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Applejack tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders about how Lyra and Bon-Bon first met and got their cutie marks.

No sex, no eroticism, just cuteness. Written for the /co/ Valentine's Day ship off way back in 2011.

Illustration by my dear friend Auraion/CANDYBAG.

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knighty
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Talk about a blast from the past.

More old Sundae stories, yay! <3

Holy SHIT this was epic! So fucking cute! Another great story Sundea, keep it up girl! You kick ass!

"Ah reckon y'all much more interested in hearin' about ponies yah know about rather than some original character...":ajsmug:
I see what you did there.
Nice story :)

I love it. :heart:

Very well written; it kept me in the story until the end. :pinkiesmile:

Read it on EqD when it was posted there, but there's only one thing that needs to be changed. Seeing as the holiday is now known as 'Hearts and Hooves' Day, methinks it should be edited as such.

Other than that, it was good to read it again.

Isn't the implication here that Rarity is one of the schoolhouse bullies? Either that, or she and Applejack are sufficiently different in age that she didn't go to school at the same time. It's canon (Cutie Mark Chronicles) that Rarity went to the Ponyville schoolhouse, and that she and Cheerilee were students there at the same time. While Rarity was in school, however, Applejack was striking out for Manehattan. I always figured that AJ, being a farm pony, was home schooled or had no formal education. I doubt Rarity would ever be a bully (a snob, perhaps, but not a bully).

Good story, regardless of the above.

Well... that was an interesting back story. Original, yet familiar. Good work:scootangel:

Aww, this was one of the first Butterscotch stories I ever read. :pinkiesmile:

...was quite a shock when I found the rest of them. :trollestia: Love'm all though, but this story will always have a place in my heart. :twilightsmile:

Well, that was cute. :heart:

374308 And surely Rarity would also pity Bon-bon's state of poverty. Generosity and all that. Must've been a different unicorn.

Also, great story. Loved the hints at the end. Have a moustache: :moustache:

Awwww.... That was sweet! I can tell from an earlier comment that your stories are usually clop-fics, but you have a special talent for these little sweet stories as well. My favorite background pony from the show would be Lyra, just because I keep stumbling upon good Lyra stories

Oh my Celestia, the cuteness. I can't take it. Thank you for brightening my day.:twilightsmile:

I was totally gonna do a Lyra meets Bon fic... I forgot about this... Idea crashed to the dirt... Doesn't matter you blew my idea out of the water... hmmmm Where are the rest of your older fics?

One of the best MLP fanfics I've ever :pinkiehappy:read! I'm just gonna pop this into my favorites, if you don't mind.

What's good about this (or one of the things) is that my brain went to "This is what really happened" mode. Seriously, I can see this happening. Good job.

cute ^_^ could have used a bit of romance to make it perfect though :3

A wonderful little story! I especially loved how you kept the majority of the narrative in Applejack's dialect.

Adorable little story. Love it. ^__^

374149 HEY!!! Sparkle Sparkle Sparkle!

wow. this was awesome!

Great story! I liked this alot, great job.

"Ah reckon y'all much more interested in hearin' about ponies yah know about rather than some original character..."

Scootaloo nodded enthusiastically. "You got THAT right!""

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This was very good, favourited. :twilightsmile:

great story, is amazing how this can be real... i can imagine this in the 3 season as a whole episode!!! :yay::yay:

good work , really cool story, gotta love LyraBon fics :heart:

SO GREAT ! keep writing stuff like that please ! :fluttercry:

Will we get to see the rest of that 'story' ? :twilightsheepish:

great story, great story, keep them coming!

huzzah for omniscient applejack

On a more serious note, this was one of the cutest things I've read :heart:

I'm not a fan of the romance in MLP (flutterdash,twijack,ect) but lyra and bon bon are the cutest couple ever

Well-written, composed, and really darn cute. I missed some of the classics from joining the fandom a bit late. Thanks so much for posting this!

Lyra's eyes went wide. "You're the first person I ever played my lyre to!" she realised. "Before that, I only ever played for myself or for my mom!"

Lyra said "person"? She was an anthropologist even in her fillyhood!

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