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Judging by what Shining Armor says a few paragraphs later, I think this is supposed to say "It’s designed to only let ponies like Sombra come and go as they please."
Yeah, I saw this one coming a mile away.
..Ok.
Spike is doomed. Hell, if he doesn't see jail, i will be shocked.
Flash Sentry is dead...To be honest, i have no idea how to feel about this. But, with the way it was going..Yeah, this was one of the more likely things.
Glitterbitch is about to get his face ripped apart.
So Grogar, Arabus, and I'm not sure but Tirek as well. Sooo...
When's the Smooze coming?
*claps* Good show! I suppose next chapter we get a boss battle, an epic beatdown, or a new evil unleashed upon the world?
Either way, I can't wait!
Well normally I'd say give him a chance but at this point the best way to deal with Spike is to simply gut the stupid little lizard bastard. He's been nothing but a complete and utter ass to Fae and Sunset, and has now gotten Sunset seriously injured. I don't care for his reasons. It's best to be rid of him once and for all and in the long run everyone will be happier.
And can Fae simply eat dark magic?
And that is how personal conflict between mates grew into demon slaying advanture.
Best use of Phrase in the end.
Spike...has got to go
Damn you, I got a sore throat and now it hurts because I laughed way too much because of this.
Damn you
Also, hopefully Fae will remember to drive home the point Spike brought on his punishment on his own. There might otherwise be a risk of him seeing his punishment as proof of beeing right all this time.
Also, fuck those racist crystal ponies
In a way I understand what they're getting at. Spike practically lives to be Twilights family/Assistant and have no concept of anything beyond that, it's unhealthy and causes him to go ballistic when something threatens his position.
On one hand I think it's terribly sad and he ought to get another hobby/job that takes him away from Twi to give him a life of his own. On the other hand I really want to punt him off Mt.Canterhorn.
Five bucks says the flutter ponies are extinct. Wonder why Discord doesn't sense all this major league chaos... Fun fact: FiMFiction won't let you do Strikethrough Emoticons, I tried with Spike just now. Also, does the Rarity 'duck' face look more like a speculatively raised eyebrow than a seduction face to anyone else? No? Just me then?
Goodbye Flash, you will be missed... by family and friends. Not us. Definitely not us.
Great job but you ruined great chance for break up and come back.
Well maybe later but now don't screw this because it's going very good road to awesomenes.
5003960 good lord man they are not breaking up get over it.
5003278 Pinkie morns your inability to enjoy laughter
So- so was... was he just... sitting there waiting for someone to monologue to?
Is that a thing that he did? He sat there and waited poking runes and sat by sipping a juice box for someone to come in so he could rant before summoning the demon?
I love it. CLICHE` EQUESTRIA VILLAINY GOOOOO!
That fool is about to get his ass burnt. He don't know who he is truly messing with...
Also, if Spike get away with this and the biggotry racist specist sorry excute for crystal ponies know only lies and remain the same, I will personally go there and put a 7.62 bullet in each and everyone of their heads....3 in Spike's.
Oh. REALLY!
Then why don't you give up on Rarity you little shit?!
Initiate Badass Battle soundtrack.
5002982 Then it's a good thing plumbing was recently installed in the Crystal Palace.
Tia, you have what I like to call, Mother Bear Syndrome, or M.B.S.. It's a condition that is common in mothers and mother-figures, involving strongly protective feelings toward the the parents child or children.
M.B.S.
“WHAT? Not allowed to laugh? WHEN I GET MY HOOVES ON THAT FLASH SENTRY AND SUNLIGHT SPARKLING PONY!”
Angry Pinkie is angry.
I particularly enjoyed this paragraph. Celestia's being a badass with her sense of calm self control just increasing her badassery. You can feel the emotion.
So. Many. Witty one-liners...
5002619 I feel bad for the guy. He never really did anything bad. at worse was with Sunset but that was do to Spike mroe than anything. He did not deserve that fate.
Today we bid Farwell to Flash Sentry. May he find peace in a story who’s author doesn't have an unprovoked amount of malice against him.
