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Thy Kink is Murder
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God help us all..... what have we created?!?!
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God can't help us now. One look at this story, and he ran
What.
I would like a sample of whatever drugs you two are taking . . .
I... don't know how to feel about this.
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Neither do I, and I helped write the damn thing
3951305 thank you!
3951329 i couldnt stop laughing when writing this
Also, so much confusion to be had over which "juices" were which, and who they belonged to.
Wwwwwwhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttt.
Okay, I have no clue what just happened, but I'm sure it was something funny. Gimme a moment to restart my brain.
If she gets pregnant from this, will she give birth to one of those little juice boxes?
stream1.gifsoup.com/view/29552/bullard-kool-aid-man-o.gif
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ill admit, i burst out laughing reading that comment. don't know why...
woke my dad up, wasn't happy lol.
I came here to -- uh, went into this -- damn. uh... browsed this story for uh... ahem, comedic purposes... ahem ahem
also, I was the 69th viewer.
OH YEAH!
3951582 yea, when I thought of the the intro for this story, that was the exact scene I had in mind!
Welp, can't unsee Kool-Aid Man's penis now. Thanks for that.
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That would be ridiculous. It'll be a Kool Aid Burst.
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You're welcome
wat
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Yeah. Whenever I see a picture of him bursting through a wall, I'll just imagine it. Just... dangling there...
As punishment, I'm going to point out all of your mistakes. Know the wrath of a proofreader!
Her and her lover
- Should be "She and her".
red liquid burst
- Need a comma after "liquid" to mark the end of a parenthetical phrase.
contained passion, and lust Trixie lunged her fruity lover. Sweet
- No comma after "passion".
- Comma after "lust" to offset the introductory element.
- Should be "lunged at" or "lunged for".
- A comma instead of a period after "lover", as the second sentence is a continuation of the thought in the first.
cool classy surface
- Should probably be "cool glassy surface"
sweet, and sugary juices
- No comma after "sweet".
mare's advances the Kool-Aid
- Comma after "advances" for an introductory element.
lover's touch. As she
- Should be a single sentence.
“
Oh,
- Quotation mark on separate line from dialogue.
around her lovers
- Apostrophe in "lover's".
a beat Kool-Aid
- Comma after "beat" for an introductory element.
clenching, and releasing
- No comma after "clenching".
each thrust, and every
- No comma after "thrust".
or two Kool-Aid’s juices
- Comma after "two" for an introductory element.
“Well...” Mumbled Trixie
- "Mumbled" shouldn't be capitalized.
home ”I better
- Missing period after "home".
- Quotation mark faces the wrong direction.
comes along”
- Missing final period.
...but aside from those mistakes, it was surprisingly good clop. You know, for being an unspeakable act between a magical cartoon pony and a living beverage advertisement.
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Not mine! Whenever I think of the Kool-Aid man, I think of this comic.
applegeeks.com/comics/issue187.jpg
(I'm the Juggernaut, bitch!
Surprised. I'm surprised that this was your next venture, holy shit you wrote clop. Bravo, just bravo!
So, stuff like this happens to Trixie often?
What the actual funk?
Also, good story.
kool aid has never been sold in the uk....ever
TheWraithWriter's Answering Machine: Zeppelin has read this story and quite possibly fried a number of circuits doing so. I demand more.
~Am_Z
This is the best story about a cartoon pony having sex with a living pitcher of Kool-Aid that I've ever read. Fantastic work. I tip my proverbial hat to you.
This was my first clop fic to read on my own and I'm glad it wasn't titty sparkle. This was funny so keep... Up the good work?
Oh MY GERD
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4185619 So much my, So wow, Much Kool-laid,, so yes... Again OH MAH GERD
Oh god I came back to this.
I mean, reviewed by the Pleasant Commentator and Review Group!
I know EXACTLY why I have this boner.
Just going to put this here....
th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/152/0/c/drink_your_kool_aid_by_johnjoseco-d3htnso.jpg
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I wanna lick that spoon
5003937 That...makes so much sense...and is also so funny! XD
Kool-aids
i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/640/167/1f2.gif
Why must you ruin my childhood? Now I'm never going to be able to think of kool-aid again without feeling dirty...
Truly a masterpiece of today's modern art. I couldn't have done it better myself.
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Cant believe you read this antiquated collab between Jake and ms, lol.
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Hey... Look where it is now
I got cool AIDS because I read this.