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Well..... That was.... different.
I honestly don't know what else to say to this chapter...
Yep. Spike is doomed. Unless he decided to go about lying and claimed that Sunset or Fae started it....Which, if he does, will result in his entire future being tossed down the damn drain.
A rockoff? Against someone who you know speaks in rhyme? That has "bad idea" written all over it. But hey, if it works, it works.
A bit of a continuity problem though: Off the top of my head, I know that Pinkie, at the very least, can play several instruments. At once. And after looking around a bit, I learned that AJ can also play the fiddle. And they can all sing, of course.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_lK4cX5xGiQ you should of used lyrics from this for right before the epic song that we dont get to hear
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But none of them are rock band instruments with the possible exception of the drums.
And the 'best song in the world' is another thing from Tenacious D that Fae just used to insure his victory by having Luna and Tia provide the conditions of the sun and the moon being in the sky at the same time while Shining was distracting the demon with the we are pony line.
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I can think of at least one obvious example of a fiddle used in a rock song.
But I get that it's all Rule of Cool and Tenacious D references. Still, I can be a stickler for details.
When Fae said the part "deactivated laser with my dick" at first i was that seems out of place but then I realized since the conditions to deactivate the death lasers was to be a MALE dark magic using unicorn he/she did technically deactivated them his/her dick
That's one way of doing it...
And yes! Spike must pay...
Oooh~! What tor-punishment will spike get?
...I feel as if the 'best song in the universe' is a reference to something and I'm missing it.
5010389 its reference to their tribute and in reality there wasn't any.
Great chapter i waiting to his punishment
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I suppose!
As for all the drive to punish Spike, just remember that a punishment is meant to teach and improve the one being punished. Wishing retribution on him is different, and is more often than not, cruel.
That said, I'm fine with admitting to being petty. I want to see Spike get a Reason You Suck speech, followed by having it rubbed in his face just how badly he screwed up, and the little bastard left sobbing in a ball - not because he's hopeless, but because it dawns on him just how horrible of a little shit he's been. Hopeless and having a clear villain other than oneself means eventually he'd just lash out in hate and self righteousness. The other alternative gives him no-one to lavish his hate and misery upon... but himself.
So if the rock-off was so epic it basically unmade that demon, does that mean 'crystal-dick-face' is alive again? Shining seem to have recovered, after all...
And may I humbly request Flash Sentry getting revived in that case? Not only do I think the 'oh god, what have I done from Fey would be hilarious, but that way you can keep on messing with him as well! Everybody wins! (Except Flash, but that's a victory all on its own!)
I love you man
“Sind Sie das Essen? Nien, wir sind der Jagar.”
what the *censored* ?!
Srysly, I am from Germany and I have NO idea what you want to say with that.....
Greetings from , well, you know where... 3ee
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It's the opening line in the theme song from Attack on Titan
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Oh my god!
That was absolutely fantastic!
I feel like I just witnessed an artist at work, that was so much better than just an off-hand reference!
5010683 i can see Twinkie getting revived, but Flash got fucking stabbed in the throat he ain't getting back up, unless he turns into a ghost and Fae exorcism him
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Well, he did die in a room saturated with dark magic...
Although come to think about it, I think I'd prefer if it got played seriusly.
Think about about it. Quite a bit of this story has been Fea getting used to that Equestria is a real (if silly) place.
I think a lot of genuine drama and heart-string tugging could come from zombie Flash, or whatever, sinking down and demanding Fea tell him why he/she/it hates him that much.
The ending reminds me so much of the movie: The knights of baddassdom. It's a...don't know how to describe it. It's horrible and awesome at the same time. The ending though fits very well with how this demon was beaten. Watch it. :D
I'd have settled it with a Pokémon battle, except I don't think that's possible right now.
From their reactions, it sounds like they just sang Through the Fire and Flames.
