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Lol. And now I'm doing your mom....
Oh Rainbow. Never change.
pure glory in words
You get all the for actually making a 'you're mom' joke funny!
5380362 I've always wanted to say that but I was afraid of eating lead. (and maybe my personal moral)
ROFL
"You had to of realized"
had to have
0:23 That is all.
Also, replace any lyrics that relate to 'Kid' with 'Spike', and you got a pretty good representation of Fae's feelings towards Spike.
I was reading Rainbow's "everything gonna be alright kid" talk and was all like," yeah, you cheer that kid up girl!"
Then the part about her doing his mom... and the feels train went off the rails. There were no survivors.
Also Unicorns of theBeach. Do they also do Alchemy: the Assembly?
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Aaand you lost it rainbow.
ten, unpredictable
I
made
explained
Needs an 'a' between those
and hows of
...No, no it's not. Why are you so scandalized if you're approving, Rarity?
Should be a 'not' somewhere in there around proper.
my
This one was a bit tricky, given the context, but I believe the bolded word ought to be 'turn'. If I'm incorrect, then add 'from turning' after orgies.
whipped
Caught by Reese already.
to (Not that that's going to work, pretty much all pen and paper rpgs include a note that GM rulings take priority over the rules in some manner)
have
Needs a space.
Needs an 'I' after the second as.
Add a 'could' between she and get, swap 'at' with 'all'.
Cadence and I. Easy check, remove one and see if it sounds right.
Needs 'that the' between find and plant, and an 'of' between out and the.
your
Oh, WELL done, Rainbow.
What?
Nevermind.
5380362 this chapter is all kinds of awesome and hilarity.
soo say rainbow had it 98% or 99% to the goal and then tripped over her hoves at the last second then...man that's gotta smart
I always leave this story a little happier than when I came into it. Thank you so much for making this.
I kinda hope that Cadence brings up why Fae finds her "scary". I don't see her as one to let that rest. Actually, all the alicorns are scary.
Cadence: emotional mind control
Twilight: minor reality bending
Luna: tidal manipulation, targeted meteor strikes, seasonal/environmental disruption.
Celestia: Seasonal/climate disruptions, nuclear fission/fusion, control over the giant ball of atomic hellfire in the sky.
Granted, the last three may not fit well into this story, but I can see an opening for the first one. I hope to see it come back.
RD's last line is even funnier, when you consider that Twi just said that RD was pretty much Spike's dad by RD's logic.
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Well done what?
Uh..
By well done, i meant doing me.
this is why Rainbow does racing not football
what we have here, ladies and gentlemen, is a classic case of "foot in mouth" syndrome.
Near the end when rainbow says doing your mom lol
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I was never really into the Sparity shipping, but the way they try to dissuade him from it is just...BS.
First off, the whole different species thing. They talk like this is a complete no go, but if that was the case Fae could never have a relationship with Twilight.
It was good that Fluttershy tried to stand up to it, but the way she was shot down and how she corrected herself made me cringe. The whole 'it can only work out if the other party is a pony inside'. If that was the case we would have a second reason why Fae could never be with a pony. Fae is obviously quite a lot changeling and human considering his violent thought processes. And that matter also completely ignores the other races in a way. What about minotaurs and griffons? Can't they have a relationship with ponies, because they are not ponies inside? Really, that Fluttershy line sounded like pure pony superiority and I feel sorry that she was pushed into it.
When we have the age thing. Reason three which would also mean a break-up between Fae and his herd. His body is only three months old the last time it was mentioned. So he is a minor. But what really annoyed me was simply the saying that you can't be together with someone if an age gap is there. My sister would think differently since her partner is a lot older than her. Of course she isn't a minor and I think that is the major problem here. But even that problem wasn't really a problem. Rarity could have for example waited for his maturity.
Now that we talk about Rarity, and the: "Rarity really cares about you!" speech. No. No, she doesn't. At least I'm not seeing it. She knew about his feelings and knew his actions were Spike's way of courting her. Rarity is not dumb after all. But she still accepted it, keeping his hopes up. And the nickname, no matter how childish it was, was interpreted by Spike as a chance in my opinion. He thought it was an act of affection. Of course the wrong type of affection, but he is young, so how should he know? In the end it simply looked like she used him, and in the end she even left Shining and Cadence to tell Spike about her relationship with them. She didn't even have the BACKBONE to actually face him and talk to him. She kind of tortured him in a cruel way. I don't think she meant to hurt him that badly, but she did. So how can they actually talk like she was caring? If she was caring she would have actually talked to it himself instead of planning to inform him through the grapevine. Not to mention she never nipped it in the bud in the first place and robbed him of valuable time he could have used to actually chase a REAL romance. Instead she simply stole his time and when she had the chance for royalty went instantly to the Crystal Empire. Without a talk, or even a thought about how he might feel. I know Spike was a colossal jerk to Fae and Sunset, but that doesn't mean he deserves something like this. Not to mention that all the tragedy with said mentioned characters could have been avoided if he hadn't wasted his time with Rarity and found his true love. THAT might actually helped him to branch out.
And not to forget Pinkie Pie. Spike is completely broken and Pinkie even insults him, just as if he hadn't has it worse enough. Her argument about it being favors is not the best one in my opinion. It was an obvious courting attempt from Spike. And Rarity accepted his attempts. So how can he not be a tad angry and feel used by her? Pinkie simply turned it around and made it sound like he was the one who wanted to use Rarity and not the other way around. And that is just so wrong on so many levels.
Well, at least that's how I see it. I couldn't find a single good argument which actually left me feeling sorry all the way for the little dragon!
hmm so Spike is 13 making twilight 19 because she hatched him when she was six and I think Rarity was mentioned earlier as 28 or so when mentioning how she was over double spike's age. If they all got their cutie marks at the exact same time then Rarity was... 15?!? Fifteen when she got her cutie mark? Talk about a late bloomer considering the average is guessed somewhere between 8-12 and the CMC are on the latter end of that scale.
because they like each-oh, wait, you're talking about that threesome, of which one is male.
W-Why’re you guys kissing?”
compliments
unless it's a very different party and Rarity is being served to all the guests along with the punch
had to have realized (or, if you insist on that pronunciation, "had to've realized")
Whassat?
whose dormitory I had seen
where're
to teach
WELP
Damn fine chapter. Very curriose how this all will develop ones the story get continued
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Hocuspocus: The Get Together
I suppose Sunset will need to call Fae, ‘daddy,’ now? The same with Spike and Rainbow?