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I'm loving these rapid updates.
An HiE where the human dumps his shipping partner? The very idea gets a laugh out of me.
I regret i have only one like to give this.
Yeah.....
I figured....
oh Twily
either Fae breaks her heart and the friends all have to choose sides.
Or Fae does not and that bitch Cadence wins.
The main problem with the former is now that Fae and Twilight share many friends not only will they both be hurt but their friends will hurt too.
The main problem with the latter is that if Fae doesn't follow through he is in a way condoning Spikes behaviour by putting the effort in for Twilight (or at least from Twilights point of view).
I too love the rapid updates... but frankly I found myself disappointed with this one. Hated the song in the movie, hate it elsewhere. Still, can't please everyone, so thanks for the effort.
That said - I really don't see why or how Fae's outlook changed quite this rapidly. S/he knew going in that it would destroy Twilight, and unless something else happened... I'm not entirely sure why Fae DIDN'T just go over to Twilight in full view of Cadence and go "Our relationship is over."
Also did Fae's logical genre-savvy brain just turn off or is she forgetting that there's a meeting taking place in a few hours and spelunking is not a sane way of passing that time.
4984993 I know right!? THIS IS MADNESS!
Damn, man, I want to see all that rage do something! Not just get brushed off like it was nothing! He made the decision to break things off with Twilight, she doesn't get to just ignore that reality and substitute her own! That's bullshit!
That, and Spike needs to get some mental help, because his paranoid delusions are hurting those around him. Shouldn't there be medication for that?
Edit: If all of this drama and rage happens and Fae just changes his mind, I'm going to feel cheated.
Someone's been watching too much Frozen. LOL
4985137 Madness?...THIS IS OVER MADNESS UPDATE!!!
...Twilight has been replaced..hasn't she?
4985385 by what? Changelings? ;)
4985474 ...Maybe...
ARE YOU ONE!?
damn it Cadance and twi i WANT to see the relationship drama and fuck spike (never thought id say that)
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Ditto. I want to see actual consequences for Twilight for her actions for once. I want to have her faced with the stark realization at the end of the day that "Yes, you screwed up. Yes, thanks in large part to your actions, what you did and didn't do, you fucked up your one chance at romance. And it's entirely possible you'll never get another."
I also kinda want Fae to point out to Cadence, "You know what? Where I come from, the kind of treatment your vassals heaped upon me and sunset last night would have been considered sufficient grounds for a honor duel at the very least, and not that long ago on the grand scale of things either. At worst it would have been considered grounds for war."
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Completely agree on both your points good sir.
I realy want to see what hapen next but what twilight showed actualy looks like atack of depresjon in my language called wyparciem if someone want to know my language is Polish if i didn't know better i would say that she just can't take it she was dumb that made herself believe in something else hapened that kind disase have tendency to hit realy hard when the symptoms are disapearing ba she my even try to kill herself if that would be the cause.
Ps. I forgot to say that he should eat cadense until she lose counscious for this song
Urg, I despise that song.
Honestly, I hope that you do use the break-Twi's-heart route, as it will be much more interesting. Mushy make-ups are booorrring.
In any case, good job! Keep upp the good work!
The thing is with relationships, is that it is a two way street. While this story is both fun and slughtly irritating at the same time, I feel compelled to go along with the annoyance and irritance that Fae is feeling right now. Having been engaged twice, the second time I was cheated on, I can say that biting one's tongue in a slightly hostile environment is only putting a pot to simmer, but Fae needs to "man up" and tell Twilight just how incredibly tiresome a one way relationship feels. It isn't funny, it isn't a misunderstanding, and it is freaking definitely not something a single musical number and some tea and an outing can fix. While I can get behind Spike being a baby dragon and all with abandonment issues, and mental scarring like that isn't something to be taken lightly, him being LITERALLY babied throughout a relationship crisis, especially one that was (in his mind) is detrimental to his own development. Coupled with the popularity and rumormongering he has done isnt doing any favors either. I am on the boat that Spike needs a bit of TLC but in this case?
He needs to learn the consequences of lying. The hard way. And the fallout of what happens afterwards. This is the kind of (really bad) cloak and dagger relationship BS I actually thrust myself into when my own BS-o-meter picks it up. I refuse to let the whiny/jealous morons demolish something they either do not understand or do not wish to comprehend.
So yes, I am on board for the "Twilight I'm taking a break from you." And if Spike opens his mouth (especially if it is in the public square or something) just explode on him how all the stories and what not about him were lies and embellishments, just like the process of polishing a priceless diamond heirloom on a turd. Having to fight mental conditioning, strike down one's own "mother" of sorts, put their life at risk multiple times, being stranded, form-fucked(bucked) been forced into the spotlight and all that jazz and only now is sick of it? Heck Id clap Fae on the shoulder and say "Time for a little vacation time. Yeah the food'll suck for a bit but hey, itll do ya a world of good."
