes to a head they only have take responsibility for their actions while still partially laying the blame at his feet for not standing up for himself enough... even though every time he stands up for himself they just ignore his wishes and pressure him into doing what they want anyway.
So after getting assurances from the author that everything Fae being put through isn't malice and the breakdown has more to do with his inability to stand up for himself than the pressuring of others I was able to read 49&50... Fun chapters, but they made me think. Specifically about Celestia's line about being glad he stopped acting like a pussy. Is Celestial just a selfish asshole? Is that her intended character? Because almost all of Fae's pain is a direct result of her actions or failures.
She knowingly cast the incomplete spell natural disguise spell that forced him into a mare's body even though she knew he identified as male. She flew away laughing for fucks sake, and instead of fixing it she just shoved it off onto Twilight.
Now after sharing dreams with him in a state where everything is laid bare and you can only speak truth she can she that in his heart and mind he is male but when he asks her to stop calling him fairy and treating him like a mare she just giggles and says no... Then after his MENTAL BREAKDOWN over gender issues, that Celestia helped caused with her broken spell and laws forcing him to be that in public, she sees his pain and how much being forced to become a princess hurts him so she puts him happyness and well-being above the whims Equestria and calls it off... Oh wait no she pushes him into going through with it because "you can't just let down Equestria like that".
One day later in a fit of 'frustration' and concern for the happyness and well-being of Sunset she says fuck Equestria and just up and quits.... Soooo what the fuck? Why did you make him go through with it? Why couldn't you even just call him a PRINCE and explain that his female state is only due to magical fuckup? Why didn't you do literally anything to help him? Why did you make him go through with one of his worst nightmares to save yourself from what? Having to explain his gender issue? Wasting bits by canceling the huge coronation? Disappointing the faceless nameless masses? How is any of that worth the pain he went through, pain over a coronation that didn't even need to happen? If all this isn't born out of malice from Celestia than what the fuck is it?
I really like Fae and want things to work out for him but holy fuck has Celestia been Fucking him over and I don't get why.
OK, I know i've been posting a huge amount recently because I read this whole story in one chunk and however much I like it I also have huge problems with it. Sorry about the pages of anger over this story.
That said I just realized... Why is Celestia taking days off to play part time jobs? Shouldn't she be working on fixing the botched transformation that left her loved one in emotional and mental anguish that is a direct result of her actions, or if she isn't making progress with that maybe she should be working on the OTHER botched transformation that left her loved one in emotional and mental anguish?
Why is she taking days off when they are still in pain over HER actions. Oh, they are stable now so there is no huge rush? Its not like a week ago Sunset was still crying herself to sleep every night and Fae had a Mental Breakdown... When it all gets too much they break down sobbing because they don't get outs, they don't get breaks, they don't get days off. That pain is their life until Celestia, the self proclaimed greatest enchanter in the world, who is both directly responsible for their situation and the only one who can help fix it, actually gets off her ass and gets it done. If she can't make progress on the mirror then she should take a fucking week to fix Fae, its not like both of them thought that fixing Sunset might be outright impossible while in a month Twilight got halfway through fixing Fae before Celestia pulled her off the task to do busy work. If you can't fix Sunset like Fae, the mentally and emotionally damage masochist, told you to focus on first then at least try to fix the far simpler problem of the half finished spell instead of DOING NOTHING.
Also don't give me that 'Fae can take a day off of being a mare by just transforming into a random stallion'. The problem is that he can't be HIM as his true self. He can either be himself through the broken spell which forces him as a gender he isn't and hates being, or he has to literally be someone else. His only way to be physically intimate with those he loves is either as a gender that isn't his or as a body that isn't. Its like the only way you could have sex with your wife is if you wore a bag over your head or pretended to be some stranger, never as just you.
Did you seriously just pull a "Snowman" parody?
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Are you Cinamare sins?
6150851 I'm not familiar with who or what that is, so I'd have to say no.
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Thank you for bringing that up, but I think it's an issue of the characters forgetting.
Regarding freight trains, they certainly exist, but I'd say that they don't impress themselves nearly so much on the minds of most people. Consider how many stories involve passenger flights vs. how many involve air cargo. People outside the rail freight industry may actually make tremendous use of it without ever realizing it. If furthermore the greatest presence of passenger rail in their minds consists of stories of fifty-plus-year-old steam trains...
(...Also, that comment seems to have been downvoted thrice. Huh.)
Just let him become male again.
Please
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There's the elements of harmony, on one hand they have fewer limits than the infinity gems(working in other universes) on the other they can tell you to fuck off or backlash if you try to use them.
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Fae is never himself.
Fae is a changeling queen, he after all has a changeling queen's magic.
And magic explicitly a representation of the soul, the true self.
Part of being a changeling is being willing to change shapes, to change sexes. While his loved ones are....extremely inconsiderate(Celestia most of all by far but well...Celestia), that battle between his soul and his mind would be being waged anyways.
He can apparently already sex flip a pony he's seen, doesn't that beg the question why not use his changeling magic to sex flip his Alicorn form?
