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I busted my gut laughing when rainbow dash said "down with the wonder bolts" keep up the excellent writing! If I could give order to my favorite stories this would be somewhere in my top 10 or 5.
Good scene of character`s development. Never knew that Omni could have such side - virtue of selfishess. Good job with incorporation in next episode
Love it!
Can't wait for more, as always.
I think I enjoyed the message you gave in this chapter way more than the message given in the actual episode. You were able to convey the episode in a more "realistic" way compared to some of the confusing mannerisms that was portrayed in Rainbow Falls. Your story deserves more views, keep up the good work! ^_^
4958505 I second this.
4958505 i agree
I bet with Derpy she will get the Gold in this universe. Derpy is much faster than Bulk Biceps and Spitfire barely won with Bulk there so with derpy. Rainbow gets gold.
This chapter was awesome.
hmm... see the problem?
clench.
signal
betties
choose
fourteen
Hmmmm... Was it sexy? Yeah, I don't think you're staying out of that uniform forever. Cheerleading Director Twilight will probably have something to say about that...
The most terrifying being in Equestria... is he Princess of Food?
Damn... Didnt see the End coming...
Love how Celestia solved that problem
I gotta say, his relationship with twilight isnt the uh... best? Could see him leaving her for rainbow or MAYBE celestia