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at the very start.
I can honestly say that I'm so satisfied with this chapter that I just went back to check if this series had been ticked off as complete.
Well done!
Knowing Fae's luck , the universe would mess with Fae's the most after Twilight said that xD
Bring up a real possibility for conflict, squash it in a few paragraphs.
Why even bring it up?
'I waiting'
Should be 'I was waiting'
A very nice chapter.
That last line lol
Don't tempt fate twilight.
And they need an explanation for why they can't integrate into equestrian society.
It makes SSSSOOOOO much sense that Pinkie has a combo for sex
Jump out a window,
Taco Tuesday. Foreshadowing Honestly i wonder how Tirek will do against Fae
And poor Rainbow, her line won't continue after her, that is a crying shame
Jeeze Twilight, don't ever say that.
Some very sage wisdom in there all right.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Next chapter. Sombra comes back from the grave to enslave them all!
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Extremely well.
5709577 why, he could have Discord's magic by face off and we already know that Changelings are not good for him It really depends on their stats at face off.
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Where is it said changeling souls aren't delicious? A souls a soul to tirek by all accounts since he just gains powers not the souls actual abilities.
More to the point, because fae has rather explicitly set things off the rails. And you don't fuck with rainbow destiny shit without it exploding in your face.
5711280 He hasn't seen season 4, he's living it, though clearly altered by his presence. And the one thing he has made very clear. Nopony messes with the Mane 6. He fully admits to being technically evil thus will do anything and EVERYthing to protect the girls. Thus why when this face off comes up it will be popcorn time
THIS IS AWESOME!
DUN DUN DUN!
5719133 Like I said, it takes time.
Come On Sombra, is your time now!!!
Finally finished reading this up to this point and it's a lot better than what I would be able to write.
Oh I'm sure that's not foreshadowing of any kind, especially not of Blueblood trying to find outdated, but technically still on the books laws to use against Fae or even Celestia.
Still as to the foal issue, Dash may not want kids(at the moment anyway), but Fae seems to have forgotten that the hive mind might someday. Though maybe if he can find a way to hack the 'queen database' to get the useful info without risking being turned evil by memories of generations of evil bug queens, he can figure out how to breed changelings that might share his 'love is better if it is given rather than taken' attitude so they really CAN integrate in pony society.
Oh great. Another promising, 500,000 word story waiting to murder my free time... (I count origonal and sequels together)...
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Having just ran right though it, let me say it is worth it.
All thirteen of us (you know:
5753886 Very fitting!
5753677 Still reading it, though I had to pause for a few days because of life reasons.
This fic is strange. One paragraph can have me all but ready to drop it, but the next makes it so I can help but read the next three. The passive aggressive misanthopy and ponywanking (no I don't mean the clop but that is something different) is still a little grating, but with how all my other complains always seem to be resolved within the story itself I cant help but read on just to see if 'being less of an asshole' will be a main part of fays character development.
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This story is mainly about character development...and not just Fea's. Does it have parts I don't like? Yes, and that does include Fae's assholessness at some points, but it is worth going through. It's ups far outweigh its downs, and I find it accurately reflects life (as much as one can in these stories.)
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And i'm one of the people that upvoted it. And I've follow stories with premises or driving elements that I despise because they where written well and told their story competently. But that's not to say I despise the premise of this one, it's just that there are some things in it that are pet peeves of mine. But, at the end that's all they are- 'pet peeves' and people downvoting a story because it doesn't fit with your personal taste is a pet peeve of mine.
I really hope that doesn't come off half as self superior as I fear it does.
5771815 I was referring to Fae himself, as his mind and soul are from a body, native to an alien universe
New chapter anytime soon?
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*opens mouth to respond*
*Pause*
*opens mouth again*
"Fair enough"
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Then the spell gets canceled, I mean it did not cause the changeling Queen to explode or anything, right?
Also, I am no longer reading this story since the author decided to go the Harem route.
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Nope, you need to know the form you change into, and Sunset knows more about ponies than humans. And is NOT a changeling pony spell, is an anything to pony spell. Also drones use it, and drones are not smart.
