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This chapter... this incredible chapter. It's like it has the Want It, Need It Spell cast on it. There are not enough words to express my love for this chapter. As an avid D20 player (who really should be spending less time on games and more on his writing...), I can say this was GOLD. Bluff check to kill Blueblood, Trixie and the wolf pack, Cancer vs a Saw. This was glorious!
I'm still short of breath from laughing... In fact, I need to go read it again!
The amount of references in this is.... Ah, I love this fic even more.
Good job as always.
Roll for Initiative!
Oh god, I just couldn't stop snickering at this chapter. It's just... fantastic! And Trixie is a baws.
This chapter was glorious beyond words and freaking amazing ! Best part was when blueblood got murdered lolol
Well it's no giant star crab named Fluffy but I certainly enjoyed it!
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
And the movie afterwards is PRICELESS.
"On the bright and cheery morning of Sunday"
"It's Saturday morning."
There seems to be a bit of an inconsistency there.
TRIXIE IS BEST EVERYTHING.
That was unexpected and very funny twist on the whole RPG thing. Good job.
Fae...you just called Sunny Skies Celestia in front of everyone.
Out of curiosity was the "You have defeated cancer with a saw." thing a reference to Big Human on Campus? I ask because one chapter had a very similar normal-human D&D session happen.
Ooooh lordy, i'm surprised you didn't have Cadance suckle her finger in a sexual manner.
This chapter was great. But I can't help but wonder if someone is fudging some dice rolls.
Now how has no one figured out that Sunny Skies is Celestia? That ruse cannot possibly last much longer.
And I'm getting the feeling that it's only a matter of time before Trixie and Sunset hook up. I was going to suggest that Blueblood would (unsuccessfully, of course) try to hook up with Sunset when he found out that Celestia had adopted her, but that's clearly not going to happen. And I suppose that depending on just how literally he takes the whole "Celestia's nephew" thing, that could be really weird anyway.
This part made me laugh and cringe in equal parts - because I've actually done this very thing in a game once.
It bit me in the arse about ten minutes later, but the expression on the GM's face was worth it.
Ya got a good thing going here.
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Oh, I know… but that doesn't mean I like it.
I see you've been reading Big Human on Campus: After School? This was a bit closer to plagiarism than homage.
Y'know, I was rereading this story earlier and found myself wondering if Fae was going to go looking through Chryssalis' memories to find out how she accidentally(?) brought him to Equestria, just he could try to do the same for Sunset to get her mostly back to normal...
... And to get Sunset to say "I have two mothers and one of them is my father".
Yeah, no shit.
aaawww why couldn't Blueblood die for real
5538272 Now where would the fun in that be?
This way you get to do it more than once.
That was probably the funnest thing iv'e ever read on this site. This chapter alone means I will wind up reading this whole story.
This made me crack up laughing. 'How to cure cancer: be a lucky motherfucker with a saw.'
5429447 what movie are they talking about?
5881659 Seabiscuit
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Character choosing Radical Liberal "not because
Inciting incident being "you all live in the same place and are out of food and must go to get food"
Income disparity of lawyer vs. others resolved by "you're level 1"
Nobody can drive despite someone getting a car
Bus noodle incident somewhat resolved by lawyer
Unsuspecting character gets cancer from a cigarette
...that deals damage more like RPG poison
...that is cured by a character with a [chain]saw from their profession
Yes, this is altogether too-similar to Big Human on Campus: After School Ch 1 (omake chapter for Big Human on Campus, a Ranma½ / Rosario+Vampire crossover (which is worth reading).
It does change the characters and HOW they fit in, and their personal foibles, and the wording, such that it doesn't quite look like a cut-and-paste job.
But you have EXACTLY the same series of events of many characters choosing neutral, one character being ultra-conservative, another being radical liberal, being asked if it's because the other is the opposite, and the reason instead being because they had dumped intelligence. More plagiarism than homage, I agree.
For some reason, ever though this is my...fourth time? reading this, I can never remember why Celestia was so gung-ho on Fae. I understand her reasons later, but the timeline seems a little out of order. Then again, I read and watch romance partially because I don't natively understand it.
Maybe this time it finally clicked, and will stay in my head:Because he was the firs to call her out in front of everypony. Well, second if you count the wedding and Chrysalis. Or maybe because he did get his ass kicked so badly by his 'mother'. Unfortunately he and twilight were a thing, so she tried to punish him by screwing up the transformation spell, as a juvenile coy little thing(that turns out wasn't so little).
I think my issue before was you simply glossed over any interactions between Fae and Celestia, until the Tambelon arc. Whether you thought up the romance during/after that arc, or just didn't want to foreshadow it too early, I couldn't say. The whole 'giving you my soul' thing is hard to interpret as well. Is it just Celestia's nature, that she dislikes seeing her ponies die in front of her, the fact that it was Fae, or that he was Twilight's beau?
Then there's her reason not to take her soul orb back.Yes it's painful for him and/or/not her to remove, but after the whole "Hivemind might eat me' thing, why wouldn't she remove it? Is she just that starved for affection? Wanted a somewhat guilt-free tryst with him that Twilight couldn't duplicate? A safe place to vent?
Then there is the whole 'you ramped up my libido' thing that I can't quite figure out. Since we don't have any real pre-reveal info about changling feeding effects on ponies(can't remember if sex with [fake]Flash Sentry was mindblowing, or after Twilight fell for Fae), it's hard to tell what's going on in Tia's head. When did she fall in love with Fae? It's implied that the more you feel for a changeling, the better it's feeding on youwill feel. Yet the first time Celly fed Fae it was...dull, way back on Earthquestria. then later it's amazing after Sunset got hurt, and then there's Celly's flirtatious comment about her soul orb and UGH!!!!
I really love this series, perhaps my favorite of yours, and I'm a bit sad it hasn't been updated recently. I do hope you can help ease my confusion, hopefully my rambling made some sense.
Not bothering reading this ripped-off chapter again.
"Do you think I'd let that stop me!"
One of the greatest quotes of all time.
Honestly..... I'd like to see Sunset join him in the herd.
He's not entirely wrong
She's not wrong
I can believe that
He needs more than words, he needs to be punished, and I mean real punishment not a slap on the wrists
...oh yeah... I kinda didn't think about that
Eh, it's not like it's the craziest thing people have done in a tabletop RPG
Let's be honest, it's far from the weirdest thing people have done in an RPG
............how in the world did she manage that
OMG
Getting closer to the current story end that wasnt continued in years
Beautiful chapter
Your creativ mind is a PRICELESS treasure
Love is in the air ~♡
Blueballs really could need a gelding or a train trough his brain... Might improve his character
Very creative chapter!!
These relationships feed me