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Welcome to the School of Hard Knocks Twilight, with Morally Gray Actions 101.
If Fae really wants to drive a wedge between Celestia, Twilight, and himself, I think he should discuss "Lesson Zero." Because that goes beyond worrying about just another day. She sent it in early, but she panicked on Tuesday when she still had the rest of the week to send it in. Plus, she didn't think "nothing new learned, previous lessons reinforced" would make for a good report.
Though I'd also point out to Fae about "he that fights monsters"...
Can't say I personally care (insert 'Oh, LOL, Europeans!' joke here) and it was a great chapter...
But is this story really still Teen material? Just seems quite a bit of sex and sexual stuff for a Teen, but might be just be me.
Good job on the chaptet.
Mmm, salty drake tears...
And what is banana breath?
5017423 Has Fae Ever been good? As long as we've seen him he's been pacing back and fourth in Neutral and Evil territory with little to do in the good areas other than to satisfy the occasional need for justice he has.
The little bastard got in my way.
damn right dont fuck with omni
Yuhuuu first time someone got what he deserved great chapter.
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Well, let’s take a look at our um…protagonist’s actions…
1. Came up with a plan that basically introduced racism into Equestria with the Pegasus Union and their cries of inequality
2. Killed changelings while he was still in the hive just for the hell of it, or he got angry
3. Kidnapped and tortured Flash Sentry because she didn’t want to use the mind control option as it would have involved some seduction
4. Lied to Twilight, A LOT
5. Hates Daring Do due to the fact she is alive
6. Attacked Ponyville and threatened ponies to draw out Celestia into a fight (which Applejack kind of spoiled)
7. Killed Chrysalis
8. Isn’t really performing his duties as the changeling queen because laying eggs is weird
9. Murdered a dragon just so she could mount its head on her wall, although the piles of gems were nice too.
10. Wiped out a fruit bat swarm after Fluttershy made peace with them to maximize Applejack's profits.
11. Brought prostitution to Ponyville
12. Mind wiped school children
13. Half-way manipulated Twilight into getting rid of Spike
14. Didn’t really care about the crystal ponies that were dying, but only about Cadence’s reputation when it came time to save them.
15. And some other stuff, like making a class full of powerful mages and two alicorns get into a brawl because he didn't want to teach a large class.
Spelling Error!
... be. “So um, Celetia-”
;-)
5017654 Oh, Indeed. I was mostly referring to namars comment
The easiest way to fight monsters is to be the biggest, baddest monster around.
i think that this stuff with spike will come back to bite him on his/her flank later
Basically, here you listed 60% of modern internet`s functions.
Good ling. Thats way.
Fae is an intereting and confusing character, but I like that about her. She's got some moral boundaries that she hates to cross and things that upset her direly when she sees them as "wrong" (such as starving a teenage girl or hurting them amongst others) but at the same time, some of her thoughts and actions scream of changeling influence/influence from her mother/Chrysalis.
She hated Spike for what he did, and for good reason, but that line of "he got in my way" at the end there just makes me think of Chrysalis all over.
wait a minute did Celestia just had a orgasm I think Fae fed just a little too long, gotta be careful with feeding, ponies may get addicted
I find this typo very amusing. And maybe a bit disturbing.
And wow, Celestia. The first thing you do after adopting Sunset is feeding Fae to the point of orgasm? I hope she's old enough not to be scarred for life.
For the swarm!
Omni is the type who will do everything to reach her/his goal with a few moral standards to keep herself in place...That's...so...awsome! (mainly because those many morals keep her from being truly evil or intolerable) That is actually good for the changeling swarm...acting like a true changeling queen.
Also, will we ever see her charge into battle with an army of changeling behind her?
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Basically Fae is a good example of Lawfully Evil. S/he has a strict set of moral codes and ethics that s/he won't break, but as long as it favors his/her goals (friendship, love, survival of the swarm, etc.), then anything is allowed. I think there was even a chapter when s/he outright said that yes, s/he is evil, I know there was one where Fae said s/he was made of dark magic.
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Also,
Best line ever.
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Pragmatic and an anti-hero I'd say. Somewhere in the 'Neutral' alignment range. Yes she isn't Good by any means - and doesn't even pretend to be most of the time - but s/he has morality and is capable of compassion, even if it's only afforded to those that aren't actually antagonistic to him/her. Frankly I think s/he'd be borderline Good if not for the whole changeling thing and the suggestions that his/her existence as such is influencing his/her thoughts and goals.
I doubt its gonna happen but man does some Twilight X Omni X Tia shipping sound fantastic.
5172032 Yes. Yes it does
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So we're talking about Batman here, right? Not the bright cartoony one with too many wannabe bat-[blank]s but the dark, horrifyingly practical like the Terminator, "I'll save taxpayers their money by killing you instead of life in prison" Batman.
TL;DR Basically thinking like a human with a whole lotta power at their disposal.
Yea, what IS it with the banana thing? Never actually figured it out. Was it an episode i may have missed, something the fandom does?
5342065 Friendship is Magic Bitch. Look it up.
5342065 Friendship is Magic Bitch. Look it up.
5433852 that whole video was an ABOMINATION!!! (with 3THREE exclamation points)
To me this is cannon
5440229 "So many friends!"