But special mention should go to Spike. Thanks Spike, your insane prejudges made Fae know how Flash must have felt throughout this whole story.
*“That is the stupidest reasoning I’ve ever heard come out of your mouth.”* Said the alicorn who got jealous of a magicless human Sunset.
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Let me fix that:
Said the alicorn who wielded the literal virtues of love and tolerance to defeat her enemies.
*sigh* I have to say, this arc about Fae and Twilight moving apart because of VERY REAL issues was exciting to me. But now its pulling a 180, and is doing exactly what I feared: downplaying Twilight's stupid mistakes and self-centerednsss to the point that she can do no wrong..you know, like how the TV show displays her
I hope this changes, and she actually has Somepony to yell her down into accepting her faults. If it progresses further though I will Have to drop this fanfic. Way to many memories if past terrible relationships and apologist 'friends'.
Looks like somepony is about to be "Befriended". Hehhehheh
I can just imagine the four princesses being the pony version of inbetweeners.
never did i think i could feel this kind of angry towards spike. Forget what i said before, he is a total dick and deserves everything that's coming his way after this.
I mean, taking GLEE in seeing Sunset badly injured? Any sympathy he could have gotten from me for when he finally realizes how wrong he's been and whsy a FUCKING HEARTLESS ASSHOLE FROM ASSHOLETONIA he has been are gone. Fucking stupid lizard is in my bad books for this fic's universe from this point onwards.
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But she's a "real" pony.
chapter 22
As to Fae not helping Twilight, I would say "Yes, Twilight, it's ALL his fault for not helping after you did everything in your power to get his help. What more could you have done -ask for help? No, it's his fault he didn't just know by Divine Inspiration" Seriously, I'd say it's about 90-95% Twilight's fault for not asking & the rest Celestia's for asking Twilight instead of Fae.
hoard
too.
needs open quote
flea
princess
outshone
hadn't rolled
“P-Princess.
altar
think you mean somethin' else.
full complement
is, Princess,”
corporeal
Why do I feel it was a terrible idea?
Closer to the end of the chapter:
Ah, that's why.
Said the fire-breathing dragon
Fae isn't angry at him for being mean to her, she's angry at him for, essentially, making Sunset starve for a few hours
Ask Rarity about generosity and how being too generous can ruin the one who is doing the giving and even to doing the receiving in some cases
Ah, so he's one of those "I will save my people from tyranny by becoming a tyrant myself" type of guy
Yah think
Fae Fae Fae, you know crazy people tend to either hypocrits when it comes to things like that or just make up excuses for why endangering them is perfectly justified
HHHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMM YOU DON'T SAY
I love Omniferiouse humor ♡
I love how Omniferiouse finaly see Spike as the problem he is not Twilight ♡
Absolutly love to see Omniferiouse group up with a OP team to kick villain ass ♡
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I dunno man, seems kinda sensible to me
I don't believe Fae accepting that things were "not his fault" in the crystal caves was realistic at all. The ponies did not address his arguments at all.
1) Sunset's point that he told Twilight to go to the Crystal Empire is true, but that doesn't have anything to do with Fae's previous point. Fae's point is that he was feeling neglected and unimportant. RD was important enough for Twilight to drop her studying for, but not him. This is not refuted.
2) Cadence and Shining don't seem very remorseful at all about his treatment if the guard Captain who did it wasn't fired the moment Cadence saw the room he put Fae into. The fact that he was able to stick around to do what he did later in the chapter is ridiculous. Sure, there's his public support, but he basically treated the queen of an allied vassal state of Equestria (or whatever the changelings are now) as a prisoner. That should be more than enough just cause for removal, and the public wouldn't really be able to say anything about it.
3) Sunset telling him that he should put effort on trying to spend time with Twi is BS. He did try to do so, multiple times over the four days where the daily activities were briefly described in one paragraph each. He tried to do things with Twilight pretty much every day, and yet she told him to fuck off. This point is very valid.
4) Sure, Spike is definitely a big manipulator. But the 1st and 3rd points are entirely based on Twilight's choices. Spike manipulating them to get them apart doesn't negate this.
Okay, who invited Thrackerzod?