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I loved the chapter.
But for the scorpion and the frog.....
As i recall the scorpion didn't cackle or laugh.
I'm pretty sure they did not even reach the other side of the river.
The scorpion stings the frog halfway through and kills them both "because it is my nature"
But maybe you heard a different version of the story....
Anyway.....
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No that is how it really ends, I and I did point out the fact the main char changed the story to make the scorpion seem all the more devious. Like Discord.
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Ahh.....
I kinda suspected a little but I wasn't sure....
how devious of old Fae....
I expected this whole chatper to be just the dinner with Twi's parents, good to see it was more then that.
Now can we have super badass teacher Fairy?
scared
old
Great chapter. Not the best first impression.
Is Celestia traveling to that dimension a actually story of you'res?
4603640 Its from the MLP comics
...is this a reference to aHiE, or..?
okay, wait a minute... 'twilight's spell', 'twilight's mistake'... Now, I know my memory isn't 'that' bad, but I seem to recall Celestia having a direct hoof in the spell that made him into a female, fucked up his pheromones, and made it a bitch to turn male again, before suddenly spewing an excuse and evacuating the premisis fast enough to avoid the natural rage fit that tends to come when you deliver the magical equivalent of takin a dude's dick away without warning, consent, and knowing full well that 'he' is a 'he' and made it clear that he didn't want to be a mare.
I can totally dig willing transformation, it's one thing if a guy can choose to turn female and back, hell, 'I' would probably experiment with it given the 'choice'... But I am honestly going to lose faith in this story if it suddenly becomes another 'Dude forced to be a chick but he'll just magically become okay with it because probably magical mind-fuck' bullshit.
Oh look, the guy who shows sociopath tendencies seems to hold a misanthropic world view... funny how that works.
She would have tried to turn Princess into a plastic toy or something.
Chapter 5
Twilight, you are a slack twisted idiot for not giving your parents a "heads up" on something this explosive. Yes, it would be a damned awkward thing to reveal, but waiting until you were in public like that? Girl, what WERE you thinking? IMO, the whole mess was 100 % your fault.
4539015 The real ending while the frog is sinking in the middle of the stream the scorpion answers "But my little frog, I can swim" [cite Way of the Scorpion, Legend of the Five Rings]
okay what exactly happened, did Celestia changed the Fay that much, so she only could use that one transformation anymore?
I think I'm okay with different Equestria versions.
It shouldn't have to be in every chapter, it is realy overdone.
While I adore this portmanteau (that I have not seen before, nice one!), I would spell it "awkweird" simply because awkward isn't spelled akward.
Ponyville. Since it was right after the other, it got a hoof pointed at it.
Damn tough chapter Poor Evil Overlord This needs a mature stuff side story Just to complet the universe
Haven't they heard that the changelings are allied with Equestria these days?
Wha... oh right, because alicorns are sterile in this world, almost forgot about that
Switch "frog" and "scorpion" around in this line
Counter question: "Is it hard to get stabbed in the back by the ones you keep giving second chances to all the time?"
(Luna came back and tried to cause eternal night, Discord broke free and caused chaos, Chrysalis was given multiple chances to cooperate, Sombra came back and tried to take over the Crystal Empire, and in the future Tirek will come back and try to drain all magic from Equestria again and Discord will betray you to him)
No Celestia, it doesn't work like that. Faith is one thing, trust is another. You can have faith that someone won't stab you in the back, but only after a long and arduous process of knowing each other and socialization that you can finally trust someone to not stab you in the back. Faith is letting someone enter your house. Trust is letting them wander as they please.
I find this really fascinating, how different the pony society and human is. Ponies see faith and trust as the same thing, while in humanity it's a different thing.
Great worldbuilding.
She does a little bit of trolling
Counterpoint, it may be the scorpions nature to sting, but that doesn't mean it will. I may be unable to control my nature, but I remain in control of my actions.
Stop asking stupid questions, what ifs don't exist