I thought the reason he couldn't use changeling magic to alter his gender was obvious, it is because the author doesn't want him to. There is no actual reason in universe why there is not a single change gender spell, or grow dick spell, but somehow there is bring inanimate objects to life, or change anything into anything else, or breach the barrier between dimensions, and yet simple genderswapping is somehow beyond all of ponykind.
He has been stuck as female for the entire story because the author wanted him to be and wanted him to go through all those pains, have those mental breakdowns, suffer for his ailment that contributes nothing to any of the story arcs. It wasn't until the coronation arc that it even came out from a pointless subplot to directly in the main spotlight and then was immediately shoved back into the shadows to follow Celestia throwing a tantrum and then getting everything she ever wanted (while still not fixing any of her mistakes)
I don't even think the author has to be doing it of malice anymore, its probably that he thought it would be funny when it was introduced the very first time and he has had to make more and more excuses to justify it in universe until it has gotten to the point that the only reason is that "Celestia is a cunt" can explain why Fae has been fucked over so hard on this point.
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maybe because changeling ones biology is harder than you think?
Changing*, but ima keep it there for auto correct lolz.
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Changeling biology is as hard as the author decides it to be, and he decided it is harder than; binding your soul to another living being, traveling across dimensions, summoning ancient soul devouring demons, becoming a near invincible goddess by draining the love of the crystal heart, create fully functionally mini dimensions to play out games, fully body and gender transformations of any creature other than changeling, and also changing the gender of any other changeling except the main character when they are just copying others.
Given the level of power of all the magic in the story so far the fact that growing a penis on Fae specifically (given that they clearly already have gender swapping spells that even work on other changelings) is near impossible is absolutely absurd. You can make a mirror that crosses between dimensions and completely changes your species while gifting you full understanding of nearest common language and you can give Fae a body fully of her own, but the one tiny little step of also giving him the right gender is beyond the skills of three goddesses.
The only reasons Fae is stuck as a female, or was forced to be a female in the first place, is because the author wants him to and I don't know why he wants that in the story. Its only contribution is that Fae is constantly unhappy and slowly losing his sense of self while everyone around him claims to care yet still pressures him into just accepting it. Are we supposed to be happy and entertained by him having breakdowns? Is his pain supposed to have intrinsic value because it hasn't contributed or mattered to 99% of the adventure or slice of life arcs. It has been 500k words of him hating being stuck as a mare while slowly hating it more and more and losing himself to it and I just don't see why it has to be in the story.
I don't know why, but the thought crossed my mind of Nightmare joining the herd and I busted out laughing. Anyway time to see how this goes, to the next chapter!
Chapter 50. This is obviously Discord's doing.
As to "Why can't Fae change back to a guy?" There's a TV tropes about being gender swapped (ICR the exact name).
Male to female is either a one issue/episode thing or it's permanent.
7657972 holy crap you smashed through this faster than I did. Congrats on the binge read!
Since it's been about half a year since I first read this, I reread it to pick up the plot threads before reading the new chapter
Hey, genius. It doesn't fizzle out & stop existing. It does, however, manifest itself on the other side of the mirror. Which, now that I think of it is probably a whole lot of fun for whoever is on the other side
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Well, it could also be draining to the "magicless" other side, but
Celestia can probably power through the dra-author chose "portal wins".Hi bookworm, not nice to see you again. I swear my first reaction to that comic was "Oh hey, this reminds me of that Bohemian Rhapsody arc in JoJo part 6." My second reaction was "Just fucking Kingdom Hearts this shit!"
On to the gender thing, I have to agree with others that I'm not happy about it either, but it does allow you to make the chapters longer I guess. If I were in Fae's position, I'd have done a number of things. One, make a statement that I would appreciate it if others called me by my ACTUAL FUCKING GENDER. Two, at the least come up with a male name for them to call me, preferably one that is similar to my own name. Three, make a magical construct that I am able to; control remotely, see through, hear through, talk through, and have it somewhat resemble my human form. And finally, four, every once in a while say "Hail to the king, honies!" for absolutely no reason other than to say it.
But hey, this ain't my story, and I'm like, what, two chapters behind? I'm also not a good writer if the ONLY FUCKING STORY I've got is any indication. So fuck it, just write what you wanna write.
A kind that there are, unfortunately, far too many of in this world.
Ponyland, for all its silliness and random world-ending villains who appear out of nowhere, has it beat.
Hmm... I wonder...
Somepony clopped their hooves together three times in the Cave of Harmony and made all the destined-deadbeat stallions disappear before they were born, didn't they?
...or did they snap their fingers?
Hey be quite you exhibitionist
Interessting... So Omniferiouse plans to let the Changeling generation die out and recreate it ones the Hivemind is empty? Clever unless they rebel...
Hollow book clone... Meh... I seen better
I'm gonna be honest here, humans were proven to be capable of wielding magic multiple times, adapting to it in fact, the only reason most can't is because Earth doesn't have magic energy, something that shouldn't be a problem in Eauestria.