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Another chapter! So nice of you.
Well I would tell the griffins to bite me. What are they going to do against the ones who raise the sun and the moon, with the God of Chaos on their side? (Woe be those who upset or hurt Fluttershy while he's on friendly terms with her...)
As a thought, couldn't Twilight cast a spell to help Derpy's eyes focus just for the qualifiers? It's not technically cheating, just a form of magical glasses for the grey mare. Not much can be done about Fluttershy though.
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Oh how little you understand politics, absolute power does not make for good relationships. The Griffon Kingdom is an ally. You don't tell your ally to go blow themselves over an event that is ment to foster good will and friendship, just so your hometown can field a ringer from somewhere else. The Griffons fought claw and feather to earn a right to play in a pony only event. For Equestria to turn around and hand the privilege over to a relatively new ally and once former enemy would be really bad for Equestria in the long run. These kind of slights have started wars. And even if no conflict results, any decent good will built with the Griffons will fly right out the window. That like Years of diplomatic efforts flushed down the toilet. All so Twilight's mare friend can play athlete.
I don't see why they just don't use an eye patch. Magic may be forbidden but Pinky should have some stashed somewhere for Eye patch emergencies.
The story is really well constructed (other than a few spelling errors). You have the right amount of action and mystery, and the characters are portrayed in a way that forces the reader to believe they're real. Nice job!
A little late, but:
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4951847 Exactly. it's Called Equestria games not whatever the planet is called games. Thus the only ones who should compete are Equestrian's and since the treaty Changelings are now Equestrians thus can compete. this was a bullcrap move and Celestia knows it.
5334866 Gassy Mexican?
Yeah the Wonderbolts are... kind of disappointing.
4952538 however, you miss a key point. the changelings are a part of Equestria now. LEGALLY they shouldn't be banned, and the no magic rule is a bust since Pegasi need magic to fly. Seriously this is a very weak and convoluted reason to not have Fae in and still have the key.
New drink'ing game:
Every time you see the word rainbow in this chapter, take a shot.
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You mean shit tier, like god awful
Oh...well Fae, get to laying eggs, it's time to go to war with the griffons. Who's butts have become so tight even letting fair competition happen gets them butthurt.
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"hey tia"
"yes fae?"
"im gonna go to war with the griffons"
"ok"
"night tia"
there,
okay,
estimate,
cartoon
Midnight
brakes
Derpy's
Ahh the best kind of traitors
...yeah
....Fae did you mess around with any ancient dark magic artifacts before leaving?
Just give her an eyepatch and she should be fine, I mean yes she'll lose her depth perception but at least she won't get splitvision at the worst time... unless she has problems with both her eyes
Tough luck... O well... Its not the end of the world
Damn Griffons ... Time for Omniferiouse to breed a assasin Squad and kill of there Royalty
Great chapter