Well, not exactly. I know it is your story but, if the internet DID crash it can be rebooted with 5 of 7 key cards carried by 7 different people. Use 5 at once and global internet reboots. No harm done, aside from collateral damage cause by the panic.
Sorry, had to point that out.
5305040 They could improvise.
wow.....
I don't know if that's a cop out, or one of the most awesome things I've ever seen on this site.
Well, that was interesting.
And it was the best song in the world!
It was the best song in the world!
Reading this fic and it's easy to see, one and one make two, two and one make three!
Not just the world but all of reality!
5010799 Oh it is? That makes that scene so much more awesome than before!
I'm...actually disappointed by how this chapter turned out. What had been, up to now, a serious story suddenly takes a turn for the silly and it just doesn't really work, I mean seriously, a Rock Off?
You have two strikes left, use them wisely.
Cheers.
Wow. Was that reference really necessary?
This is really an awesome story. The integration with the show with the plot telling is magnificent. The flawed main character is so interesting because of how legitimately he views the world and his situation. Just Awesome. The only real flaw I find is the musical songs.
Please don't have him initiate another one like this. They just seem to take away so much from the story that every time I read one I have to almost disconnect from the story before reconnecting at the end of the song. And it is not because of the songs because I LOVE Tenacious D but here it just felt like slapstick. I mean you have an Amazing build up and EPIC fight underway and it all builds up to...a Joke. Every other villain fight has been good with: Lucky shot with Chrysalis, surprise beat down against boogie, Get the Hell out of dodge with Grover, and now...a musical. It doesn't even really fit in with the Fae's character so It feels extremely out of place. Fae seems to be a reluctant participant which is why the initiative here is just so weird and out of place. Which is too bad because the rest of the story is gold.
Seriously, sometimes while I am reading this I forget that I am reading a story and have such an emotional connection with the characters I drift off in an emotional circuit before continuing to read. Which is great because it shows how well you are conveying the characters. I feel for Twilight when she has her emotional breakdowns and explains why. I feel the depression or anger or even the righteous fury from Fae whenever someone he cares about is threatened or insulted. So great job writing the characters.
Now with my piece said I am going to end with my own bad joke right now. I cant wait to read more but right now there is a big mac with my name on it.
Chapter 23 Dude
Pinkie Apple Pie AJ plays the banjo
Swarm of the Century Pinkie plays several instruments & that was S1so Fae should know
Otherwise, great chapter
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Wow. Just... Wow. At first I really was kinda upset it turned out it was gonna be a freaking Pick of Destiny enactment, but then...
...Okay, so I suppose I missed the most awesome concert in existence. So that's probably a 'Guns and Roses- Welcome to the jungle', magically enhanced live concert, starring changeling monarch vocals.
Sigh. It is true, something like that coul not possibly be described in words.
make deals
want
retreat
lightning
Sind wir das Essen? Nein, wir sind der Jäger.”
"from whence" is redundant; whence already means "from where" so that's like saying "from from where". Just "whence".
cymbals
the Internet
I lay
Long time ago me and my friend Armor here
We was explorin' down a long abandoned mines
All of a sudden, there shined a shadow devil
In the middle… of the caves
And he said:
"Play the best song in the world, or I'll eat your soul."
Well me and Armor, we looked at each other,
and we each said... "Okay."
And we played the first thing that came to our heads,
Just so happened to be,
The Best Song in the World, it was The Best Song in the World.
Look into my eyes and it's easy to see
One and one make two, two and one make three,
It was destiny.
Once every hundred-thousand years or so,
When the sun doth shine and the moon doth glow
And the grass doth grow...
What, no wings for Shiny Hiney?
You'd think that much residual awesome would do it...
I almost see them singing tribute to it later.
Ok, that was stupid. And I went to listen both songs on YouTube even before reaching notes. Then watched again.
Absolutly PRICELESS ♡♡♡♡♡
I like to imagine that the song Fae sang was Hail to The King by Avenged Sevenfold
You keep calling her goddess but really? She isn't that strong