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Spike was afraid that Fairy was conspiring to take Twilight away from him. And that was exactly what she was doing. Unless of course I'm missing the hidden meaning behind 'The little bastard got in my way.'
And yes Spike is depicted as being a petulant child, but that's the thing. He is a child. What's Fay's excuse for his 'fuck this kid' attitude that lead him to actively put it in Twilight's head to get him sent away rather then simply trying to talk to the kid first?
And the whole 'spike is being racist' thing doesn't hold much wight. Fay has outright described herself as 'evil' and said that the changelings are no different then what they were like during the wedding except that she is their dictator now rather than Chrisssy. They would still suck the life out of a pony without a second thought and only don't do that because they have an alternative food source (which is still technically the same thing.)
The Changelings are still the same 'predators' they were, and fay has said that in a later chapter, she just muzzled them.
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By the same logic, though, Spike should have been run out of town because he's a greedy dragon. All Fae admitted was their nature, not that they couldn't outgrow or suppress it. If Spike can be trusted despite his species, it's rather hypocritical of him to despise someone based on theirs.
Furthermore, the fact that Fae worked to get Spike sent off doesn't excuse accusations of mind control: Twilight made her own decisions, even including knowing about Fae's anti-dragon bias.
5810358 Again. Spike is a child. What's fairies excuse for being an asshole?
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Physically, he's three months old.
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Tushay
5822765 who says those were the only two summer suns celebrations? Likely they had 2 others but nothing of note happened during them so no episode. the one year thing even hurts the destruction of Golden Oaks. No to mention even the fact that Winter Wrap up is BEFORE Fall Weather Friends. No It's four years and who ever says otherwise. even the writers are full of crap for there's no logic in it.
As for the CMC, they have their talent but haven't hit the trigger. SHow Stoopers basically gave it away. Sweetie is either singing or song writing, Applebloom is construction, and Scootaloo is dancing. THough the CMC better get their marks this season
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2 key diffrences, the changelings becoming part of Equestria can cut both ways and Earth pony strength is just as much an aspect of magic as Pegasus flight. 1st the changelings were an enemy nation to the Griffons. Then suddenly they are absorbed by an ally as part of that allies nation. This can go one of a few directions. The Griffons completely forgive the Changelings for any and all missdeeds with no repercussions or reparations paid for the benefit of relations, or Equestria can take up the burden. If Equestria is willing to throw her allies under the bus for its new citizens then why shouldn't the Griffons demand Equestria take up the burden those citizens should bear?
Second is Changeling magic vs Natural magic. As we have seen in the show, pony physical magic seems to stem from their natural strength. Ex. Hurricane Fluttershy and wing power, the fact that physical exercise can improve wing power means that physical strength ties into Natural pony and Griffon magic. Meanwhile Changeling and Unicorn magic ties into other factors. Changeling power is more related to love consumption and can drastically alter the physical abilities of an individual. this would be akin to Twilight Sparkle using a magic spell that converted her magical energy into physical strength. How would the games committee handle such a thing? So they ban the use of activated magic, this would include changeling magic. So in the end it is something left to be decided at a later date.
Here's a thought. There have been two other "swarms? hives?" whatever before this current one with the ponies. The ones for the buffalo and mammoths/elephant things. This indicates to me that since they are a shapeshifting species and take one the forms of their main prey they are quite adaptable. The memories on how to do this are probably in there somewhere with the former queens and would tell how to force such things to happen.
Now going along with that thought if the hive is really that malleable to what the queen wants Fae might be able to make other changes to the hive. For instance instead of being a parasitic mindless (for the most part) monsters she could find eays to make it symbiotic instead. She could even possibly change what and how they eat if she knew how. But for that to hapen she needs to be queen. And if my time table is right she has about 2 maybe 3 more weeks before that 1 month timetable she mentioned to Twilight sometime back.
Friendship is Cock-block
scandalously OR scandalizedly
Cake's
throes
brakes
But that was Celestia titel
Unless lover clears that titel...
Damn fine chapter. Guess the only thing filling Omniferiouse is love, tongues and maybe a toy or three