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This ending pleases us.
so Cadance was wrong the entire time.
And dude am I taking out the popcorn and watch Luna's rule
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Confiscating 5% of a nobles wealth for every frivolous complaint is a good place to start.
6075474 i agree. i also bet that the guards will need ear muffs.
6075224 'OH YEAH!'
Dang it who let that guy in here?
That was the most perfect way to end a chapter in the history of ever.
Oh, and Blueblood gets to go down in history as the straw that broke the camel's back. Hooray!
Also, did anyone else find the way Luna talked about alicorn fertility as kind of... fishy? It kind of read to me like she was insinuating that natural alicorns don't have that problem.
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: I did.
: But... Why this time?
That took me a while to get, but it definitely had me laughing for a good minute.
Penalty!
Excessive punnery.
10 minutes timeout, lose 3 points.
I'd say "You just had to make it weird." but we arrived at Weird ages ago and are currently pulling donuts in the parking lot.
thanks for the update!!
Bring forth the holy chocolate fountain of Fon Du, and the sweet marshmallows of Sir More, we wishest to partake of the observation of that which is fabric container of muridae.
I loved this chapter.
6075611 you forgot to add while on water skies xD
Like we all do when we introduce parents to our polygamous partners.
Aww, I was really looking forward to Blueblood groveling at Celestia's hooves, begging her to come back before an angry mob got ahold of him, but this works too.
Only urban dictionary recognizes the spelling Swaray as anything other than a family name.
It's "soirée", a french word meaning "evening party" (soir = evening) that English borrowed with the only change in spelling being dropping the accent mark.
Typo. Should be "coup d'état"
(French for "blow of state" in the "struck a blow" sense of the word. It's pronounced "coo day-tah")
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Went to look for the thumbs up button realized I could not thumbs up it more than I already have and I got sad... true story
You just killed me on this one
As you can see from my last comment I really liked this chapter... But there is only one thing that bugs me.
When it was established that twilight was sterile early in the story I was a bit conflicted... why would Celestia do that?
Could she not wait until after Twilight had a few foals before taking away her ability to have them... but then I though well at least she wont have to outlive her own kids so turning her into what I though was an immortal Alicorn, before she had the chance to have any was a mercy in a way.
But now that your telling us that she is mortal... well then that makes her early sterility pointless! Since she would not have out lived them anyway making it VERY mest up.
In short the only way Celestia would not look like a total bitch for having twilight "fixed" was if it also made her immortal.
(yea she is looking for a way to do it NOW but at the time of her assention there where no guaranties that she could find a way)
Everything else is great tho and still love the story just had to put that out there.
So, thinking on it, I actually have a theory about the subject of Twilight's immortality ever since the season 4 finale.
In the episode, after the box was activated Twilight and her friends were bathed in the energy within, but what happens next is a matter of interpretation. Here's what I saw: The Elements of Harmony each bathed the mane 6 in power, and in that power their bodies visibly dissolved into energy, which was then absorbed into the box, where they were imbued with the power of the Elements themselves, or the rainbow of light, or harmony, or whatever your favored word for Super Sparkly Tacky Rainbow Powers happens to be.
As far as I'm concerned that means they're either living equivalents of the gems, considering they showed they can release the Rainbow anytime they want to, or are were altered on a level to allow them to do so. Since it seems unlikely that the Elements of Harmony or the power thereof would never be needed after that particular generation again, I personally believe that alicorn or not, the mane 6 are no longer properly mortal either.
Which, considering ascended alicorns are not inherently immortal, would lead to all kinds of levels of drama in this story, wouldn't you think? Fae'd probably be happier than Discord on a date with Fluttershy.
For reference, the video where they open the box:
6077572 Maybe this was Celestia's plan all along when she released discord she knew that one day Twilight would have to teach some one who does not understand friendship it's true meaning so she could get the final key. Since Ponies, even ones like Diamond Tiara do understand friendship on some level already discord was the best candidate to be the means of Twilight getting her key.
Hm... Maybe that is why Discord winks at Celestia at the end of season 4, by the end of the finally he figured it out and was basically going "I see what you did there" at Celestia. Not that he was in on it only that he figured it out in the end since after all he would have to genuinely learn his lesson for the key thing to work.
6077262 is it suppose to be a reference to something? because I dont see it.
6078409 Eeeyup, Star Butturfly is the main character of a recent cartoon : "Star vs The Forces of Evil"
She have a very powerfull wand but don't really know how to use it so she often cast random spell, incuding a burning rainbow.
also she is a bit insane
6078546 ah Thanks.
I'd say the train has now definitely fallen off the canon rails, if such a statement was not only hilariously redundant and also ridiculously late.
I now feel the need to twin Blueblood and Wheetley, and also imagine that Celestia is glad her slow clap machine is still working.
"I AM NOT A MORON!" <smash> "COULD A MORON!" <smash> "DO!" <smash> "THIS?" <smash> ... "Uh oh."
