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When Pinkie Pie accidentally brings some fermented apple juice to Twilight Sparkle's latest sleepover, a game of spin-the-bottle ensues... with sexy results.

The first long shipping-story I ever wrote.
Illustration by boss-hoss.

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Comments ( 61 )

I found this story really amusing. LOL at the drunken ponies.

butterscotch story i haven't read?

must read.

Butterscotch you are evil, but in the best posible way. That was fun. Do it again, do it again. Please.

#4 · Jan 17th, 2012 · · ·

I'm glad this story is on FiMFiction. :twilightsmile:

Everytime I read it makes me laugh and smile. :rainbowlaugh:

Pretty well written, hilarious one-shot!

Hah! This story slaps me on the knee! :rainbowlaugh:
And I love the Pinkie/Twilight going on in there.
Another great story. :twilightsmile:

A riveting read, you had me captivated all the way through.

I hope there is a sequel.

btw i found a grammar mistake in
"WOW! You're bag's MUCH comfier than MINE is."

I see WOW! You're =You are | U need Your:unsuresweetie:

Rarity, "Hmmm... I feel like I missed something important..."

Very funny fic :)
Also, Stalliongrad. STALLIONGRAD!

Awesome story! I like how you managed to have a drunken romance scene without it getting trashy or clopfic-ish. Good job. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! I missed that one. :pinkiegasp: It's been fixed. :twilightsheepish:

great fic nuff said

lol flutterdash and a twi x pinkie... interesting... i wonder who twi's crush was tho...

138669 Its not twi x pinkie! Its Twinkie :rainbowlaugh:

Mmmm.... Twinkie....

Mmmm.... Twinkie....

yes that was me....

Butterscotch, you crafty evil fanfic genius, you. :moustache:

Making me read Twinkie ships... grumble grumble...

poor rarity misses out on all the fun :raritydespair:

i hope to see more flutterdash!!

wonderful!
:pinkiehappy::twilightoops:
:twilightsheepish::pinkiegasp:
:ajsleepy::facehoof:

amazing! more words would arrive if I had the capacity. I'm all out of colorful vocabulary. Amazing story ^.^:twilightsmile:

That was pretty wicked. Pinkie talking got very, very irritating...but, I guess that was intentional, since it WAS Pinkie Pie...and they were technically drunk. Applejack and Twilight kissing was hilarious and adorable; I love that couple. Rainbow Dash and Gilda being mentioned doing truth or dare...and then being mentioned doing what Pinkie does to Twilight...who would be the aggressor in that case? I imagine Gilda; her dominating Dashie is a sexy thought. :rainbowderp:

Eh-hem, anyway...Pinkie and Twilight are SO adorable together. It's really hard to say who should be with Twilight, given that she fits very well with each of the other mane five ponies, but I really do love her with Pinkie. It's just so adorable every time they're in the same scene together! The ending with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy...very silly and incredibly cute, too. Dash being all male-like to the scared Fluttershy and acting like, "Aw, baby, don't be that way; you know you liked it"...was freaking hilarious. I don't really LIKE the pairing, but...it can be cute. :yay:

There were only minor errors, but I can't even remember them, so overall it was a very good story that I read from start to finish as soon as I clicked on it. Five stars for you, and I'm glad you didn't go into a all-out clop-fic and you kept it...PG-13, to say the least. Sometimes, more is less, and this worked out perfectly the way you executed it. A cute little one-shot. Nice work. :pinkiesmile:

A good read man, this was cute and it's a perfect mix between friendshipping and clop. Not too much but didn't leave the readers hanging. I also found the ending hilarious between RD and Fluttershy. No need to explain that one. :twilightsheepish:

In the end, great read and grats on featured story. :yay:

it feels odd reading a story like this. and i love every minute of it. great story, funny as hell ( in my view) and very romantic in a odd way. :twilightsmile:

"Twilight drank it down, and all about her was the heat of Pinkie's body, the cottonball softness of her pink mane that draped itself over their flush faces, and the smell of bubblegum and cottoncandy and popcorn."

This isn't a clopfic? :duck: LIKE HELL IT'S NOT! LMAO THIS IS AWESOME (I'm not clopping... But still, that's epic.

Butterscotch, why U make hot stories?
I liked this.

Woooo! That was an awesome fic. Keep it coming. :o

ok um :derpyderp2::derpyderp2: all I got too say is. Da buck? :derpyderp2:

I saw this on the upper "featured" thingamajig, or whatever it's called, and decided to check it out... and then I saw you were the author and went "okay! New stuff to read!" xD

Excellent story =D

Also; dat implied assertiveshy. xD

139397 That's his reading face. When he begins reading, he yells out "Yeah, Books! I love them so darn much!" He then puts on this face and reads until he is in a word-induced coma.

*bearly standing up with a bottle of vodka in my hand*
someponies *hic* just drunk more then they can *hic* handle hic*
*passes out*
(really though good story, made me lol at them being drunk even though i'm a drunk myself:rainbowlaugh: )

That was awesome. Hafta do that with ma friends. I hope that there'll be more women than men.

What the fuck did I just read? Wait... DID FLUTTERSHY AND RAINBOW DASH JUST... *scrunch's up like paper* *muffled* OH GOD! This is the most weirdest thing I read! FAV!!! 5 STARS! *back to normal* Someone kill me...

i have to admit if your into shipping then butterscotch is the god of fanfics :moustache:

although i dont really approve of shipping's because a majority of the cast is female sooo :derpytongue2: but hey thats just my opinion keep doing what your doing :pinkiehappy: even though i dont appreciate shipping that much your still an amazing writer butterscotch :rainbowkiss:

amzing stories all round and this is one of the funnier ones :eeyup: :rainbowlaugh:

Funny story :rainbowlaugh:
"Some where a little shrivelled and had seen better days." - were :twilightangry2:

lol funny ending is funny :rainbowlaugh:

awesome! but i still wanna know who twilight had a crush on :applejackunsure:

if twi says she likes luna I'm gonna shoot her...meh
*sees what pinkie's dare is* *sigh* shiza
man what is right with you! this is awesome
*sees last part* Yooooooooohhh!!!

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