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And with that one line almost all the sympathy I had for Fae just bled away. And validated every thing Spike said about her.
5017654 Oh good, I was starting to think that Fae being a blatant sociopath was irony blindness on your part.
Do you like bananas?
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To be fair, though, several of those charges were backed by 'good' characters, so I would make the case that in those specific circumstances those were more neutral than evil. Also, killing Chrysalis, in my opinion, could be nothing but neutral good, given her predisposition towards ponies.
Is s/he a pragmatic jerk? I'm not denying that. But s/he has a heart of silver to go with it. (Not gold, because pragmatism).
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I'm sorry? I mush have misheard you, because I don't see how getting Twilight to actually punish a petulant child (in a manner that, while harsh, will ultimately expand his quality of life) validates the accusations of multiple mind controls, attempted conquest of the Crystal Empire (after s/he nearly died saving it from 'mother'), and the belief that changelings must be monsters because they're changelings (a very racist viewpoint, like saying Unicorns are snobbish because they're unicorns). While it does show that s/he can be a monster, my belief is that people (and ponies) become what you make them.
Mmmmk this argument arc is over, and is perhaps the worst I've read in any story on this site. Barely anything was logically resolved, and most of Fae's fair issues with Twilight were written off as Fae's fault. This wasn't "one mistake" as was mentioned, but progressively negligent and abusive behavior by Twilight that should have been treated as such. The only thing I can hope for here is for the Fae x Celestria to progress, or else I will lose all interest in reading this story
5768440 Dude consider what Spike caused.
First even though Fae has been nothing but kind to Spike in Ponyville, even having Twilight send some jewels for him he spread lies about her to the other Mane 6. he also her their relationship by being so clingy. Fae understood the no sex in the library thing do to his age but the fact that he got scared if she wasn't in her bed when he woke up and he refused to live in the castle meant it was hard for some alone time. Fae had to eat clones to survive rather then Twilight which Fae would prefer.
Then on the way to the Empire he was hostile towards Fae and Twilight's handling wasn't helping.
Then at the Empire the over the top praise got to his head and he decided to use it against not only Fae but Sunset as well. He blantantly lied not only about the stories but of Fae threatening him. The guy is freaking lucky that AJ wasn't there. And he cause Fae to break up with Twilight hurting both of them.
Finally the cave situtation, where is clearly ignoring the pain he is causing Twilight and trying to force Flash on her. THen both he and Twinkle order Flash to attack Sunset. At this point let's consider what just happened. He had a pony attack a innocent human who is important to Celestia herself. Sunset could have been crippled or KILLED from that. IF Sunset had died right then Fae would have likely killed both him and Flash, so he got REALLY lucky there. Then Twinkle got all insane and nearly caused the destruction of the Empire. Something he couldn't have done if Spike hadn't goaded them on.
He is getting off lucky that all that's being done to him is being sent away from Twilight, which in the end is for his own good. He is an accessory to attempted MURDER.
With Fae he crossed a line. She was willing to be nice till all of this went down. So any and all feelings by Fae are justified.
6131830 If you pay attention, you'd realize that's how a good chunk of relationships are. And logic and love are bitter enemies. The last time they were friends was with arranged marriages, and those ended up either miserably or with one member of the relationship having the other executed/assassinated. Some even did it themselves. If you expect a logical argument between two girls, both of which have their own emotional baggage and mental problems, as well as both being insanely stressed from work and someone actively trying to drive a wedge in between them, you're a dumbass.
Honestly, I was expecting more from her. To think this was the reason for all of this mess? Sure, it is the shortened version, but in the end appearing perfect was doing not only Fae harm, but herself too. She openly admitted that it is nice to be all buddy buddy with others. So suffering in the end could have been avoided. In the end Celestia is far from perfect as was proven more than enough times. Especially how Fae likes to point out Celestia's...stupidity. Yup, no offense, but Fae raised some good points in why Celestia wasn't one of the big planning types. Or at least was far from the perfect being she made herself out to be. Anyway, this was rather interesting revelation, showing just more than ever how flawed she is in this story. Kind of why I like her in this story!
Spike got off to easy way to easy. I am thinking of a few hundred years on the moon to think about just how he bucked up.
6196866 one attempted murder and on murder don't forget flash did die and treasson sinc twinki did try to take over and lets not forget the demon
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I know this is an older chapter and the conversation was a while ago, but there is a point that you forgot to add. Fae is visiting royalty to the Crystal Empire. Spike got lucky he actually cares about keeping good relations going with Equestria and knew Spike was really at fault; seeing as how any other ruler that was treated to even half the things Fae endured would have probably issued Cadance and the Crystal Empire a formal declaration of war. Heck wars have been fought for less!
over a millennium (millennia is plural)
this past millennium.
("this" does not go with plurals; one uses "these" instead)
wrenched
Celestia-”
I didn't think it was possible for me to love Celestia in this fic any more than I already do.........you proved me wrong. I still like Twilight and all, but I just can't help but hope that Fay and Twilight break(peacefully) and Fay gets together with Celestia.
Huh... That quite a happy ending for the Crystal City event... With Spike out of the way Omniferiouse is free to live with Twilight and focus on other stuff.
Spike might actualy finaly start developed his own self with its ups and downs.
Well done