One of the aides is called Raven!
(I see SOMEONE'S been reading Crystal's Wishes!)
The last part sound very dirty...
Please, for the love of all things holy, call the changeling media "CNN" -- Changeling News Network.
6080799 This has my vote.
6081560 Tusen tack!
This above all, to thine own self be true.
And this time, you can't just blast those subjects of yours that dare address you using your official title.
Trollestia be trollin'
Especially since she flat-out said that the Alicorn Amulet was created by another one of her students who managed to ascend.
This chapter, I greatly enjoyed it.
That ending made me giggle. Not the part about naked time with Twilight's parents, but when she introduced her newest conquests. She keeps increasing the size of her harem.
"Hi, Mom. Hi, Dad. This is my new filly-ishfriend, the prince/ss and ruler of all changelings."
"Hi, Mom. Hi, Dad. This is my other new fillyfriend, the fastest pony in Equestria and a future wonderbolt."
"Hi, Mom. Hi, Dad. This is my third new fillyfriend, the oldest, most powerful pony in Equestria, who the timing might imply effectively abdicated her position as absolute-monarch-in-all-but-name to be in my harem."
"Hi, Mom. Hi, Dad. This is my fourth fillyfriend, the creator of our world and everything in it."
On a side note: I hope Rainbow doesn't feel like a "third" wheel. Because she doesn't have the same amount of issues, mental or otherwise, that the rest of their quartet has she seems to fade into the background a lot.
These kinds of slips have been happening with more frequency over the last few chapters.
I'm pretty sure, not completely but pretty sure, that she's not working on it for her own benefit. Pretty bloody sure it's for Scoot's benefit. I'm also surprised that Fae isn't going more "screw destiny, Imma get that filly flying."
Though, I guess it's in his personality to just lie down and let destiny and whatever situation happens to comes along fuck him in the ass, it's been his MO for the past I-don't-know-how-long. If it isn't a threat to his immediate circle of caring then he just lets things roll, especially if he's the one getting reamed.
It's also not surprising that he just gives up at Celestia's suggestion to that effect, she been constantly telling him, either through her attitude or actual words, to let "destiny" do it's thing, even though she's also made it clear that "destiny" is a matter of probability, not something set in stone.
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Best comment.
IS THAT A STAR vs. THE FORCES OF EVIL REFERANCE?! Now the real question...is that the real Star hopping dimensions or her pony parallel?
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Twilight and Co can't access the Rainbow without the Elements, this was shown twice and stated once in Rainbow Rocks.
Sunset Shimmer is the only character who has ever shown the ability to access the Rainbow without the elements.
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Someone is always at the bottom of a social hierarchy.
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You... did watch the tirek episode and the following song sequence right?
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It does seem to take him time to realise these things, or maybe he wont even think on it until after they fix sunset.
Besides story wise if he ignores scoots then sunset has another chance to shine/grow and get her technomancy on.
>Celestia, former High Princess of Equestria, Alicorn of the Sun, Star of the Morning, Guardian of the Realm, Defender of Harmony, She Who Brightens the World
What, no 'Defeater of Discord'?
6092587 that's the Humane girls not the Mane 6.
Think of it. all that the writers have stated is that Twilight will not outlive her friends. Nothing in there says that Twilight is not immortal just that she won't have to watch them die.
Then consider this. The Element Powers are litterally in the girls. It altered their forms when they access it. Their flanks flash when a friendship quest is needed. And to top it all off look at the thrones. The thrones have their cutie marks not the elements on them. If the girls were still mortal wouldn't it be odd for the replacement for Rarity have to sit on they throne with her predacessor's cutiie mark?
No what the Season did was ensure that the mane 6 are ageless immortal. Time will not kill them but a being or weapon powerful or enchanted enough could.
Good thing you started to recon the sterile thing because Canon Cadance is pregnant.
Technically, that is not true. As of episode 19 season 5, it's confirmed that it is canon alicorn's CAN get pregnant.
But... this was started before that episode came out and is an AU, so i'll let that little technical error go. Would've made things a hell of a lot more interesting if this fic was able to stick to the canon though. Phew, would Omni been in for a shock
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That mare was clever
Just tell them that you're taking an extended vacation, I mean you've been working over a millenia they can't really say you don't deserve one
No they do not
...i am Fae in this scene
Well now I'm just curious
Bluebloods
Literally a fundation shacking chapter. For Equestria and Twilights familie.
So... When do Blueblood get executed besides his idots following em? High treason kinda makes it mandatory. PUBLICLY burning em alive? Off with the head? Or maybe let Changelings feed on em until they die?
Now that everything will change to Nighttime
( Nightcourt etc ) things will change dramaticly. Night might get the entire opening times of Canterlot effected
What a chapter... Mindblowing is the least That sure is one for the historybooks.