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Monoboomatic


People tell me I'm just like Rarity. Except for the social skills. And the vocabulary. And the generous spirit. And the fashion sense and finesse. Actually, I'm nothing like Rarity.


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For Twilight Sparkle, the increased lifespan that came with princesshood had forced her to outlive most of her beloved friends and her special somepony. However, a simple spell to go back in time and the determination not to interfere with past events would be all she needed to get one last glimpse and finally move on.

Unfortunately, or perhaps fortunately, her plans never tend to go as expected, and she would learn that centuries could be lived in but a single day.


Cover art by The-Chibster. Graphic Design by Novel-Idea.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 226 )

I personally didn't find anything wrong with it, this story is great! I haven't seen a sad immortal Twilight fic where she goes back in time before. Definitely worthy of a favourite! :twilightsmile:

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Ah, thank you! I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the favourite! :pinkiehappy:

It was very good... You've got a like and a watch from me ;)

Good story amigo. If you would be so kind, please enter this piece into the RariTwi Creation Contest: Round Two.

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Ahh, thanks!! I'm really glad people are liking it!

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Thank you!! And will do! I wasn't sure if I should submit it there because I'm still a new writer here whoops

3931302 Actually, I love new writers in the contest. And it helps that your story is pretty good. Keep it up.

altho i don't always enjoy sad moments of any kinda :fluttershysad:; i have to say that this was a pretty interestin fic so far n' i can't wait for moar to read :pinkiehappy:

this story is plain awesome n' even tho it's sad at times :pinkiesad2:; but, if u keep to ur hopefully fore-shadowin bit on future :twilightsmile:'s return to her own timeline then she might be just fine in t long run :ajsmug:

Awwe its over already? IT JUST STARTED!!!!

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oh my god nO, it's not over!! I forgot to put the "To Be Continued" at the end hahaha whoops

I guess I made the end of chapter a little *too* dramatic

But no, rest assured, there's still more to come. :D

I just wanted to say that this story is absolutely amazing. This is the first story I've read on this site to draw me in so quickly and give me so many feelings!

4016900 Ah!! Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it!! :twilightsmile:
There hasn't been an update soon because I've been out of the country this week, so I've only had time to write in little intervals. And, unfortunately, my writing style isn't linear so I've written a lot but of different sections of the story whoops

I'm hoping to at least post an update by the beginning of next week.

Thanks again for your comment!! c:

And thus, we have this stories first problem. I can only upvote it once. Damned fine chapter amiga, keep it up.

that was simply adorkable :pinkiehappy:; luved how :raritywink: n' future :twilightblush:'s 2nd first date is goin so far :yay:. Also glad that :twilightsmile:'s lettin :duck: ask stuff on future events after her passin :pinkiesad2:; altho it mak me wonder what :twilightsheepish: will/will not say durin that :applejackunsure: but, it'll hav to wait til u're ready to deliver t next chappie :ajsmug:

I don't care if Twilight is cannonically mortal. The immortality shtick is too much fun.

A bit of a kinky lesbo chapter dot ya think?

LOOOOOOVVVVEEEE IITTTT!!

4185384 I was going to embarrassedly justify that scene, but then I realized I HAVE NO REGRETS.

"Imposing her royal privileges?" This could end quite poorly for Rarity.

Dem feels man, dem feels... :fluttercry: :raritydespair:

I'm gonna die of feels now. Got half way through and have been sniffling since.

aww..twilight wants to hold on to the memories huh

Aw man at first i was uber sad for these two since one was unfortunely gettin ready to die while t other would be blissfully un-ware til i'm guessin was a few days after t bittersweet event passed but, i did lik that rares got a unexpected visit again from future twi tho. Which after some catchin up n' stayin near each other til a certian mare's end; Twi went back "home" to her timeline to put together her own endin soon n' to finally get a chance to be with those she first befriended n' to extent forever luved again :pinkiesad2:. So, in short (too late :rainbowlaugh:) thx for t lovely sweet n' sour ride :twilightsmile:

This was a beautifully written piece of fiction. I am not one for shipping, but this story was so well done that I looked past that and enjoyed reading this. Have a like and a fave good sir/ma'am. :twilightsmile:

4336704 Ah, thank you! It means a lot, particularly that you liked it enough to look past the shipping. Thank you so much for your comment, as well as the favourite and like! :twilightsmile:

This was an amazing story. The pulling of the readers heart stings was masterfully done. This was beautiful and though I cried through most if it, it has become a favorite of mine. Thank you for posting this wonderful story. I look forward to more RareLight stories (or just stories in general really) from you.

Beautiful story, mate. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Thank you so much!! :twilightblush: It means a lot to me that you liked it so much (and sorry for the crying :P ). At the moment, I'm still toying with what proceeds next. I'd like to write a new story, but no idea so far has really inspired me like the idea for this one did. Hopefully, though, inspiration will strike soon! Thank you again for your comment and your support. It is greatly appreciated. :twilightsmile:

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Ah, thank YOU for reading and faving it! It's the readers that help me continue with my writing! :D

This was amazing, AND THE FELLS BRUH :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Wow. Just wow. Excellent story, very well-written. So many feels. Cried through half of it. Gonna have a hard time keeping this out of my headcanon from now on.

Well done!

This story made me cry.

A lot.

In the best ways.:pinkiesad2:

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Ehehe I'm glad you liked it! XD Thank you for the favorite and sorry for making you... happy cry? :twilightsheepish:


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Ahhh, thank you!! It means a lot! I'm really glad you liked it, and sorry for the late reply whooops

And now, this one's turn.... After some sleep.

This one was beautiful in conception and execution, and hit me hard emotionally. It's quickly becoming a favorite pairing of mine, and I certainly hope that S5 will treat us to more interaction between Princess Twilight and Rarity.

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She shook her heard.

Head? :derpytongue2:

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Whoops! Thank you for pointing that out! :twilightblush:

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Oh, I know, but I thought it’d be a nice.

Be a what? :derpytongue2:

Well, you do make it difficult when you already know everything in advanced

Should be "advance", I think.

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I've chosen the worst week to read this. It's finals week for me, and I've been lured in with your AU Rarilight fic.

I guess I'm a glutton for punishment. Sad fics aren't usually my deal, but I read this entire thing in one go. Excellent work.

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Ahhhh thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!!

And THANK YOU for the grammar/spelling corrections!!! I haven't been able to get a proper beta-reader, so I really appreciate the help. I'm not at my house at the moment, so I'll have to correct them in a few days when I have my computer back, but really thank you!

This would have been an amazing place to end it. I could feel the little, underused strings in my heart twinging.

I grace you with your 69th like, good sir :moustache:
good job. I cried a lot. And I don't usually cry to horse romance.

4525986 Ah, thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!!

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I love you for making that blog post recommending this story.

I already planned to read it sometime but I am glad I read it today

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And thank you for writing this :)

4526170 You're whalecum, bby. Thank this guy, though.

Beat me to it.

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just edited the post.

Pressed add to soon

I havent....I can't....:fluttercry: Just....*Breaks out crying*

4526170 Ah, I'm glad you liked it!! :D

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