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Yay, another chapter! This chapter was actualy better and more interesting then I was expecting it to be, also, no celestia sex! Im happily surprised. So yeah, continue making chapters mate, you're doing a great job.
And the delusions will make it all the more painful when reality sets in and Celestia has a restraining order.
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Enjoying the story, though I do see a few word errors you might want to fix.
If I froze everything I saw something strange, I would have never moved.
every time
My rather angry demanded had only help to hype it up to a new level too.
demand
why do your people have so many names for the mummeries?
I believe that is supposed to be a mammary word but that doesn't really adequately denote breasts as its only a part of them as fat tends to lend to the pleasing shape. Bearing this in mind I'd think she'd ask why there are so many names for breasts if she is using human terms or teats if using pony terms.
I was expecting Fae to say something like "You should be proud of me Twilight; I didn't have sex with Celestia last night!"
Well written and a fun read, as always!
I just have one question...
How the hay does snob end up being the derogatory word for ponies in a male/female relationship for the purpose of breeding? I mean, is it an acronym? Is it because our definition of snobs tend to look down on others not like them?
Snooty Nooky-Obsessed Breeder?
4780391 it's called vendarima man vendarima!
Congratulations, Omni. I think you got petulant foster daughter.
Please don't tell me Harry Potter is leaking into Equestria...
Bipedal locomotion. Also, since human reproduction has an almost perpetual fertile cycle, other indicators are needed (such as breasts) to indicate that the female is sexually mature and viable for mating.
The attraction to breasts is biological, not cultural. It indicates the female is physically mature and ready to mate. Larger breasts mean a female more capable of nursing; firm breasts mean a younger adult female closer to her first cycle. Wide hips (and consequently larger buttocks)=birthing hips.
Multiple names for breasts because of language taboos. Someone would invent a euphemism, others would overuse it till the euphemism itself would become obvious and taboo, then they'd invent another "polite" word to use... it's joked that the average Victorian had so many slang words for a woman's lady parts that you couldn't say a sentence in English without using at least one of them.
I was very confused very confused for a moment.
4780391 Lets just say slang is weird and leave it at that
By all means of the overall idea (What good ever came out of self-inserts?) and editor-less execution that allows typos and some bigger grammatical errors to be common, this should be an awful story.
Then why is it that I can't stop reading and I find it so perfect?
I think I even know. Keep up the good work man, so far it's an endless and also endlessly entertaining story.
Just use the pony spell on Sunset already.
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And what happens if it's incompatible with the transformation already on her, huh? You gonna cast spells all Willy-nilly and cause her to explode?
i desperately want to know the definitions of "trolling" and "trippy" that was told to celestia in equestrian
Haha nice. "Hey Twilight! I just realized you're actually hot!"
Chapter 13. Here in the USA, red hair means hot tempered. (probably because most red hair means Irish ancestry)
I've also read that the Chinese ideogram for trouble is "2 women under 1 roof". Strongly recommend getting Sunset out as fast as possible & talking about her as little as possible. Let Twilight bring it up when possible if you must mention her.
This sounds like a great idea for a story, does anyone know if this is being written or is done.
It would be interesting to see Luna in there as well, to see Luna unable to control the 'dream'
5662556 I have a similar reaction, I don't think everything is perfect, but I keep being curious.
Ideas of beauty are both cultural & individual. Pre WWII, large tits & ass = wealth = upper class because they were the only ones who had the money to eat so much. Remembering, a 1960s model called "Twiggy" was the first "thin is in" type. You look at Miss America winners & playboy centerfolds, they've gotten a LOT thinner the last 3-4 decades. Also, pre WWII, suntans were out & pale indicated you were rich enough to stay indoors. Now, most people work indoors, so a suntan indicates you are rich enough to have the leisure to sun bathe.
Long hair is considered sexier (God knows why). Having had 3 sisters growing up, girls worry about the size of their feet. No idea why on Earth they do, but they do. Having talked about women with a lot of horny guys over the years, feet don't make the cut for "top 5 things guys look at when checking out chicks". Sisters do not believe it when told this.
unicorns'
mammaries
alicornification (alifornication~)
I am loving this, and although I enjoy FaeXTwilight, after this chapter and the whole Oddessey arc, I'm shipping Fae and Celestia so hard right now.
Oh. Nice. You gave Celly ideas.
This chapter changes a lot. Celestia is now a permanent guest in Omniferus mind and when she is resting her body she will be with him... Hope the change dont effect her minds stability. The human mind uses the night to work with memorys ( old and new ), getting rid of stress and stuff...
Hope Celestia feels save being around that lovebug
Magnificent chapter. Since the Hive has a new archiv to access, Changeling & Ponys symbiotic relationship should improve massivly.
Luna might be... Disturbed that Celestia is forced into this...
I thought Fae was going to propose right then…
Background, good