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To be completely honest, I didn't think this chapter was that great. It started out by taking four chapters of "I don't want to have sex as a mare" buildup and just tossing it out by having Fae just decide to give in. So that entire little subplot has apparently amounted to absolutely nothing. And then nothing really happened in the rest of the chapter. Just Fae rambling on and a few small things that will hopefully turn into something interesting in future chapters.
why this? :(
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Care to elaborate?
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Nothing?
oh ye of little faith.
WHERE IS MY DERPY SHRUG ! idk
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Like I said, there were a few small things, like getting the wedding dresses and visiting Twilight's parents. But I'm pretty sure that those things are just there to set things up for future chapters. There wasn't really anything to make this chapter special or interesting on it's own. The climax of this chapter (pun completely intended) was probably supposed to be Fae finally having sex as a mare, but like I said before, it was entirely anticlimactic. In fact, it was so anticlimactic that I suspect that little arc might not actually be over yet.
It's back!!! but now a have to wait some more.
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What did you expect? the whole out-right graphic experience?
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No, I just expected something a bit more monumental than Fae basically saying "Okay, I'm fine with this now. Let's do it." This is like if in Lord of the Rings, after all of Frodo's growing attachment to/obsession with the ring, he had just tossed it into Mount Doom without a second thought. Or if halfway though the prequel to this story, Fae (or whatever we were calling him back then) had just told Twilight he was a changeling and everypony was fine with it. Those aren't perfect examples, but they're the best I can think of right now.
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Yea, I see what you mean, it would have been better if it wasn't for the...
Feels like it could have been better like if "Twilight Sparkle’s look of concern." was replaced by "Twilight Sparkle shoving her head into my crotch.", makes it feel more like a 'caught off guard' type of thing and still feels like something she'd say/think. Still kind of abrupt tho.
on another note: I hope you make
himher a badass teacher that takes shit from no one. Walk into that class room like you own it! 'cause you do.just the way this is said made me laugh
Rereading this and I finally figured it out Self This Velvet writes Daring Do
Yeah, Princess here is Twilight's b*tch...
5597542 lol a.k.y snerk i figured it out when i saw those letters
6051668 glad I'm not the only one
5770456 SHut up Nappa!
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Hah, doesn't realize Yearling....
Ha! He said it!
I'm guessing that was Pinkie on coffee, wonder what trouble she caused, since Equestria, or ponyville, isn't a crater
7731254 It likely weakened Discord's prison
Oh please no, you didn't made them have that heat thing, that makes them so crazy for sex that everything with a cook has much power over any Mare he wants for that time right?
OKay I maybe missunderstood that one, I'm not sure if you did that, or that just many ponies wanted a changeling to transform into Big Mac.
bear
Shining
Misses is the plural of Miss. This should be Missus.
I still remember that day in my dimension. That was a good day, for me anyways.
Me IRL
Celesta moving celestial bodies, entire magic thing and your own digestive system in particular doesn't count as it seems. <_<
Amazing how Twilight can bend a evil insect overlord into a tame sextoy in less than 5 seconds Its also impressive that she helps him/her to be a better person on a daily basis
That's a whole second longer than I thought it would
So she helps Daring/Yearling
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Nahh, she helps him be a better pony. As far as a person goes, he's becoming more of a pushover if any.