Heh. They say the mark of a good author is one that can illicit a response from their readers. Not bad.
Goodness, it's like skyrim up in this bitch. I have to pick between the shinier of the two turds and I still can't do it. On the one hand, the one-way relationship between fae and twilight is almost as bad as an abusive relationship and I really want them to take a break. And on the other, I realise everything can be fixed (although a song and dance from a sister-in-law isn't really the way to go...) and it would be a terrible shame if both fae and twilight didn't do their very most to fix things. The fact that twilight simply just doesn't get it is infuriating, and spike needs an asswhooping.
Ok, really mad with spike. Anyone wishing spike would just drop dead or something... already done.
Click this!
Really think Fae needs to break up with her. I know whatever happens already happened but still.
YOU DIDN'T. YOU FUCKING DIDN'T!
Not inherently a bad song and it's always nice to see a Disney film that's actively subverting their old favourite "love conquers all" line, but it's definitely out of place. While "In Summer" was worse, that was still one of the songs that really made it clear that Frozen was written by stage writers rather than film writers.
(Frozen had various flaws and one of them was that it was structured as a collection of songs glued together by dialogue, rather than a story where songs provided emphasis to certain scenes that would have been there anyway.)
I'd say it's definitely more fitting for Cadance to sing it in this situation than for Frozen to use it as it did. (That movie never really realized that, during the rewriting process, the primary focus had shifted from Gerda (Anna) to the relationship between Anna and Elsa and, as such, assigned the screen time in an unsatisfying way. See the post I linked for details and a couple of examples of how certain scenes could have been done better.)
Denial: the first stage of grief.
Okay... this is just... cruel. They ignore him all week, they treat Sunset like sh*t and she is the one in the wrong?
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Halfway through that song I'd have told Cadence "I'm leaving."
I don't really have a lot of patience for singing, epecially when it's about major issues in my life.
I'm all for these two taking a break: they say you don't realize what you had until it's gone, and for goodness sakes Twilight really needs to notice just how wrong this whole clusterfuck is.
Spending some time apart is okay, some might argue healthy. Letting a spoiled little brat manipulate and abuse someone you claim to love is unacceptable. Not having him immediately marched to said person's room and apologise to their face is even worse.
Am I the only one who thinks twilight is so angry she's in that state where you are completely psycho killer calm?
Wow, celestia- i mean cadance, that's pretty grim and heavy to dump on a guy after he's already realized a huge mistake he's made.
6360388 didn't think of that, but now that you mention it... it does kinda make sense.
disneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4986585 Agreed.
After that debacle, Fae should have finished having words with Cadence, and gotten on the first train home. A clean cut. Ties severed. Done.
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A story where the mane six actually have consequences for their actions? I would love to see the day.
Now you made me jealous.
Fae needed Twilight, and she wasn't there for him. I'm pretty sure a spouse completely failing to be there for you is a good reason to be upset. Yes, Fae had a breakdown for a few days, big fucking deal. He didn't just stand there and glare at Twi while she was obviously completely miserable. Nor did he ever really complain about being cast aside, but being neglected is not something to just sweep under the rug.
Also, Cadence was being a regal, smug bitch during the morning with her song. He needed compassion, not that bullshit smartass smile of hers. Far be it for someone to be stubborn when he's fucking hurt!
controlled
psycho
Sister
It took me a few moments to figure this part out. For future reference, you should just use the direct letters, like TMI, instead of spelling out their phonetics.
I think he should make a lesson about mind control.
Because songs are worst type of mind control and should be banned.
And this was perfect moment to teleport the fek away, actually. Out say "fuck you" and then teleport away. But neither will lead to anything good. Only darkness.
Man, the anger I felt reading this
And the anger most other readers felt too, judging by the comments...
I really, really hope Omnifarious's anger isn't just swept under the rug, like the rest of his identity and personality.
Literally a possible world ending event... Lets be real, Omniferiouse is not to most stable individual and has very dark tendencies. Twilight made Omniferiouse a better person and ruler.
Ones they would break up there is nothing but pain to follow...
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tbh they should totally break it off they're the fucking worst for each other
I would've just fucking snapped and called for Twilight, and end it in front of her. Tell her I don't like the intervention, and how everything had been revolving around her one second too long. I would've end it by blaming the others, because well, it's mostly true. From what I read, Fae really loves Twilight, but everyone surrounding her had been less than conditional.
It's like taking too much of a burden to love her, but you know you love her too much to make her choose between you and her family. He loves her so much that he's willing to let her go with those that cares for her even more.
Worst of all, I hate how Cadance is sticking her nose up people's ass. I get that she's the alicorn of love, but humanity's version of love is different from a pony's. There may not be a direct intervention like that, else the love feels like a diluted, artificial, obligated junk. Kudos to the author for making me this angery.
I can’t believe there are so many people who wanted it to go poorly… I mean, that is really surprising.
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Twilight is not a good Marefriend